Vadaa Raha..... Prt5on Pg10 - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

52

Views

5.6k

Users

21

Frequent Posters

Reemz93 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#31
that was awesome!!
i cant weit 2 c what happens nxt!!
so plzzzz upd8 sn
pm rocks thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#32
sorry guyz for hte delay, actually i am having loads of HW and i had to finish 2 research paper so i couldnt update...now that i am done with everything i can update regularly šŸ˜›

Again sorry for the delay.....

love,
Janki
pm rocks thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#33
sorry guyz for hte delay, actually i am having loads of HW and i had to finish 2 research paper so i couldnt update( thats wht i get for being in Honors classesšŸ˜†)...now that i am done with everything i can update regularly

Here is teh Next Part:

PART 4

Sorry for waiting….here is the next part. Enjoy!!!!

Preview: prem fell on mukti because he slipped!!!!

They both kept on starring at eachother….and in the background kabhi na sukun aya was playing. They both quietly get up....without speaking anything...and they both leave from there...(sorry i didnt put anything romantic but i promise you that there will be lots of PM ROMANTIC SCENES...😳.)

At night it was windy, and Prem and Mukti's windows were open so they both went at the same time to close. They both stared at each other for a while and then suddenly in Mukti's mind every thing started coming up (her rape case, her and prem's fight, Prem rejecting her) and suddenly she thought that, "why am I standing here? I don't care about him at all, after he did these to me why should I even care about him? Why should I even look at him? He is nothing but a betray person." Just then she closed the window and leave from there. Meanwhile Prem kind of felt bad in his heart, because he could almost hear her heat. He exactly knew what she was thinking. He only had onw question in his mind, "why did he betray her?" Just them prerna entered in his room.

Prerna: kya sooch rahe hoon?

Prem: mein yeah sooch raha tha ke maine mukti ke saath kyun dhoka kiya?

Prerna: oh prem just forget it right now you need to think that how will you get her. Don't put too much stress on yourself. Aur abhi raat bohot hoon chuki hein and now you go to sleep.

It's morning, and there is a doorbell at mukti's house.

Mukti to herself: who is it??? Early in the morning!

Just then she opened the door, and it was her best friend Alisha! Her friend from 8th grade, they both are so close, they know everything about eachother, and now Alisha finished her studies and came to stay with mukti. But mukti still haven't told Alisha what happened to her….as an like how she met prem and fell in love with her but he rejected her and then she got raped…she don't know anything about that, but she does know about Prerna. Not anybody else. (Additional Information!)

Mukti: Aree Alisha tum!

Alisha: surpriseeeee!!! Wow mukti you still look the same!

Mukti: come inside

Alisha: tum kesi hoon

Mukti: mein to theek hoon. Aur tum

Alisha: college khatam karliya and now I came to stay with you.

Just then mukti's dad came…

Alisha: hello uncle

Jeevan: arre Alisha beti tum… kesi hoon

Alisha: mein theek hoon

Jeevan to mukti: mukti abb mein jaa raha hoon aur tum tayar hooke Mr:Bajaj ke ghar ahh jana ok.

Mukti: ok

Then jeevan leaves

Alisha: mukti, yeah Mr:Bajaj koon hain?

Mukti: pata hein mene tumhe batyha tha Choti maa ki bare mein, yeah unke pati hain.

Alisha: kya tum mujhe choti ma se milaoo gi? Please?

First she told her no because of prem but, she insisted mukti so she said o.k.

Mukti: teekh hain chalo mere saath.

They go to Baja's house.

sorry guys i have to end it here...since i havent wrote wht i am going to put next...but dont worry i will update it probably thursdayšŸ˜›

Hope you like it

Love,

Janki

Edited by pm rocks - 19 years ago
bittersweet93 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#34
rocking update! cant wait for next part šŸ˜›
Robin_M thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#35
wow janki that was realllllly good! its been so long, finally! lol well im really liking it so far, please keep going 😊
karen singh thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#36
wow thats really good
i love it plz continue soon 😳
Fashion101 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#37
good job i really like it and plz contiue soon.
yespoo thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#38
Good job Janki, continue soon....

Love,
Pooja
xoxsubhaxox thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#39
great job!!! plz cont soon..hmm maybe alisha will fall for prem...
Xo-PuZen thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#40
AWSOME 😃
pls continue soon 😳

Love
Aisha

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".