FF: A dish best served cold, Pt-20 Pg 96 - Page 39

Thanks to all of you for the encouragement and kind comments.

Pari,

(Roshni enters the FF soon )

Rosh will enter but after C-nite, this much inside info I would give you. J-B will consummate their marriage for their own selves, not driven to it by third parties.

Poo,

(but on second thoughts would it be that interesting... )

Very true. We need her as much as J-B.

MT,

(you have brought out Pia most realistically and her jealousies and insecurities are totally deplorable yet completely relatable!)

Absolutely. In KS more than JW or Bani, it is Pia who has given a very raw deal. And even in my FF, I was more worried about how my Pia would come out- JW/Bani are very, very easy characters to create, it is the grey ones who are most problematic. If I can go thru my FF with Pia being a grey character without being a genuine evil force, that would be an achievement.

Rgds,

Pri

pri,
amazing part!
i really love it.
the bani portrayed here is just about the best bani.
i love the fact that she cares a lot about their loved ones but unlike the one in serial she wouldn't do banigiri.
now that JW knows im sure the repeat of june 19 is not far from here or that rosh is not far im sure.
please continue soon
rooj

Pri,

I really loved this part. Trust you to take all the loopholes that KS always creates and take them to its logical end.

I loved the fact that Bani stopped JW from saying the divorce word. I always felt that Bani never made her opinion known about there relationship in the glory days. It was always JW leading and she fully participated but was never an initiator. I loved it that she actually had a reaction about her future.

Your pia is so much more realistic than what we have had to suffer through for months. All her feelings are very natural. Any girl of her age who is a bit superficial would have found life after marriage very hard, realizing what she gave up.

Waiting for a dhamaka now. JW is all primed to be a RB. Are we going to have 6/19 already or are you going to build it up more. I want more build up because I think it was rushed in KS.

Again another wonderful part.

cheers,
meghna

soo jai and r backk too same position because of pia... ohh noo soo jai is backk too take revenge.. what he will doo know....we thought june 19th is going to come but... somethingg else is goin too hapeenn.. but still waithing for jw actions.. and reactionn to this.. pl continue.. waithing for ur next update...
davia

Great part Pri…

Finally Pia did one sensible thing – leave the best room for JB. I say Bani don't even try talking to that brainless thing called Pia. It's you who always get into trouble by trying to put some sense into that senseless creature.

Though Jai is angry, I am taking it positively. Now, Bani has to flirt with Jai even more or Jai has to flirt with Bani evenmore to get his revenge. Either way, I am okay with flirting…

And I am seeing PR raaz coming out. When is Roshni coming by the way?

"Yes, that's how things will be. I will revert to being the JW that I had briefly become after the elopement - a man without heart and soul. Thanks, Bani. I had lost my way but thanks to you, I have got my mission back. And I want to taste my dish very soon, don't want it to become cold"

His grip tightened so hard that the glass broke.
I am waiting to see The arrogant ,aloof JW return
...oops .. Glass shattered in his Hand .. I guess Amma will smother Him by ripping her sari pallau & tying it around his hand fixing haldiwala doodh
klue

ufff...why is it that jai has selective hearing...why did he only hear the bad part of the conversation😡 ...haila...ek aur misunderstanding... 😕 ...lets see how long it takes for this to clear up...and lets see what more tortures JW in RB mode puts bani through
JAZ

Jaz/Klue,

He will not be in the RB mode. Rather apply the meethi chhuri again. He will be back to his original gameplan- Refer Chap I of my FF.

Rgds,

Pri

A very good part and an excellent read too.

But thanks for making him humane.

Waiting for the next part.