A Blade of Steel (TS) Part 3- page 16 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Loved all the growing emotional blend you build up for Abhiya. It was easy and perfectly written. Is Sid a evil man here too? Let see what happens next. Nice update and a lovely story. Keep it up and thanks a lot dear. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is what u call choppy writing and gibberish? 😡 Go change the meaning of the word woman! It was amazing n to be honest the best piece of action I have ever read. Like EVER and I mean it 👏 This was sheer brilliance at its best ⭐️ I felt like I was watching a movie and mind u, a hollywood action flick coz bollywood still hasn't come up with anything this classy 👏 I liked the characterisation here n this has to be one of ur best write ups ever and I mean it 👏

Sorry for the short comments but its so brilliant that I donno if I can say anything on this. I have run short of words.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
amazing update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love the way u splits the scenes into years and shows the abhiya bonding increases ... no attachments still they attached now what to do
i feel pity for them what will be there future ... seriously they are not allowed to like ur partner :(
woaw sid entry finally ... so he is the boss well i think he felt the connection of blade and steel ...
abhiya hugged very emotional scene
lets see what future holds for them
hats off to u shreya ... awsome story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
So abhiya are partners and sid is a tratior...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
sorry for commenting so late
fantastic update
full on action packed but filled with strong unsaid emotions
so abhiya are some kind of secret agents...liked the concept
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: mahi4ever

Superb, 👏thoroughly enjoyed reading dis update, 😊


Thanks mahi

Originally posted by: rosamale

I am so in love with this story. Steel and Blade...Sid the traitor?🤢


Every love story has a villain😆

Originally posted by: Mohana1417

Lovely story. Totally loving it.


Thank you😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Kit_Kat

I so love woman in action😆
so loving it alot
nice update with all abhiya action


Me too Ekta😛

Originally posted by: piaviviandsena

hawww sid is bloody cheter!! hmm abhiya r getting emotionally attched! nice update. thax fr pm.


Thanks for commenting

Originally posted by: arwakantawala

Awesome an truly a mind blowing update and the connection towards abhiya the most loved it perfect blend of every thing emotions actions etc.


Thank you!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Sh_Abhiya

awesome update , fulltoo enjoying while reading n happy abhay n pia indirectly coming closer , waiting how these two relation will take place , but feeling sad for mish , she died hope she alive , n last sid is back stabber or shud i say a snake , thanks for pm n continue soon

Um, no. Misha is dead.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: CavingIn

Shreya should I offer you an Oxford Dictionary link to look up gibberish because what's up there certainly isn't.

You have used a different style , made difference in Piya's character (the most evident difference that is) and written a fabulous piece. How can this be anything but brilliant.
Love
Nidha.


Thanks , Nidha! I'm glad you don't think it's gibberish- I thought it might be, since it's like lots of small scenes squeezed into one, but I'm glad you like it.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: ..Bournville..

Is Sid really going to be the traitor even after he was saved by Abhay and Pia?? I just hope they manage to defeat all their enemies


Hmm...that's the big question, isnt it? What do you think?😆

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