ArShi FF (Complete): The Ray Of The Dawn (Thread 1) - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey dear
Love the update
Uff that Gupta's sisters
hate them so much
Poor Khushi
Hope Arnav put some sense in her
how could she think something like this abt herself
can't wait to read more
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the PM
take care

Lots of Love
Geet

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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update poor khushi she was so happy knowing that arnav was in loved with her only to hear those two witches talking about him and saying that he would never make a maid his wife breaking her heart and destroying her confidence in his love so sad arnav knowing some thing was wrong wanted to talk to her bring out the asr and she fainted loved that he heard her ramblings and realized why she was in that state awesome update thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi this is the first time iam reading your story...read all the chapters in one go it was really awsome...the way you have described is heart filling...awating for the next part..do update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg! Poor khushi!
She is just so unsure of herself...but im sure noe that arnav knoes the reason for her foul mood he'll bring her confidence back :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
sweet!!!!!!!!!fall in love with this Arnav and Khushi...loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
SUPER DUPER CHAPTER'S CHAVERAH
Chapter 11 A :-
chapter's Chaverah. WOW Khushi herself stated to humming which was lost 5yrs back and d skip in her walk just like new blossom of flower . More dan dat loved how she was expecting Arnav to be near his window so dat she can see him and though can't talk but still see him which would fill her heart Beating Heart . Khushi was very right to love a person whom u know barely is wrong thought not fully becoz Love Happen's at First Sight Love You. Yooo loved Arnav's Chuckle on seeing Khushi's desperation 4 him to be near d window and wen came , Chaverah u've no idea how much it pleased me also to see Khushi's happiness which is new experience for her and d communication through der eyes was outstanding buddy .
Chapter 11 B :- Most wonderful and exciting chapter it was Chaverah You'Re The Best . God it was one hell entertainment to see how ASR in Arnav was hell bend on praising Khushi infront of Mrs.Gupta and her daughter's and indirectly confessed his love for Khushi through voice and guester's also Whistle . Chaverah d entire part from Arnav's confession till d end of dis chapter was d best and my favourite Kisses . Nevertherless Arnav succeeded in making Khushi realise his love for her and waiting 4 right time for Khushi to accept it .
Chapter 12 :- Chaverah yet another chapter. Take my bow buddy 4d beautiful and unique love story inspite of all pains and hurts Bow DownBow DownBow Down . WOW man dat was one hell beautiful send off of Arnav from Gupta house and man wat a hugwa it was though for other's its friendly one but for two heart beater lovers it was most blissful one . Then another hint of his love for her "I hope you'v realized about whom I'v been speaking earlier.. You know, it could be of a real great help if you figured it out on your own.. If not, then, I would be more than privileged to do the honors myself.. Wink. Errr inspite of all d happy moments Arshi spend came another blow inbetween dem . Nevertherless for any dark clouds comes a sunshine day dat would erase all d darkness in clouds and really appreciated Arnav's fast move in his step before its too late in loosing his love den repent on his lost opportunity though at first he was stunned to know wat Khushi thought but ASR confessed it on her face itself was spectaculous "Silly woman!! You are a Princess, Khushi.. My very own Princess!!!" Wink .
Update soon Chaverah can't wait to see Khushi's reply and her final thought about her decision she took was how wrong. Eagerly waiting 4der love story to begin. Thanks 4d pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update. .
arnav is flirting with Khushi. .lol..
he loves it wen she changes colours. . 😳
Damn. .!!
she thinks she's a maid..
I knw arnav will make her feel better.
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Posted: 12 years ago
outstanding update Candy ..., 👏i was aweed when he hug her before that gupta b***hes , Arghh i hate that witches so damn much .., 😡
you better suffer them alot candy ..
i simply Adore Arnav ( my hotwa😆) i loved the way he confort her in payal cabin simply wow :))
Love you cand .. Missed you Alot 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
hate the sisters ... khushi is so tensed now...
lovely update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
mrs Gupta is so disgusting

hope Arnav convinces Khushi soon

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