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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

lovely story...
read all parts now only...
loved it...
its unpredictable... dont kno wt vl happen next...
plz continue soon


thanks for being here and liking my story...
hope u like the future tracks...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

Feel so sad for aman his mama works all nite he sleeps in couch
Oh Mr.Khan take care of ur son he definitely will he is still hoping he is
So sad Ayesha has no memory of her pass just what she was told she believe
Asad was shocked hearing the song. Coincidence
So love the second song
U r making aman to be so mature though for a 5 yr old
It is weird
Love arman support of his appi but surprise they don't know her memory loss
Waiting for the truth some how don't prolong it plz
Continue


yeah arman didn't know about her memory loss and i knw aman is mature enough than is age hope i m not destroying his character let me know by ur suggestions...
thanks buddy...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Arman, Aman & Maha all three were angry. Ayesha sang the song which asad sang for zoya.
Nice Aman Asad bonding
Waiting for her memory to come back soon
Eid Mubarak to u as well
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

Feel so sad for aman his mama works all nite he sleeps in couch
Oh Mr.Khan take care of ur son he definitely will he is still hoping he is
So sad Ayesha has no memory of her pass just what she was told she believe
Asad was shocked hearing the song. Coincidence
So love the second song
U r making aman to be so mature though for a 5 yr old
It is weird
Love arman support of his appi but surprise they don't know her memory loss
Waiting for the truth some how don't prolong it plz
Continue


and truth will be out soon but i can't do it sooo sooon u have to wait dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

Hey that was just beautiful

So amazingly penned
Srsly in love wid it
N a long one aswell
Lovely song sequence s
Awesome one
All d ayesha parts , her past , her nature..
Lovely
In love wid it
Aman view abt his father..
Aman n asad all d talks
Just lovely
It was damn beautiful
In love wid it
All d scenes were pretty penned
Loved it to d core
Splendid
Awesome
Amazing
Lovely
Fabulous
Too good
Beautiful update
Cont soon


i know i have replied to ur comment but i m back bcox i loved ur comment sooo much thanks buddy and i truly mean it...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Salam... hope u r fine... actually i wanna say something... its a big thank you to all my readers for being here and encouraging me... being new here i was really scared but my dear friend Niya encourage me and help me out so i m here and now i m doing 3 projects and that was beyond my expectations... i have never imagined that i can be a writer thank you my readers... now no more wait here is the nxt update... hope u love it...

Adhoori Mohabbat


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Part 8:

Location: Mumbai:

Next Morning, after breakfast they decided to enjoy some time on beach so they packed snacks and cold drinks and moved to the sea side... They really enjoyed a lot and have a wonderful time together... Arman and Nuzhat were happy with the alliance and it can be figured out by their faces that were glowing with pure happiness...
They came back to Malik House where Rehan was also back from UAE and at dinner decided that next week engagement can take place at Khans place and after 3 days the wedding can be planned... All were happy and congratulate each other...
Khans were going to Bhopal next morning so Asad was feeling low because he was going to miss his Mr. Khan very much... So he decided to catch up with Aman for a while... He made his way to the outhouse around 10pm...
Ayesha: Sir app yaha iss waqt is there any problem...
Asad: actually mjhy Aman ke sath kuch time spend karna tha to I m sorry I m disturbing you but we have to catch early morning flight so...
Ayesha did not understand their bonding but being a mother she can see that her son is attached with his new friend Mr. Khan so she allow him in her room where Aman was in no mood to sleep...
Asad: hello Mr. Khan sleepy???
Aman: no Mr. Khan mjhy nend nahi aa rahi...
Ayesha: app dono baty kejieye main bahir lawn main hoon...
Aman: mama app yahi ruko mjhy na Mr. Khan k sath bahir jana hai...
Ayesha: Aman iss waqt time dekha hai or Sir ko subha jaldi jana hai he is here just to say good bye...
Aman: mama plzzz thori dair k liye...
Ayesha: par
Asad: Aman hum log drive pe chalty hain and Ayesha we will be back in a while don't worry...
Aman: yeah...
Ayesha: but Sir...
Asad: plzzz allow me and hum jaldi wapis aa jayengy I promise...
Ayesha: okay...
Asad and Aman left for drive and Asad took Aman to his favorite ice cream parlor and now Aman was sitting on car and Asad was standing beside him and both were having chocolate ice cream obviously on Aman's demand...
Aman: thank you Mr. Khan...
Asad: you are always welcome Mr. Khan...
Aman: I will miss you buddy...
Asad: I will miss you too but app next week aa rahy ho na to vaha hum mil bhi sakty hain or enjoy bhi kar sakty hain...
Aman: haan par uss k bad main wapis aa jaonga na hum kesy milengy???
Asad: ohhh yeh to mene soch hi nahi wesy aik idea hai...
Aman: kyaa???
Asad: main har weekend par app se milny aonga to chalega...
Aman: deal... he said offering a hand...
Asad: deal... he said while shaking hands like businessmen...
In the car...
Aman: mjhy na app se mil kar boht acha lagta hai...
Asad: same here...
Aman: achaa jab main app k ghar aonga app apni wife se milao gy na...
Asad went in some thoughts on mentioning of Zoya but he replied...
Asad: nahi abhi wo mjh se naraz hain to ghar pe nahi hain par apko un se zaroor milaonga I promise...
Aman: I hope wo jaldi wapis aa jayen...
Asad: yeah she will be back... she has to come back to me...
When they reached back Aman was sleeping so without disturbing him Asad carry him inside the outhouse...
Ayesha: I hope he did not bother you...
Asad: sshhh he is sleeping...
Ayesha: he is such a sleepy wesy issy nend nahi aati lekin ab app ke sath gya tha any way let me handle him...
Asad: no he will get disturbed let me take him to the bed...
Ayesha was watching this man who took her son to her bedroom and gently places him on bed and covered him with duvet and just then Asad was about to move back Aman murmured...
Aman: I will miss you...
Asad: miss you too and he placed a kiss on his forehead and left while saying a good night to Ayesha...
Ayesha locked the door and came to bed and creases his hair and trace a finger on his forehead where Asad had kissed him... she was getting emotional...
Ayesha: I m feeling a sense of satisfaction but I don't know why... Its not that nobody loves Aman but his bonding with Asad is something else that is unexplainable I hope Aman will not get too attached with him otherwise it will be difficult for Aman and then he will demand Asad besides him when... no no nothing is going to happen God plzzz keep my Aman happy always...
Location: Bhopal:
Khan Mansion was decorated beautifully after all it's engagement ceremony of younger Khan... there was hustle and bustle in the house...
Dilshad: aj engagement hai or abhi tak kaam khatam nahi hua or thori dair main guest bhi aa jayengy app log jaldi kaam khatam kyun nahi kar rahy...
Worker: mam bas 1 ghanta lagy ga...
Najma: ammi relax hum sab hain na app ja kar Nuzhat ke pass betho she is nervous like hell...
Asad was getting ready in his room when he remembered Aman's words that he had only suits and all so he dressed in a sherwani just to impress his friend...
The guests had arrived and now they were waiting for the Arman and his family... just then they heard a song...
Tere ghar aaya main aaya tujhko lene
Tere ghar aaya main aaya tujhko lene
Dil ke badle mein dil ka nazraana dene
Meri har dhadkan kya bole hai
Sun sun sun

Saajanji ghar aaye hay
Saajanji ghar aaye
Dulhan kyon sharmaaye hay
Saajanji ghar aaye
Ayesha came and continues the song...

Ay dil chalega ab na koi bahaana
Gori ko hoga ab saajan ke ghar jaana
Maathe ki bindiya kya bole hai
Sun sun sun

Saajanji ghar aaye
Saajanji ghar aaye
Dulhan kyon sharmaaye hay
Saajanji ghar aaye
Nuzhat and Arman danced and sang...

Deewane ki chaal mein
Phas gayi main is jaal mein
Ay sakhiyon kaise bolo
Bolo

Mujhpe to aye dilruba
Teri sakhiyaan bhi fida
Ye bolengi kya poochho
Poochho

Ja re ja jhoothe
Tareefein kyon hai loote
Hay ja re ja jhoothe
Tareefein kyon hai loote
Tera mastana kya bole hai
Sun sun sun


Saajanji ghar aaye hay
Saajanji ghar aaye
Dulhan kyon sharmaaye hay
Saajanji ghar aaye
Ayan came to Ayesha and offers her to dance with him and they sang...

Na samjhe nadaan hai
Ye mera ehsaan hai
Chaahe jo isko keh do
Keh do

Chhede muhko jaan ke
Badle mein ehsaan ke
De diya dil isko keh do
Keh do

Tu ye na jaane dil toote bhi deewane
Tu ye na jaane dil toote bhi deewane
Ayesha was about to leave the dance floor when Arman and Ayan came to her and pointed towards Aman who was going to dance for his mama...

Tera deewana kya bole hai
Sun sun sun
They all danced together...

Saajanji ghar aaye hay
Saajanji ghar aaye
Dulhan kyon sharmaaye hay
After the dance they decided to start the ring ceremony...
Arman: appi...
Ayesha: haan aayi...
Ayesha came and placed a red chunni on Nuzhat's head and gifts her some jewelry from Maliks and at last she made her wear Arman's mother kangan...
Ayesha: yeh Arman ki ammi ne apni DIL ke liye banwaye thy...
Arman: or meri appi apny hatho se dy rahi hain...
Dilshad: that's really sweet of you Ayesha but etna kuch lany ki kyaa zaroorat thi... Rehan tumhy mana kiya than a...
Rehan: aunty yeh sab rasam hai or wesy bhi Ayesha yaha hai or ab apko har rasam follow karni hogi she is very traditional and all or Arman apni aapi ka follower hai so...
Dilshad: wo to thek hai par...
Ayesha: aunty hum yeh sab apny liye hi kar rahy hain ab dekhieye na Nuzhat jitna khushi khushi ghar ayegi hamary liye utna hi acha hai...
Ayan: iska matlab app aik businessman ki PA hony ki vaja se kafi expert hain sabko apni baato main lany k liye...
Ayesha: that I m...
Ayan: I wish hum pehly mily hoty...
Arman: excuse me rings exchange kar len and Ayan bhaijan no more flirting with my appi plzzz...
Ayan: I m scared Arman anyway I was just kidding...
Ayesha: Ayan don't mind haan Arman bas tumhari tang khench raha tha...
Ayan: that's really bad Arman aik bar shadi ho jaye phir pochon ga tumse...
During all this Aman and Asad were catching up with each other... Aman complemented Asad for his sherwani and they were having a good time while others are busy in rasams and all...
Arman and Nuzhat exchange rings and all congratulated them... The dinner was served and Khans were making sure that Ayesha and Maliks have it without hesitation...
Ayesha: Arman where is Aman??? Etni dair wo aram se thori beth sakta hai kahi bahir to nahi chala gya... amin abhi ayi...
Ayesha moved to the other side of the living are and stoped dead in her track... Aman was with Asad... that was not a big deal but their action makes her uncomfortable...
Asad and Aman decided to have dinner together that too alone so Asad took him to the other portion of the hall and made him sit on table and stands besides him and on top of that he was feeding Aman with his hands...
Ayesha was thinking that how should she react??? Is it good or bad??? She made her way towards them... but they did not acknowledge her presence...
Ayesha: mama mjhy bas app ke hath khana cha lagta hai...
Aman: jealous haan???
Asad chuckled at their taunts... and he received a death glare from Ayesha...
Asad: I was just...
Aman: mama hum log etny din bad mily thy to bas enjoy kar rahy thy app bhi ao na...
Ayesha: Aman sab vaha hamara wait kar rahy hain...
Aman: nahi mjhy Mr. Khan ke sath hi bethna hai wo bhi alag se app bhi yaha aa jao...
Ayesha: Aman be a good boy and... she was going to speak further but Aman took a morsel from Asad's hand and fed his mama...
Aman: achaa hai na Mr. Khan ne mere liye yeh order kiya hai hai...
Asad was also embarrassed because of Aman's doing...
Ayesha: haan but come soon...
Ayesha left immediately because she can't stand in that awkward situation any more...
Arman was watching all this from other side and he was happy to see Aman with Asad...
Arman: not bad mjhy hamesha se lagta tha appi ki life main shayad yeh kami hamesha rahy gi but I don't think so any more and Aman can play an important role to bring appi out of her shell...
Precap: Nikaah and big revelation...


Sooo that's it...
hope u like it...
ignore my mistakes...
leave ur comments i really love to read that so plzzz...
next update till 30+ likes and 20 replies...
with love Ashii...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

unres😊.

Hey Ashi!! Cmmnting frst time on ur thread.
Loved the updae. 👏 . Hope bohot jald ye mohabbat aur adhoori na rahe...
What will be the big rvltn??😲. waitng for the next part😊. update soon😊
Edited by H.e.n.a - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely n cute update...
the bond between asad n aman is strengthening vd each passing day...
but ayesha has begun to feel uncomfortable abt it...
armaan has got some hint n may b vl put on the thinking caps fr her appi's happiness...
precap going towards revelation...
waiting already ...
plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: H.e.n.a

unres😊.

Hey Ashi!! Cmmnting frst time on ur thread.
Loved the updae. 👏 . Hope bohot jald ye mohabbat aur adhoori na rahe...
What will be the big rvltn??😲. waitng for the next part😊. update soon😊


welcome hena 🤗
or yeh mohabbat zaida dair tak adhoori nahi rahy gi dear its a promise...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

lovely n cute update...
the bond between asad n aman is strengthening vd each passing day...
but ayesha has begun to feel uncomfortable abt it...
armaan has got some hint n may b vl put on the thinking caps fr her appi's happiness...
precap going towards revelation...
waiting already ...
plz continue soon


thnxx aarzoo 😛

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