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veena singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: jineejiggs
story ki shuruaat bohot unusual aur different huyi hain as expected from you, with this its interesting also, achha laga bohot, plz continue ASAP

i am glad...thank u sooo much

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veena singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: akilagoud2
nice update
continue soon
thanks for pm

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veena singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER
me confused di jaldi jadli update do.. Priya ki nehi mano to meri dil jorose dhakad raha hai
thankk u for ur pm

hehehe...mera bhi...😛 control karo

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veena singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: leena04
first of all wish u Happy annivarsary Veena ji... bas aise hi aage badhte raho go ahead... aur rahi baat is FF ki so I m surly looking frw it will be goona awesome I m sure just like ur other one... yaar par triangle story hai hope RaYa saath hi ho isme... moving to read first part...

thank u sooo much..hehehe..thoda taste change kar rhe hain...😛

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veena singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: bpatil3
Vm is superb, with rajjo enjoying his dance n ram muh lataakaake udaas hoke stare kar newali scene.
Priya is looking so good.aapne bg ko 60s ki colour add karke aur khoobsurat banadiya.
Enjoyed n thx

aww..thank u..😊

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veena singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: leena04
Part 1
hay aap kya hum bhi bardaast nahi kar sakte Rajat ko kisi bhi angle se RaYa k bech par never mind main yehj sochun gi hi nahi k woh Rajat hai main kisi aur ko hi imagine kar lungi... any way waqt ki nazakat ko dekhte hue aaisa lag raha hai kuch khaas baat hai jo Ram ko Prriya se karni hai woh bhi saadi k pehle par thodi si confusing lag rahi hai hope next update me sari batain clear ho jaye waiting for next do update soon baki yeh wala bada mazedaar tha by god...

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veena singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: vironikajain
Veena Rajat se itni nafrat..phir toh bolna banta hai..mast VM thi ji..kya scene pe banayi hai. 👏 😆
Rambabu ne aisa kya kiya ki ab Priya ki shaddi Rahul se ho gyi hai..ya phir Rambabu ne khud karayi hai..so confusing 😕
Jab Ram- Priya ki shaddi dusri bar ho rahi thi wo bhi ek hi saal mein (waise yeh bhi samjh nhi aya mjhe..lol) toh yeh kya jhol hai.. 😆
Confusing yet very interesting.. 👍🏼
Looking forward to next..
Thanx for pm..

huh...isko bolte hain jale pr namak chhidkna..are BT ki wajah se karna pada ye😆

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veena singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: lalmadhu
Hi Veenaji,
Aapki aur ek new ff...thats fantastic! I m very excited for this ff kyunki u said that aap saari preparations karke ayi ho and u have written half of the story. Thats amazing dear.
Good start...! absolutely confusing, so interesting. Please continue soon.
Thanks for the pm.

thank u sooo much..defently i will try to maintain it...🤗

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veena singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

part 2

ram priya k pas aata h priya apne gehne me uljhi hui h...ya kahen ki janbujhkar khud ko usme uljhaye hui h..jane kyun aaj ram ka pas aana uski dhadkano ko badha rha h...wo to hamesha yhi chahti thi ki ram sirf use dekhe use chahe uske hi pas rhe...lekin aaj soch rhi h ki ram kuchh na kahe..par ram ko to kehna hi h...shayad ye priya k man ka koi waham tha ki ram kahin kuchh aisa na keh de jo wo sunna na chahe..khair ram apni bat shuru karta h...

ram...priya mujhe tumse bht jaruri bat karni h...

priya...hmmm

ram...dekho priya tum meri bat bht dhyan se sunna aur samjhne ki koshish karna pls...

ram jaise bate karta ja rha tha priya gahno aur ram dono se irritate ho rhi thi jiski wajah se dono me se kisi par bhi cnsntrate nhi kar pa rhi thi...priya ki ye uljhan ram ko bhi uljha de rhi thi...

ram...priyaaa...look at me & litsen to me vry carefully...

priya ram k is tarah bat karne se thodi dar si jati h...

ram...aaa..i i ..mean..main tumse...i am sorry...m aise nhi bolna chahta tha...par main tumse bat karne ki koshish kar rha hu..aur tum sun hi nhi rhi ho..

priya ki ankho me ansu aa jate hain..wo..ye..ghne bht irritate kar rhen hain ram...isiliye apki bat pr dhyan nhi de pa rhi thi..mne bola tha ma ko ki itne na pehnaye..pr unhone suna nahi..i am sorry ram..

ram thoda relax hota h...hufff..its ok priya..pls tum ro mat yar...main dant nhi rha tha...sirf tumhe kuchh samjhana chahta hu..jo ki bht jaruri h..achha theek hai...lao main ise theek karta hu..lao ise utar deta hu

priya...nahi ..ma ko bura lagega...

ram..priyaa..ma ko kuchh bura nahi lagega..tum unke liye unki beti ho aur hamesha tumhari khushi hi chahti h..hum sab tumhari khushi chahte hain..

ram bate karte hue priya ka neckles kholne lagta h..itne dino me ram janbujhkar priya k itne kareeb kabhi nhi aya tha..to bechare ko pta hi nhi h ki neckless kholne k liye wo pichhe jake aram se bhi khol sakta tha..pr wo samne se hi shuru ho gya ..ufff..uljhi hui priya ko aur uljha diya ek to ram ka chehra itna kareeb hai..upar se garm sanse..priya ankhe band karke bahen faila k ram k seene se lag jati h aur kas k pakad leti h..ye ram k liye bhi unbareble ho jata h qki usne aisi ummeed nhi ki thi..lekin wo bhi khud ko chhudane ki koshish nhi karta h...dono apne me hain nhi phir bhi ekdusre se bate kar rhen hain...they whisprs...

priya...raam

ram...main koshish kar rha hu pr khul nhi rha h

priya..peechhe se kholenge tab to khulega

ram...to tum pehle nhi bta sakti thi

priya...ap khud nhi samjh sakte hain jab huk peechhe se laga h to khulega bhi peechhe se hi..

ram hatne ki koshis karta h pr priya jane nhi deti h ..to rambabu k pas option nhi bachta h aur wo bhi priya ko pakad hi lete hain..lekin main thehri pyar ki dushman to sorry...kahani aage badhani h to disturb to karna padega boss...

natasha...are ye kya ho rha h??..

ram turant priya k peechhe aake neckless khol deta h..dramebaz kahin ka..jab itna jaldi khulna tha to itni der se kya timepass kar rha tha..

ram...main priya ki help kar rha tha...tumlogo ne itna sab pehna diya h wo handle nhi kar pa rhi thi...

natasha...are to main kab mna kar rhi hu..bas door band kar lena chahiye na..pati patni ka room h kuchh bhi ho sakta h help karte karte...

ram...bakwas band karo aur kam btao...

natasha...hehehe...neeche bula rhen hain...der ho rhi h...

ram...han tum chalo hum aa rhen hain...

chhoti to chali jati h pr ram phir se shuru ho jata h..oye dnt take it otherwise..bat karne ki bat kar rhi hu main...

ram...priya dekho tum pehle meri bat sun lo

priya...nahi ram neeche chalte hain wrna phir koi aa jayega...pls

ram...pr priya meri bat bht jaruri h yar...

priya...abhi to neeche jana jyada jaruri h...

priya ram ko jabrdasti neeche lekar chali jati h..neeche sabhi bht besabri se unka intezar kar rhe the..sabhi ikkattha hote hain..rampriya ko amne samne laya jata h tabhi ma kehti hain...

ma...ek min ruko..are bhai pehle ye to btao aaj ram priya k liye kya laya h..??

rambabu ki ek kamal ki adat thi..wo koi bhi mauka ho..koi bhi special din ho..kahin se bhi aaye kahin bhi jaye...priya k liye hamesha flower aur koi gift jarur le aata tha..to ab logo ko itni adat pad chuki thi is cheez ki ..ki log usse ummeed karne lage hain ki ram jarur kuchh laya hoga priya k liye..are itna special din jo h...aur priya to ram se bhi do kadam aage..us flower ko tab tak sambhal kar rkhti thi jab tak ram dusra nhi de deta tha...goooddd..dono k dono pagal hain...khair...

rishabh...han bhai bolo na aaj kya laye bhabhi k liye...??

natasha...bolo na bhai priya k liye kya laye ho??

ram...main aaj priya ka pati laya hu...

pehle to sabhi ram ki taraf dekhte hain aur phir hasne lagte hain..priya sharma k nazare jhuka leti h...

natasha...bhaiii...mazak mat karo bolo na kya laye...??

ram ekdm seriously bolta h...main mazak nhi kar rha hu..m sach me priya ka pati laya hu

sab ram ko dekhne lagte hain priya abhi bhi muskura rhi hoti h par ram ki taraf dekh rhi hoti h..ram nazare churane lagta h jisse priya ko daubt hota h..qki ram kuchh bhi kare pr nazare kabhi nhi churata that means it has some problm...

to b continue...

Edited by veena23 - 11 years ago