Alzia SS 'The Malik Of Sultan's Heart' last part pg 32 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
I am a silent reader but i JUST HAD TO TYPE IN HERE as well

Epic just epic !!!!! You are a great writer (but offcourse you already knew that ;) )

But my real reason for writing to you is that

PLEASEEE PLEASEEE PLEASEEE PLEASEEE update the rest !!!! My heart skips a beat everytime i read this...pls update it soon...

cant wait to read the rest and keep up the excellent job !
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: arshia200

I am a silent reader but i JUST HAD TO TYPE IN HERE as well

Epic just epic !!!!! You are a great writer (but offcourse you already knew that ;) )

But my real reason for writing to you is that

PLEASEEE PLEASEEE PLEASEEE PLEASEEE update the rest !!!! My heart skips a beat everytime i read this...pls update it soon...

cant wait to read the rest and keep up the excellent job !

aww thank u😳 i'll be updating very soon maybe today itself, but u have to comment on each part from now okayπŸ˜› πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Heyy offcourse I will... you are an amazing writer and I seriously think you and the one who wrote Alzia 21st century romance wala story should join hands and write a book together ... im sure u guys will end up becoming millionaires !
I have a small request if thats not too much...I can understand you might be caught up in other stuffs and need time to think about what to update in the next chapters and all but pleaseee try and doing it a little sooner...u see these r so amazing that I could literally read it for hours and hours !
Really thank u so much for giving us these amazing short stories. ... God bless and cant wait for the rest !πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshia200

Heyy offcourse I will... you are an amazing writer and I seriously think you and the one who wrote Alzia 21st century romance wala story should join hands and write a book together ... im sure u guys will end up becoming millionaires !

I have a small request if thats not too much...I can understand you might be caught up in other stuffs and need time to think about what to update in the next chapters and all but pleaseee try and doing it a little sooner...u see these r so amazing that I could literally read it for hours and hours !
Really thank u so much for giving us these amazing short stories. ... God bless and cant wait for the rest !πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

aww sure actually i wasbz with exams so the updates were on a long hault πŸ˜† u can read my previous ss for more if u want😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part_4

Razia was sitting on a large swing, lost in thoughts, Shazia sat by her side

Shazia; Razia ye dekho humne kadhai ki he

Razia didn't respond

Shazia; Razia (she shook her) kin kayalon me gum ho tum

Razia; aapi, aapke saath kabhi esa hua he? k jise bht arse se jaante hon, achanaq wo anjana lage, jise roz dekhte hon, use dekhne ka nazaria badal sa jaye, subah sawera hte hi uske liye dil me saare jazbaat hi badal jayen, koi apna begana lage koi begana apna lage

Shazia; RAzia? ye kesi baaten kr rhi ho tum?

Razia; kya aapi btaiye na, Atigin bhai sahab k saath aapko mohobbat kese hui?

Shazia; mohobbat? Razia tum to jaanti ho hamara niqah kese hua tha hamen to aaj bhi unse mohobbat nahi hai

Razia; acha! chodiye..humen na wo mirza ki shayari ki hawa lag gai he kuch bhi bolne lagte hen hum bhul jaiye jo bhi humne kaha

Fatima came to her

Fatima; Kafila rawangi k liye tayar he Sultan

Razia; aate hen hum

Razia went to see off Yaqut and the soldiers, Altunia came to stand by her side

Altunia; duayen padh k phuk dijiye, aur taweez bhi baandh dijiye , aur dekhiye in aansoon ko behne dijiye Sultan, hum smjh skte hen aapke dil ka haal

Razia; Mirza? aap ka dimag to thikane he na? sipahi jung pe jayenge to Sultan k aankhon se ansoo kyun ayenge

Altunia; baat sipahiyon ki nahi, aapke khas dost akele jung krne ja rhe hen isiliye aap...

Razia; aap hamen tang krne ka ek bhi moqa nhi chodenge na

Altunia; nahi, jab aapko ghussa ata he na, aapke gaal aur naak laal ho jate hen aur aap dunya ki sabse khoobsoorat pari lagti hen

Razia blushed and smiled a little

Altunia; haaaye

Razia; kuch kaha aapne?

Altunia; nahi hum to bas saans le rhe the

Razia; lashkar ja chuka he chaliye ab yahan se

she left smiling, Altunia kept staring at her till she was gone, Zaroon came to him

zaroon; miyaan aaj kal tumhare mijaaz badle badle se lag rhe hen

Altunia; nahi to hum to wese hi hain, miyaan zaroon badal to tum gye ho aaj kal humse milte hi nahi

Zaroon; chodiye miyan, tevar khud badal k hum pe ilzam laga rhe ho, hum dekh rhe hen koi maamla dil me ghar kre betha he tumhare

Altunia; mamla nahi wo to ek khwaab he

Zaroon; acha to tum ne khwab dekhna shuru krdiye aur hamen btaya tak nhi, pehle to chidte the khwabon se aap

Altunia; wo kya hai na miyan, kuch khwab apni taraf aise mutawaja krdete hen k na chahte huye bhi dekhne padhte hen

ZAroon; deewane to tum the hi ab pagla gye ho shayad, khair hum chalte hen

Altunia; haan miyan jao humen pata he tumhara rukh kahan he

Zaroon; humare haath bhi na aapki lagam jald lagne wali he, bach k rahiyega

Altunia; haan haan dekh lenge aapko

At night Razia was lying in her bed staring at the ceiling blindly.

Razia; ye hamen achanaq kya hogya he kuch ajeeb hi mehsoos hone lga he, ya mere Maula madat kr
hum ye sb kyun soch rhe hen, so jao Razia, tum Sultan ho tumhen bht zaruri kaam hen.

THe next morning Razia got ready and walked out of her room when suddenly she was grabbed by a strong arm, and the next thing she knew was alot of powder on her face.

Razia; ye kya he chodo hamen

She opened her eyes and her eyes met his big green ones, she was lost for a moment, but then she realized the situation and tried to push him, but she was hold captive in his arms strongly

Razia; ye kya kr rhe hen aap?

Altunia; bura na maano holi hai

Razia; kya??

Altunia; arre holi he..hindu bradri ka aaj khaas din he aapko pta nhi kesi sultan hen aap

Razia; hamen pta he..pr aap ye rang hamen kyun laga rhe hen

ALtunia; wo kya he na, hindu dasiyon ne hamen kaha k sultanate k raja sabse bade hte hen aur unhe rang lagane k baad hi sb ko rang lagana chahiye ab bada raja na sahi ye choti si komal galon wali narm mulaim sultan hi hai to isi se kaam chalana hoga

Razia; hum naram mulayam nhi hen

Altunia; acha? (he pinched her cheek) awwllelele kitni pyaari he hamari sultan

Razia; mirza chodiye hamen

Altunia; nhi chodenge

He applied more color on her. Razia snatched the color from him and applied on his face too, his red was all red with color now, he instantly let her go

Altunia; ye kya kiya aapne

Razia started laughing loudly

Razia; bilkul bandar lag rhe hen aap...ab aapki wo deewaniyan aapko dekhengi na to behosh hojayengi

Altunia pulled her close and taking her dupatta he wiped his face

Razia; ye kya kiya aapne

ALtunia; aapki chunari rang di humne

Razia; aap na...hum qatl krdenge aapka

Altunia; rehne dijiye mohtarma, pichle kai salon se aap keh rhi he pr hamen pta he qatl to door ki baat aap humen ek kharoch tak nhi pohncha skti hen

Razia; Maalik gareebi de galat fehmi na de, abhi aapko kharoch pohncha k aapki sari galat fehmiyan door kr dete hen

she started hitting him with her hands

Altunia; aaah

Razia; kya hua zor se lagi kya, kahan lagi?

Altunia started laughing

Razia; has kyun rhe hen aap?

Altunia; chehra dekhiye apna, mohtarma aap kyun wo dikhana chahti hen jo k hai nhi

Razia; aap se baat krna hi fazool he, hum ja rhe hen, abhi hi nahaye the aapki wja se phir nahana padega

she left in anger, Altunia kept smiling, she turned to see him and he winked, she turned back and left.

Altunia; Rang di chunar humne ishq k rang se, wo waqt door nhi jab mehbooba bhi rang jayegi
Edited by overactor - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Omg omg omg from where did u learn amazing shayari like mirza yaaar ???? Too good just too good...in ur other SS the moonlight one also the shayaris were so amazing that I re-read them 4 to 5 timesπŸ˜ƒ. My personal fav in this update was 'sojao razia tum sultan ho tumhe bohot se kaam hai'πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Amazing work of writing ! Keep going im just dying to read more and more...hope it continues till their marriage scenes atleast. And yes keeep the shayari work also going im just loving them...

Update sooonie ! Love u.
yaaay u made my night now ill sleep peacefully
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Ek aur baat...u portray every character with such amazing perfection that ki when im reading them I can hear the real tv wale mirza, razia and zaroon etc talking in my head.
You are awesome !
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: arshia200

Omg omg omg from where did u learn amazing shayari like mirza yaaar ???? Too good just too good...in ur other SS the moonlight one also the shayaris were so amazing that I re-read them 4 to 5 timesπŸ˜ƒ. My personal fav in this update was 'sojao razia tum sultan ho tumhe bohot se kaam hai'πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Amazing work of writing ! Keep going im just dying to read more and more...hope it continues till their marriage scenes atleast. And yes keeep the shayari work also going im just loving them...

Update sooonie ! Love u.
yaaay u made my night now ill sleep peacefully

aww thank u, the moon light one is ria's not mine 😳
shayari ka kya he mohtarma bas hojati heπŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† dnt worry abhi to bas shuruwaat he picture abhi baaqi he mere dostπŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: arshia200

Ek aur baat...u portray every character with such amazing perfection that ki when im reading them I can hear the real tv wale mirza, razia and zaroon etc talking in my head.

You are awesome !

that's so sweet of u, am glad my writing resembles the originals😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oops my bad. Im new here na so its a little hard to keep up about who's who here...I just know u guys by your screen id names. But hey that means not just you, sooo many people here can do such amazing shayaris waaao !! Yeh sab mirza ka asar hai shayad hehe !πŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒ...glad to have found a forum and people who are as crazy about ALZIA as me...yaaay
Update soonie ! Will be waiting...haaye yeh intezaar bhi apne aap mein ek qatal hai...πŸ˜›
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