AlZia SS 'The Malik's prisoner wife' Part 10 page 17 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Astoria

I am loooving it,SonuπŸ˜ƒ I will give this update 10/10πŸ‘πŸΌ.So,I get it now.Razia's mohabbat was always her Ikhu😳.Sooo,sweeet!!! Yipppeee!!!!!!!

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Overall,it was a cute update.I am really loving you for giving us a dose of Alzia on a regular basis😳 whereas the show makes us wait sooo much.😭

And,as usual,my regular compliments for you Sonu Ma'am and that is AFSAW(Awesome-Fabulous-Splendid-Amazing-Wonderful).πŸ€—

i didn't reply so u thought im angryπŸ˜† i love u πŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
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Chanda and Fatima came to Razia with sad faces.

"kya hua tum dono ke mun pe baara kyun baj rhe hen?" she asked worried

"wo..wo mehel ki baandhiyan" Fatima hesitated

"kya hua unhe?"

they exchanged looks

"humse bola bhi nahi jaa rha he, wo" Fatima was too hesitant

"btao hamen baat kya he" Razia stood up

"wo..wo sab keh rhi hen ke aap ke aur subedaar sahab ke beech k taaluq theek nahi to wo.."

"wo kya?"

"wo dusra niqaah kr hi lenge" Fatima finally said it.

Razia was shocked, she sat down, she forgot to breath. Fatima and chanda sat down with her.

"aap, aap theek to hen?" Fatima asked

"Hum...apni narazgi aur ghusse me hum ye to bhul hi gaye...k ab hamare shauhar k ilawa hamara koi bhi apna nahi bacha" she replied completely broken from inside.

Fatima and Chanda were confused

"wo to shayad kabhi humse mohobbat nahi krte the, pr humne to bht mohobbat ki hai unse, apni jaan se ziada chaha he unhe, ab unki begum banne k baad unhe kisi aur ka hta dekhna gawara na hoga humse, nahi...hum esa har giz nahi hone denge, jo hogya so hogya, humare shauhar sirf hamare hen, hum unko apna bana lenge hamesha k liye" she said with confidence.

Chanda and fatima smiled.

"par aap krengi kya?" chanda asked

"wo to hamen nahi pta" she replied "par hum kuch soch lenge, aur ab hum bandhiyon ko unse door rakhenge samjhti kya hen khud ko wo sab" she was so jealous that it was evident on her face, her cheeks were red in fury, her brows frowned eye pupils dilated.

"inke andar ki patni jaag gai he" Chanda whispered to Fatima. They both smiled.

"abhi kahan hen wo?" Razia asked

"apni khwab gha me, unki tabiyat theek nahi na to aram kr rhe hen" Fatima replied

"Ya Khuda, unka pait dard abhi tak theek nahi hua? ab hum unhe kabhi mirchi nahi khaane denge" Razia was worried and annoyed, "abhi hum unke paas jaate hen"

Chanda and fatima nodded and smiled.

Razia went to her room, Altunia was asleep, she lay down beside him and looked at him with love, she brushed his hair gently with her fingers, and then kissed his forehead.

"Kaash aap bhi humse mohobbat krte hte, to ye sab na hta, aap hamare saath delhi me hte, hum khush hte, pr ab" tears developed in her eyes and one of them fell on his cheek.

He opened his eyes and was mesmerized, her hair were on his shoulders, her face very close to his, her eyes were shining brightly in the dim light, she was lost in his deep ocean eyes too, he moved a little and placed his fingers in her hair, then he brought her face closer to himself, she closed her eyes, they were very close, so close that even air couldn't pass from between. Her breaths got slow, heartbeats raced, their lips were just a few milimetres away, he pulled her closer, their lips brushed against each other, nose touched, he grabbed her waist, and moved his hand deeper into her hair, entangling them completely, their lips touched completely now, he kissed her with love and passion, but she was hesitant, his blazing hot lips got gooze bumps all over her body, an electric spark ran down her spine, she couldn't take it, so she moved away with a jerk, and took long deep breaths. He sat up.

"begum sahiba aap" he realized he had gone too far without getting to know if she was ready

"hum..hum..wo hum aapse poochne aaye the k aap ki tabiyat kesi he ab" she replied panting

Altunia smiled, "haan ab behtar he, wo kya hai na kadwi dawai se ziada kuch meetha milgya jis se dard mano gayab hi hogya ho" he traced his lips with his finger.

Razia lay down with her face turned and pulled the quilts.

"humen boht neend aa rhi he, aap bhi so jaiye" she said still breathless

Altunia came close to her and said in her ear, "jee begum sahiba, shaba khair"

His breath on her neck and ear tickled her.

"shaba khair" she said quickly and closed her eyes tightly.

Altunia smiled and lay down to sleep

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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
this was too good ...πŸ˜ƒ
thank you for the regular dozes of alzia...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Okay,okay,okay,First of all Sonu- This part was absolutely AFSAW!!!!πŸ‘
Okay,so dusre nikaah ki khabar se Razia ke andar ki wife jaag uthi.πŸ˜†
And that one passionate moment!!!
Kudos to you,πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
And I will say my dil ki baat.Main Tumse Bohot Mohabbat Karne Lagi Hoon SonuπŸ€—πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Astoria

Okay,okay,okay,First of all Sonu- This part was absolutely AFSAW!!!!πŸ‘

Okay,so dusre nikaah ki khabar se Razia ke andar ki wife jaag uthi.πŸ˜†
And that one passionate moment!!!
Kudos to you,πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
And I will say my dil ki baat.Main Tumse Bohot Mohabbat Karne Lagi Hoon SonuπŸ€—πŸ˜†

πŸ€— i wanted a longer comment on the passionate part πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: overactor

πŸ€— i wanted a longer comment on the passionate part πŸ˜†

Well,that passionate part left me speechless😳.Otherwise I would have given a longer comment.Sorry,for thatπŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Astoria

Well,that passionate part left me speechless😳.Otherwise I would have given a longer comment.Sorry,for thatπŸ˜†

Haha no problem πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Still not passionate enough. Altu can do better than this. Aurna tadpao main. Jaldi update karo.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
nice. maza aa gaya.! πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸ˜†
razo burning with jealousy πŸ‘
accha hua ki razo ke side se sab clear ho gaya ki woh pyaar karti hai altu se..πŸ˜ƒ warna bahut log baithe hai usse apna banane ke liye πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
nazdikiyaan badhne lagi hai..πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰
amazing
cont soon.πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: HaremSultan

Still not passionate enough. Altu can do better than this. Aurna tadpao main. Jaldi update karo.

behen sabar ka phal meetha hta he tumhen har bat ki itni jaldi kyun hti heπŸ˜†
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