VIRIKA-TrUeLy MadLy DeepLy In LOVE with U.... -up(pg-114) - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: AmmuKryan

Di i'm so sry for being late😔

The updates were damn cute!!!!!!
Viren loves Jeevika so deeply How cute he is❤️!!!!!
Jeevika mesmerized by his hotness😉
Waiting to see them fall in luv!!!!!!
Congo for ur 1st attempt n pls for my sake stop calling this wonderful story a crap!!!!!!
Luv u di🤗


dont be sorry!!!!😊
glad u liked it !!!😊
and i loved r comment to
love u😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
reserved.

*unres*

Wonderful start to a FF! Loved everything about it! Do continue soon and thank you for asking me to read it! A great relief to my boredom! 😆
Edited by ..Preethz.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: ..Preethz..

reserved.


*unres*

Wonderful start to a FF! Loved everything about it! Do continue soon and thank you for asking me to read it! A great relief to my boredom! 😆


i am glad u liked it will update today😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Ok here the part third chapter of this story...Its very boring and crappy.So sorry for that.thanks for liking my work and commenting on it.Love u all.take few minutes of your busy schedule and read this and plz comment also.

Jeevika's POV-

It was evening all were sleeping in there respective rooms as they were very tired.me and mom were only awake, we were in the kitchen preparing dinner for everybody.we made many things and we didn't even realized when time passed and it was 08:00 pm .I went to wake my cousins who were sleeping in my room and then to piya's room where she and payal was sleeping.i woke all of them and told to freshen up fast as dinner was ready.as both jeesha and isha were ready we placed all things on dining area and went to woke the three boys as mom told us.we went and peeped through the door slightly and went in.here we saw the three babies sleeping cuddling with eachother.they were sleeping so cutely that we didnt wanted to wake them up.

We called them by thier names 7 to 8 times but no they were in there own dreamland than our mastermind worked we went near them jeesha went to virat,isha to rahul and I went to viren as they forced me.He was looking so cute while sleepng i took my phone out and clicked out his pictures without noticed by anyone present there.Then our plan started i started to irritate him by taking his blanket,by tickling in his nose,ears.He was irrtitated but yet not ready to getup so I angrily took jug of water kept on the table and poured it to three of them .they woke up shockingly that what happened suddenly???jeesha and isha ran out of the room and i was the only caught for my tactics.They glared at me angrily specailly viren because he was the one who was wet from top to bottom.I ran for my life.

Yash- bhai just look at u????(he said laughing)U r so wet.😆

Rahul- yeah viren bhaiya u r looking so good(he said laughing too)😆

Viren - both of u just shut upp ok!!! And also look at urself too u both are also wet.now let me change I will not spare her now.

Yash - yaa bhai i m with u we will punish my bhabhi together.😉

Rahul - bhabhi???Who bhabhi???😕

Viren just glared at yash 😡and told rahul that yash is mad u go freshen up.

All three boys freshned up and came to dining area where all were siting waiting for them. Vanshika asked viren why they were late to which he said they woke up late and eyed jeevika who hiding behind jeesha feeling embrassed😳.All did dinner and praised a lot to jeevika's mom and off course jeevika for such a lovely dinner.all were chattering on random topics while all boys and girls were in terrace.jeevika was feeling awkward going in front of viren so she went to her room.viren knew this and he also went to her room informing yash about this and told him not to disturb to which he just winked😉 and viren punched him in his stomach slightly.😆

In jeevika's room-

Jeevika was using facebook on her laptop.viren went in without knocking.

(from the back)Viren-Bohhh...

Jeevika- (screamed)aaa...😲

Viren- shhh...(put his hand on jeevika's mouth) calm down its me.

Jeevika -😡 you idiot dont u have manners u scared me and how dare u to come to my room without permission???

Viren- (while laughing)and if same ques goes to u then??(he said laughing more)

Jeevika -hellooo Mr!!! This is my room ok!!!

Viren - ya i know its ur room but i m not talking about that i m talking about what u did few hours ago with me???

Jeevika- what did I do?? I just came to woke u up that's all.(she said looking away)

Vien - Really!!! So in your house u woke a person by putting a full jug of water..Is that???

Jeevika-(now was scared)n..noo..its nothing like that it was just for fun.

Viren - Ohh... so fun????😉

Jeevika- yeahh...it was for fun only and top of that it was not my plan..(she said angrily stomping her foot)

Viren- Do you love cats????

Jeevika - what??? Whats that ques???😕

Viren - just tell me...

Jeevika -hmmm yaaa i love cats.

Viren -hmmm ,thats why u r like jungli billi!!!!

Jeevika -what the hell!!! U called me jungli billi!!How dare u???

She said throwing pillow towards him and soon they started playing tom and jerry turning the whole room in mess.after some time they were tired and sat on the bed seeing each others face and laughing.

Jeevika- see I won!!!! i have beaten u more from pillow(she said proudly)

Viren -off course u won!!!! a jungli billi cant loose the race😆

Jeevika- again u called me jungli billi.(she said throwing pillow once again)😡

Viren - Ok now sorry stop hurting me.It hurts

Jeevika- Sorry!!!for that and this also

Viren- ya ya its ok.i forgive u

Jeevika- OMG thank u for forgiving me i am very happy that u have forgived me(she said mockingly).

Viren- u r such drama queen.

Jeevika- what problem do you have with me??? U were only watching me continuously from the time u have came here and then giving me funny names.its good that i poured whole jug of water on you no no i should have poured whole bucket of water on you(she said sticking her tongue out)

Viren- so u mean u have taken revenge from me for seeing you????

Jeevika- i didn't say that

Viren -but u meant that

Jeevika- viren

Viren -jeevika

Jeevika- viren

Viren -jeevika

Jeevika- viren

Viren -jeevika

Jeevika - arghhh... now stop it!!!!now go out i want to chat with my friends.

Viren- why??? u can chat infront of me.

Jeevika- Mr viren now plz leave from here and dont disturb me.

Viren - are u going to talk to ur boyfriend???

Jeevika - hello i m not like u i don't have any boyfriend.

Viren - Oyee!!! Why should i have a boyfriend.i will have a girlfriend.😆

Jeevika- yaaa whatever...OK fine sit here.but promise me u will not irritate me.

Viren -promise i will not(he said smilingly).

They both sat on the bed next to each other seeing each others profile and showing their photos.Both were so engrossed in each other that they even didnt know how time passed they were talking talking and talking about there college friends,on some random topics,their projects and telling their likes and dislikes to eachother.viren was very happy as he was close to jeevika within few hours.jeevika was alsoo very happy as she got her new friend to whom she could share her happiness and sorrows.time passed and it was 02:00am in morning the were still talking.both of there mom came to see them they were so happy to see both smiling and laughing,they prayed to god for their happiness and then went in and told them to sleep as tomorrow they all were going to an amusement park.they bid goodbye and said good night to each other and then viren went to their room.

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thank u guys for tolerating me.i know it was boring.Plz like and comment too plz.Next update will be after seeing the response.


Edited by sweet_aayushi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
awesome update
how jeevika poured a water on viren
and viren called her as jungli bil and their fighting as tom and jerry
and now they became a good friend also now they didnt realize the time also nice update
superb
amazing
fantastic
continue soon thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: arshiasushma

awesome update
how jeevika poured a water on viren
and viren called her as jungli bil and their fighting as tom and jerry
and now they became a good friend also now they didnt realize the time also nice update
superb
amazing
fantastic
continue soon thanks for the pm


thank u 😊
i will continue by seeing the response i will get 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
it was a grt fabulous update
I loved everything abt it...
their fight masti
talking was amazing...
jungli billi..
haha
do cont soon... it was fantastic
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
amazing update
superb
fantastic
awesome
liked tom and jerry fight
jungli bill and all
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Superb update
awsame
amazing
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
😃 OMG!!!! 😃
Aaayyuuu Ji!! This Is Sooo Goood!!! 😃
It's Not At All Boring Or Crappy!!! 😡
I Just Totally Love It!! 😆
Jeevika Throwing Water On Viren! 🤣 😆
Awwwiiiee...Virika Spend Little Sweet Moments Together!! 😳 😃

Update It Already Aayuuu!!! 😆 😃 PLEASH!!! 😳 😃 I Can't Wait Long You Know!! 🤢

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