Th#12 ArHi SS: Love Interrupted TH#13 Pg. 131 (15/01/2014) - Page 49

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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting. U got me do excited. Jus watching the clock every now and then
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Me!! 😊

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A beautiful story comes to an end... Love interrupted has been a saga... So long and interesting that I wish I could keep on reading it... However Zee, I know how much you have struggled to give us these lovely updates... This has been a beautiful journey of the past and the present... of Childhood love being interrupted to blossom into deep, much more meaningful love in the future!!



I have loved the graph of Arnav and Khushi's relationship. You have actually written a three year back of story and episodes for a TV show... From their childhood fights and stupidity to two mature grown up individuals... From dislike... to love. The changes in these characters has been so much that it feels I have grown up with them, watching them loving them a little more each day... That is the power of your writing Zee...



The last chapter was simply magical... so much happened in it... Loved Arnav's teasing... Khushi's sportiness and finally their union... Two lovers who finally get to be one... just the way they deserve to be!! But I am upset that they were disturbed the next morning itself!! Darn another couple was paving it way to their love story!! Akash and Payal are too cute... so maaf kiya!!


I loved how you have incorporated the other characters of the story as well.. Many times they are ignored... just like the show... Shyam and Anjali find their happiness and Madhumati is included in the final chapter too... NK and Lavanya have their own Hindi issues to deal with!! And loved Arnav and Khushi's idea of GRAST!! Noble and I wish for the rich of this country to follow it too!!



And then the final ending of this sweet love story... A pregnant Khushi... a caring and sweet Arnav and a happy family... How can we not want more from you Zee!! Truly this story is one of my favorites on Arhi... and I cannot wait to begin reading it again... I would have demanded a new story... but you already are giving us one... So a big wala thank you for penning such wonderful gems... Waiting for the epilogue now!!


Edited by mints23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
take time... waiting 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
someone kill me for unresing after lyk years!!...😆😛
ladgoverner n his demands!!...hayeee!!...😉
god!!...he made khushi dance on d same song , she did 14 years back!!...😛😛
awww!!...Mr. n Mrs. naughty singh raizada!!...😳😳
aahh!!...he pushed all ri8 buttens by calling her coward!!...n thn d sherni back in action!!...😆
loved der not-so-lovely scenes!!!...full of actions!!...☺️☺️
its tym to move ahead!!...😳
n d morning after!!...omg!!...☺️☺️
arnav is really shame less!!...laadgoverner!!...😳😳
d holi dey played!!...uff!!...☺️❤️
loved d way dey handled all khushi's property issues!!...
aww...finalyy!!...a baby grl for anjali n shyam!!...😊
aahh!!...tym to get payash!!...😉
god!!...everyone teased la as mausiji!!...😆😆n she actually got upset!!...😛😛
very proud of akash!!...d way he brought payal back to her mother!!...
so nyc of him!!...
madhumati is mother of payal afterall!!...😳
of god!!...lav-nk!!...how adorable can they be!!...so damn sweet!!...😳
really mad(e)😉 for each other!!..
der convo over d COFFEE!!...😆😆😆
loved it so much!!...
wow!!!...khushi made a turst on der parents name!!...GRAST!!...wonderful!!...
perfect!!...
i jst loved d scene of kalyani n saiyuu at d reception!!...😆
worth watching!!...
d look of remorse on kalyaani's face!!...serves u ri8 bi****!!...😡
awww!!...khushi's pregnancy!!...cherry o d cake!!...😳
der convo at d end!!...was jst damn adorable!!!...
n yeh so right!!...the interruptions were jst going to start!!...watch out MR.raizada!!...😛😛😉
n it ended !!...sigh!!...😭😭
well i can officially ask for an epilouge now!!...😉
p.s. i m not at all satisfied wid d comment!!...😕bt i had to unres!!...
p.s.s i wl b commenting chhota chhota on d thread anyways!!...😉
p.s.s.s. epilouge plzzz...short wala nhi chalega ab!!...😉



Edited by nirmal1992 - 12 years ago
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~Wohi jo kehta tha ishq mein kya rakha hai,~
~Ek heer ne usey ranjhaa bana rakha hai..~😳
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Edited by Chandni.. - 12 years ago
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hhayee 😃 me lolwa 😉 aka MR LAZY 🤣☺️

i dont know how many words 😳 but its long and i whn i read ths again .. i feel i hv missed so much .. i had nt written about ths n that .. but .. the list is never ending .. and well that adds to the number of THANK YU S to yu .. i dill sy thnk yu fr writing such long long updates .. i know it requires alot of time effort and all (i realised ths when i started quoting the updates .. ussy pehly i always thought k yu gv thori si update ..lol.. but thn i realised its long .. very long yet every part wrth readng ).. yu still write long updates read cmnts and reply thm as well .. i diil sy thnk yu fr that .. and my cmnt ..pura parhna plz .. i kno its long .. lol.. but thora thora rooz parh lynA oki 😉

hmm.. ok .. finally i m unres ing my cmnt on last update of LI 😕

ok ! ... let me start from the start 😉 ..LOVE INTERRUPTED .. when i saw the tittle , the first thing came to my mind was .. arnav holding khushi s nape and HP at door 😆 arnav and khushi in hut and goons at door (knock knock ..we are coming ) arnav and khushi on poolside and aman calling .. arnav and khushi in bua ji s house ( he was shirtless there😆) and buaji saying arnav babwa ..peet ka dard smthng smthng 😛 .. they in hallway , about to kiss and akash opening the door for family to enter and interrupt them !

Actually the tittle itself reminded me of all the interruptions in IPK ❤️ . i thought the story would be a rom-com and it would have all these scenes , because having read your other stories i was like k yu ll use ipk scenes here also .. and partially i was right ! did i tell yu i was excited .. excited alot to read this one .. the first chapter where it starts from he entering RM and yelling at her for entering his room .. lol.. there yu had written that he was jealous of her and that they knew each other from childhood ..lol.. and here i was thinking that arshi were already married hahaha and that arnav was mad at her but not serious wala mad .. he was just not liking the fact that post marriage everyone is also gvng attention to khushi 😆😳 i am so glad i never wrote this then ..lol.. wrna tou .ahhaha ..thn as iread further i found that she was sad , cold ( remember yu said he did nt notice her cold skin or smthng like that ) then and there from her state i was like .. i m sure her parents had died ,... i did nt write that either 😆n iam not at all glad that i did nt write it 😛acha khaasa special mention haath sy nikal gaya
lol and after reading the first chapter , the first thing i did was i re watched that scene of IPK ..
yu know till last year i was addicted to IPK only , i used to think that i can never get enough of this show 😆 so i watched it then watched it and watched it and again i watched it and again i re watched it ! and after watching it every time i was like .. why it ended 😡 then i came to know about FF s and then about yur ffs lol ..i was like maybe reading the ffs might lessen my addiction to this show .. but i WAS TERRIBLY WRONG .. now i read + watch .. haha .. and now when i go back and watch IPK SCENES they have a different meaning to me .. they reming me of yur FFs .. lol.. a week ago i was watching arshi patch up scene BANGLES wala .. and i read MD aftr that ,.. haha .. i was watching the scene HMARI GHALTI NAI HAI AAP HI HMARI TRF AYE .. and i read the chapter of LI where she had accidentally dropped his laptop and had said HMARI GHALATI NAI HAI 😆

LI has always excited me ,always . shuru shuru mai .. i was like wt to cmnt haha .. i wd just type the sentence that escaped my mouth aftr reading the update ..lol.. but then yu wrote the chapter /teaser where thy had come hand in hand and every one was wondering if they had married or not .. then i just cdnt stop ( its not my fault that i cmnt like ths on ths story ,, HMARI KOI GHALTI NAI HAI ..AAP HI AISA LIKHTY HAIN 😛)

( and
there i got to know so many good souls on IF .. i never knew IF p achy insaan bhi hooty hai 🤣)

cmng back to story .. and THE CHAPTER WHEN SHAADI HO GAI 🥳 lol i remember yu had promised yu ll update but it got delayed .. hihi .. n .. aftr fajar i had logged in .. n saw yu updated .. n i just scrolled down n down .. n there in the part C of the update last pic was .. arnav holding khushi in his arms .. she was in her bridal wear and they ere entrng the house probably aftr grah perwaesh or wtever its called .. n i screamed YAHHUU SHAADI HO GAYI ..lol.. n my cxns sitting around me gave me a look ..lol..thy thought i had sm dream or etc .. haha ..
the whole update of the wedding ceremony was ahhhmaaazzinng <3
i love love love it .. arnav tying mangalsutra religiously around her neck ..lol. that made me rofl .. he touched her gallla 😆 and pandit was sleeping lol .. and everything was so funny and soo maazyy ka ..lol.. but the most funniest thing about LI was /is ... ... any guesses ??

lol nop not saiyu that was the part where yu told that FOR AZLMOST AN HOUR THY WERE HAVNG PIZZA AND PASTA 😆

then apart from arshi .. payash .. NANANYA 😆 .. both were so good to read specially payash <3 .. lol payal was one pataka 😉 ..lol.. when she winked at him .. lol... in mandir .. when she said that she wont mind going honeymoon frst ..lol..lol.. and that part .. guys at 18 ..yu know horny .. lol.. and she said i wished i had met yu then 😳

lol .. ( i googled horny :P )

lol.. my SHAAYAAMUU 😆 lol lazy SHAYAMU KY BINA LI KA KAYAA HOTAA 😆i liked him .. and loved him specially in LI .. ..his frst dialogue was to arnav na ! he asked him k anjali should be happy and glowing like a pregnant woman should be 😳❤️ i loved him ..shuru sy hi .. i loved him when she became khushi ka mu bola bhai 😆 .. i like him fr being there wth his wife .. and fr supporting and working hard for 14 long years 😆 ... and i liked anjali ..sweet to read hamaesha <3


Lavanaya and NK ..lol.. that was the most hillarious couple ever ...lol.. specially that NK ..lol.. i always laughed and laughed ..reading his antics hahaha .. lol.. he did nt know skype ..lol..
he was funny ..


funny sy yaad aya .. who was that trying to knot arnav s tie 😉 and eating and eating through out the story 😆 and to whom payal said GO TO YUR MUMMY 😆😆😆.. and wao ..poor she ! had tasted only one salad hahaha ...




dadi ji .. nani ji .. both were just .. so so ❤️.. dadi ji here were so good na!!. DT ji ki bhi mouj ho gai 😆


mami ...lol.. she is hilarious always .. in FFs in IPK .. she is the same .. no one has ever changed her hinglish ..i like her that way only .. i guess everyone does .. bas the only bad about her wch yu turned good here was .. her being polite wth payal .. that was soo good and real ! ..lol.. i told yu before lazy that makes a good saas bahu jodi but not at all a good TRP serial lol .. i know smone .. lol .. my phupo ..haha .. we were watching TV and i was changing channels cntnuiously and she said "' hoo yee wala drama lgana ..bechaari p kitna zulum karty hai...'' hahahahaa .. and i rofled .. she was talking abt ipk 2😡 and mama ji was also good .. liked him .. his and mami ji ka aik scene tha na ..ehm types ..kya kr ry hai aap bachy baithy hai saamny ..lol.. i remember


aur kon tha LI mai .. kalyani ..and bua ji .. i ll put them in same category .. greedy characters .. i did nt like kalyani one bit .. but for bua ji .. i had a soft corner smwhere .. i thought she was nt anyways ..all is well that ends well... she forgave payal and vice versa
so i like her now


BADI AMMA ❤️ garima nad shahi .. and arvind .. evryone was awesome .. the best about LI was badi amma .. i had a neighbour ... wonder how and where she is now .. she was nt 100% like badi amma ..but whenevr it rained she used to make french fries and i called me always .. uff yar she never had a son ..agar hota tou i wd hv started my LI 😆 ..lol..

garima was cute .. she was like the same in IPK ..hyna ? ..her KYA BHABHI AAP BHI 😆
lol..sharmili type 😆
shashi was ggooodiiee good .. always at her daughter s side .. love him '
he was the only one who did nt blame arnav for scaring khushi ..and he kinda understood arnav s prespective too !! .. i like such dads😆

arvind was also a nice character no ! .. gifting a bouquet to his wife ..making her feel loved .. i liked that .. i really did ..

HOUSE HELP .. yu did nt mention HP..lol.. anyways ..house help and driver were also good ..😆

DUBEY JI .. khshi s neighbor .. he was also an acha aadmi .. grr ..bua ji .. she misbehaved wth him

abhishek .. bas theek tha .. dont remember him much ..except that his words made arnav bomb ka gola ..lol.. hayyeee how he ( arnav ) held khushi s hand and did nt let her go 😳

khushi k nana ..no cmnts ..
❤️

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the parts i liked in LI ..

NANITAAL TRIP .. I TOUUU LOVVEEEDFDDD ITTT

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BIKE RIDE ...DHOOM MACHA LY .. ( lol wt abt saiyu s bike .. she can ride now or not ? )


NEW YEAR S eve ...dance wa ... hayyyeee

their wedding wala chapter part C of that update

their FIGHT .. POST MARRIAGRE

HER DANCE .. ON LARKA BADA HAI KMAAL KA

anjali s daughter wala scene .. <3 .. and ...

AND I LOVED THIS STORY ..

lazyleaves it is not that hard to write season two .. arshi post marriage .. post bachy .. her 9 mnths .. his caring wali side ..he making FOOD for her lol..maybe thn yu can add that aalu ky pakory scene ..lol.. 447 pr 474 i guess sai sy yaad nai ab .. .. payash aftr marriage .. bua ji at payash s frst child .. saiyu met lolwa ..lol.. NK and lavanya .. GRAST s success and arnav s chacha s repenting .. shayam and anjali s happy moments wth their fairy .. arnav n khushi havng twins ..hihi.. and the twins fight like their parents ..lol... ...

last but not least thank yu so so much fr writing this story AND FOR POSTING IT HERE ON IF . thnk yu lazy ji .. adding the scenes we wshed to read ... and thnk yu fr everythng .

😃

Edited by AALUSLOLWA - 12 years ago
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Akash taking Payal to Madhumati and the scene henceforth is simply superb. You described it beautifully, I imagined the scene while reading - I was spellbound ⭐️

NK and Lavanya's meeting was adorable. Their attire says it all 😳

Happy for Shyam and Anjali, the new parents 😊 Shyam's mom has no complaints! 😃

Glad that Saiyu's marriage is fixed 😊


Arnavji iss duniya ke sabse ache pati hai ❤️
Love him for making sure Khushi is not scared, bringing all her colors back to life (playing Holi), taking care of her Nana's property and giving her the idea of establishing a charity trust.
Arnav thinks he will get uninterrupted time with Khushi after baby is born 😆

A magnificent end to the most amazing story ⭐️ 👏

Edited by Skiran - 12 years ago
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Loved da update will give detailed comment in separate comment really loved it
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oh, what should i say, its the lengthiest and the one of the many best of the updates...!!! but again, it is a superbly- & fantastically- awesome- and- and lovely- & a teasingly- & romantically- cute and breathtakingly- sweet and- fabulous update... oh looovvveeeddd... it Zehra.
🤗 girl, you have given us an update and a story to cherish... love you...!!!

now the update.
No Flashbacks --- i miss it, but again time to move forward.
Present.---
Arnav -- you made me fall in love with his character. ufff... he is such a tease. loved the starting of the update. the one where he is all set to make Khushi payback for all the naughtiness she did in the past. and finally Arnav Singh Raizada ne Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada ko apne ishare pe nacha hi liya!!!!😆 and then the way you described the situation where Khushi trying to bail out herself from that song and Arnav not budging from making her dance was sooo good...!!!

And of all the songs it was the Ladka Hai Yeh Kamal Ka!!! wow! how do you do this Always Zehra??i mean, Surprise us?

and then the much awaited consummation scene that we all awaited eagerly. Arnav deserved this uninterrupted wedding night and he left no stone upturned to make it memorable and full of Khushi.

CH 23- B
the morning of Arshi--- the Holi--- the colors--- the canvas--- uff... again am surprised at how you surprise us... loved the scene
i loved Arnav again for his thoughtfulness and love for Khushi. the property dealings and Khushi accepting it all and showing faith in Arnav was all too good. Arnav is the man who keeps his future in view while planning with anything in the present. his idea of Honeymoon along with acquiring properties and using them for the Charity purpose was the added feather to this wonderful and lovely ff.

i loved Anjali's role in this update just too much. she is such a tease for her brothers and she never misses anything at all. such an observing sister is also a headache but she is sweet and not too interfering in this update. thanks for the breather Zehra.

and the little baby girl was another good flavor to this spicy love story... And i loved Arnav her being the more observing one here than Khushi for a change as he is so easily caught on the undercurrents of love flowing between Payash.

then Payal's and Madhumati's reconciliation was so nice. you made senti with the reunion scene. And Aakash playing the medium along with Khushi who was the main victim of her buaji's devious plans, was really lovely. God! there are so many things that i love about this ff. I Am GONNA MISS IT LIKE HELL!!!😭

CH 23- C
NK and La's cute and sweet love story. at the very beginning i hated NK for his Stupidity. Now, see, i love him and La's pair like anything. Gosh! they took so much pain to give the others' sentiment and feeling a priority. Again it was applaudable Zehra how you made me fall for these two characters.

Arshi's reception and how Arnav took little revenge from Kalyani was outstanding. loved it.
GRAST was another golden feather of this update. i simply loved the idea and Khushi willing to take an active part in functioning of the Trust. and Kalyani's remorse was as Arnav rightly said, was a sight to behold.

And Arnav had finally fully utilized all the Uninterrupted time they had together. So Khushi is happily pregnant with Arnav being a proud to-be-father. but i loved the last bit of Arshi getting cozy scene.
and the story ended with such a cliffhanger promising us of the interruptions...

so now looking forward to the Epilogue.
PS--- missing LI already. but as it is said, every good thing comes to an end and so is the case with LI. 😭
Edited by celinawalter - 12 years ago
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fantastic update👏
You surprised us(readers) on the song. It was Larka Barha hai kamaal ka LOL.😆
the song really fit to Arnav, he is prince n mad for khsuhi. i was thinking of some naughty song.
Finally Arnav got his well deserve wedding night n they both leave nothing to make the most special n memorable.☺️
Mrs. jha reaction on receiving the good news of grand daughter was shocking, she was so polite. i guess she learn her lessons n it was all because of the patience of Raizadas n Infinite tolernce of Anjali and Shyam.
i love the way Akash patch up the relation of payal with her mother. he knew payal will miss her on her wedding n her mother will as well. He wanted to start their marriage with the blessing of everyone and their marriag was a golden chance for Arnav to make proudy saiyu, her mother n family to make them aware what precious gem they lost n he gain.
I love their reception dress.❤️
i love arnav encouragement to khushi for starting a social trust in the name of their parents. Moreover he made sure he was always present with her, with his best friend n huband, he was her mentor n guide as well. what else more can a girl desire in her life partner
Nk and Lavanyah couple is so cute n they are adorable, they are truly match mad(e) in heaven like arnav and khushi, Akash n payal.
the good news is also going to come soon. Arnav is perfect in his every avatar n i am sure he will be the best n lovely father to his child as well.
post the epilogue ASAP.
Edited by Javeria3991 - 12 years ago

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