A Blade of Steel (TS) Part 3- page 16 - Page 7

Loved all the growing emotional blend you build up for Abhiya. It was easy and perfectly written. Is Sid a evil man here too? Let see what happens next. Nice update and a lovely story. Keep it up and thanks a lot dear. 🤗

amazing update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love the way u splits the scenes into years and shows the abhiya bonding increases ... no attachments still they attached now what to do
i feel pity for them what will be there future ... seriously they are not allowed to like ur partner :(
woaw sid entry finally ... so he is the boss well i think he felt the connection of blade and steel ...
abhiya hugged very emotional scene
lets see what future holds for them
hats off to u shreya ... awsome story

So abhiya are partners and sid is a tratior...

sorry for commenting so late
fantastic update
full on action packed but filled with strong unsaid emotions
so abhiya are some kind of secret agents...liked the concept

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

Superb, 👏thoroughly enjoyed reading dis update, 😊

Originally posted by: Kit_Kat

I so love woman in action😆
so loving it alot
nice update with all abhiya action

Originally posted by: Sh_Abhiya

awesome update , fulltoo enjoying while reading n happy abhay n pia indirectly coming closer , waiting how these two relation will take place , but feeling sad for mish , she died hope she alive , n last sid is back stabber or shud i say a snake , thanks for pm n continue soon

Originally posted by: CavingIn

Shreya should I offer you an Oxford Dictionary link to look up gibberish because what's up there certainly isn't.

You have used a different style , made difference in Piya's character (the most evident difference that is) and written a fabulous piece. How can this be anything but brilliant.

Love

Nidha.

Originally posted by: ..Bournville..

Is Sid really going to be the traitor even after he was saved by Abhay and Pia?? I just hope they manage to defeat all their enemies