The Ultimate Price - Pts. 9,10,Epi Pg 28 - Page 3

Yay! I'm so happy you're back with another FF, Sangita! 😃 Loving this FF so far! Felt so bad for Bani! Loved how you described her emotions so well! 👏 I'm liking Jai Walia in his RB mood! 😆 God i love him for kicking everyone out! 😃 😆 Really looking foward to the next part!!! 😃

Love
Goddess

WOW Sang's ragging bull overload you so have to update soon !!!!!!!!!

sharan XXX

Sangita,

That's a great start, I like this turn of events where Jai takes charge of the situation and gives a piece of his mind to Maasi and Jigyasa and the GFNs.

I can't wait to see how this goes....

Hi Sangita Di--so happy you started another ff.

fabalous part,the pain of bani was written so well.superb part,love how Jai is taking control of the sitution.wonderful start,looking forward to the next part.will be eagerly waiting for it. 😊

preett 😃

Sangita, I am very happy that you are writing another FF again.😃😃😃

The thing I love the most about this FF is that Bani's thoughts are written so beautifully. In real KS, we never got to know Bani's views and her thoughts post ONS. This FF is really what I yearned for Sangita.

Another great thing, I love Jai. I love him for chasing out all the GFN's out of the house. Great job Jai.

Continue soon sangita… I think both JB are going to pay for their mistakes…Just don't make it tooo sad. 😕I can't bear to see them separate. 😭But if the story requires it, then I guess I will understand.😕💔

Didi it was about time someone sent the GFN's off. Now you go and understand what real life is.

loved Jai and his actions, this is how it was supposed to be, he shouldn't be crying like a teddy bear in this case like taht happened in the main show..

Bani's pain made my eyes moist.. really liked the starting, pls cont soon, and ok i admit i'm afraid of dark stories but, if you continue to write using this kind of description, i think this would be the first dark story i've ever loved..

take care..

Hey Sangs,

Finally you have written the first chapter...I hope u are storyline hasn't changed much...I am looking forward to the next chapter...and I don't need to tell you how beautifully you write...the way you describe the emotions is just amazing...

👏 👏 👏

Garf

Thanks Simi. As for the happy ending, I cant promise you that, not at least now.

Hi damilola, welcome. I knew most of you would love J telling off Maasi.

Yes Kinnu, I started another one, though am not sure when to end it.

Swati, you more or less have caught the mood swing. And yes, get the Kleenex.

Meg, u r the eternal optimist. Hopefully, Munna and Munni will solve their problems now. And yes, Karuna hasn't told anything to anyone as yet.

Divan – you don't have to wait for long for JnB to meet. Its in the next part only. Coming very soon.

Bugs – Thanks very much for the standing ovation. And yes, I am just trying to understand Bani.

Krishna – you know me very well by now, at least my penchant for linking names of FFs with their contents. And I am not going to disappoint you at all.

Hi Khusboo, I kinda like it girl – the attitude. To go alongwith any type of FF.

Bt, I hate sad endings too. But this is just a FF dear, nothing more nothing less. So stay happy.

Thank you sxcdevil for your kind comments, lets see how it progresses.

Hi davia, will try to post soon. Deffo.

Heena, thanks for being here. Will try to update soon.

Farah, I suggest you store your Kleenex and don't send the bill to me, as in previous times. LOL

Yes Nina, love is supposed to conquer all only if there's love. Isn't it?

Thanks Riv, just thought that I should let people know beforehand, so that all those TNTs don't reach me.

Cute1228 – Hi, sorry for stopping there dear. Will try to update sooner.

Manu, how are you doing? Very busy I guess. As for the FF, thanks for commenting. Yes its somewhat of a darker nature, so that there's variety.

Hi Rimpy, thanks a lot. I am trying to write something now. Lets see.

Hi Debs, lets now see how Jai progresses with his words. They are gonna be extremely vital.

Hey Goddess, JW is surely in a RB avatar, lets see how he holds himself. Anyway, thanks for your comments.

Sharan, yes actually theres an overload. Will be so for the next few parts. I guess so.

Hi Sheena, yes JW needed to give it to the GFNs. How I wished he would have given it to the GFNs in the serial? Sigh!

Coolgurl – JW needed to take control of the situation and he just did it. Its after all his life.

Meena – That's what irks me in KS also, Bani's thoughts are never given any importance. They just keep on doing rubbish with her character. Yes dear, they will pay for the mistakes they commit.

Hi Rain, welcome to the KS Section. You seem relatively new over here. Sorry dear, this story will be a little dark, but its just a story u see at the end of the day. I have to catch up with your story too.

Hi Garfy, my Garfield. Thanks dear. And no, the storyline has not changed at all. By now you should know very well that I don't budge from the fixed storyline. And so I can see the line of jootas and belans coming my way.

Oh my you started other ff 😃
Sangita ji don't know if you remember but you started one ff on FF section long time ago, what happened to that?

Is Jai going to turn as he was before? The arrogant and rude Jai is back?

Loved the way you described Bani's feelings.

Sad but an amazing start!!!

Looking forward for the next part 😉