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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#311

beautiful update
wow they r married
already waiting for his return.

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sruthick

@sruthick

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#312

Glad 2 kno that he changd his decision...
Nd married her...:)
Bt then left her..!!
I kno..this separation s only 4 few months...
Still...Feel bad 4 them
Cntinue soon

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#313

Thanks Anu (anupama) if not for her push i would have completely missed out on reading this gem.🤗

My God woman you can write...what a beautiful tale this is.

A tale which starts with so much of sadness and pain. I loved the setting that you gave to this story. I get it as you say that the story is an account of all the stories that you have heard from your grandmother - this story has a heart and it sounds so true and real.

And the way you have written it just made me feel that i was reading a first hand account of everything. I could feel the pain of partition so much of chaos and misery all in the name religion.

I thought you wrote that part very well and i don't think for even one moment you took any sides.

I loved this silent tale of falling in love when someone somehow suddenly becomes the sole reason of your existence...i loved the declaration the love, the hurried marriage and yes also the almost hurried first kiss...the kiss had the longing and pining of the impending separation.

Waiting eagerly now for the next update...when arnav will finally return in full glory to claim his bride finally as his own. Till then...

P.S: I have heard good things about towards the edge to can't wait to read that now.

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navjot7

@navjot7

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#314

awesome updt
so finaly arnav khushi is married yipi
arnav is going i hope he come back soon
thnx for pm
updt soon

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finnie

@cute_monaya_fan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#315

Wonderful story. Thnk u so much fr the pm. N I want to read more ...update soon

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starsarun

@starsarun

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#316

When will you gonna update??

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#317

And I hereby certify that whoever would be the love of Pencil s' life would fall hook line and sinker for her all over again if she'll write such letters to him;)

Really Pencil!! The words of love and longing, of patience and anticipation of meeting again were mesmerizing! While I felt Arnav s emotions strongly, I need not imagine Khushi s' . I can very well imagine the state of her heart on reading these when I could do was feel such immense love and sigh and just pray for his return.

loved loved loved the update! Immensely.

And the quest remains. Increased infact.

Its time for him to returnnn!! =>

Mera piya ghar aaya o Ramji..Mera piya ghar aaya o Ramji..!

Edited by Anupama. - 11 years ago

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cute_sarun

@cute_sarun

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#318

Beautiful update finally arnav is coming back to his khushi..continue soon

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#319

Fantastic beautiful update

It's very hard to pen down one feeling for his lover in letters, you have a brilliant job in this.

Poor Arnav he miss his family and his wife, lover, his happiness, his peace, his Khushi. But alas after a lots of hardwork and struggle to built up a life where he could keep his family comfortable, he is coming back to get them n introduce them in the new world.

Khushi would be ecstatic but sad as well as she will have to leave her country forever where she was born, enjoy her childhood, her teenage, where she feel in love n got married.

Can't wait for the next update.

Update jaldi jaldi

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starsarun

@starsarun

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#320

While reading 1st part...
There was one thing on Mind... It was song.
Is Dard-e-Dil ki sifaarish,
ab kar de koi yaahan,
Mil Jaaye Ise vo baarish,
Jo bhiga de poori taarah!
I can't explain anymore.. It was the beautiful chapter. :)