HuM HaI DeEwAnE- Rishbala FF (Part 23/page 121) - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kg15

lovely update dia..
finally he realised.. waiting for madhu to realise the same..


Thank u kavya di..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh so now finally RK accepted that he loved Madhu...lets see what he plans for her birhdaye...cnt. soon nd thnks for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow surprise...really waiting fr it
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow RK n padmini giving surprise
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update
Wow rk gonna give her surprise
Waiting eagerly
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update..Madhu taking care of RK and RK feeling J about madhu going out with Someone else...RK taking medicine after barking over phone lol !! It's kinda cute...do continue soon..loving it so much 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for late update.. Hope u guys will forgive me.. Here's the next Part..
Part 12

Office was over..Rk Madhu both came back to their respective house..Rk was in his room..
Rk to himself: So be ready for my surprise..Today at 12 I ll tell u tht how much I love u..I ll tell u abt my feelings..
Dips stood near the door n overhears whtever Rk told n fuming..
Dips to herself: So u lov tht chawlbala..No ways Rk..U only love me..She ll never be urs..
Otherside Madhu was in her room..
M to herself: Today Rk didnt talk with me for once..Whts wrong with him..
Then she remembered yesterday Rk n her convo when she was with Mukund..
M to herself: Y did he talk like tht yesterday..Ok..Let me ask him..
Nd she was going to call bt stopped..
M to herself: No no..Wht r u doing Madhu..Wht does he think abt u..Stop thinking abt him..
Suddenly her phone was ringing n she attend the call...

Its 10pm..Rk was getting ready..He wore a white shirt with blue blazer..As always he looks just stunning..Dips came in his room..
Dips: Rk where r u going..
Rk: None of ur business.. So just stay away..
Rk going to left bt dips hold his hand..Rk look at her with raised eyebrows..She came near him n carressed his cheecks..
Dips: I know Rk u r going to chawl to meet with Madhubala..How can u do this to me Rk.. U still love me na..
Rk removed her hand with jerk..
Rk: Dipali last time I warn u not to come close to me.. I dnt love u.. U r nthng for me..
Dips (angrily): U dnt love me naa..Then do u love tht chawlbala..
Rk (shouts): Dipali..Mind ur language..If u cant respect her then its better for u dnt tell abt her..nd If u say anything wrong abt her then u know very well wht can I do..So just stay away frm me frm my life..Understand..And now If ur bakwas was complete then the door is waiting for u so OUT..
Dips fumes n left frm there..
Hour passed..Its 11:30pm.. Madhu was in her room lost in thoughts..Suddenly her phone rings..Its Rk..Seeing his name a small smile came on her face..
M: Hello..
Rk: Come near the window..
M: Wht..
Rk: Do wht I told..
Madhu came near the window n saw Rk was on road..
M: Wht r u doing here..
Rk: Get ready n come fast..
M: Bt Rk..
Rk: If u dnt come in 15min then I ll come inside..
N: Ok..Ok..coming..
They cut the call..
M to herself: I m sure he is mad..
After 15min Madhu came outside of chawl..She wore a Lemon color saree..She also looks stunning..
Rk: U looks beautiful..
Madhu was blushing..
M: Thnx.. Bt where ll we go..
Rk: Surprise..
They both sat in car n Rk drive away..
After sometime they reached at a place..Rk got down frm car n came in Madhu's side..She also got down..
M: Rk wht r we doing here..
Rk: Sshhh..Lets go..
They going to leave bt Rk stopped n covered her eyes with his hand..
Rk: Shhh..Lets go..
They came in a place..Rk removed her hand frm her eyes..Madhu slowly opened her eyes n Rk pointed her towards the sky..Madhu looked up..There was fire crackers nd which wrote "Happy Birthday".. A big smile came on her face n then she look around..The place decorated with lights...
Rk: Happy birthday Madhu..
M: Thnx..
Both look into each others eyes..After a while they came back to their sense..
Rk: Come with me..
Rk takes her near a table..There is a cake..
Rk: Come on..cut the cake..
Madhu smiles n cut the cake..nd fed him..He also fed her..
M: Thank u..
Rk: For wht..
M: For giving me this surprise..
Rk smiles..
Rk: Shall we dance..
M: Music..
Rk take his phone out n played a song..He forwarded his hand n Madhu also put her hand on his hand..Nd put another hand on his shoulder..Rk hold her by her waist..They danced...
Bg: Bahon k darmiya..
They lost in each other..After sometime they came back to their sense..
Rk: Madhu..I hv one more surprise..
M: One more..
Rk nodded yes...
Rk: Close ur eyes..
Madhu closed her eyes..After few mins..
Rk: Now open..
Madhu opened her eyes n there is another fire crackers on the sky..She looked up n was shocked..Its wrote "I love u Madhu"... Then Rk came front of her n bend on his knee..
Rk: I love u Madhu.. I dnt know how when bt I fall for u.. Do u love me.. (forwarded his hand)
First Madhu was blushing then she thinks something in mind n pushed herself back...nd turned back..Rk was confused n he got up..
Rk: Madhu..
M: Rk take me home..
Rk: Bt Madhu..
M: Rk plz take me home right now..
Rk fumes n they left frm there...Rk dropped Madhu in her chawl n left..
While driving the car he remembered Rishbala moments..Then how he proposed her n all..
Rk to himself: Why did she doing this..
Otherside Madhu came in her room n was thinking whatever Rk told...
She remembered Dips called her in evening n said her nt to come close to Rk as she belongs frm a middle class family..She is nt Rk's type..Rk belongs frm high society..So just stay away frm Rk..
M to herself: How can I love u Rk..I m nt ur type..Dipali was right..I dnt deserve u..I cnt love u..
Bt frm inside in her heart she was happy to know Rk loves her..
Waiting for ur likes n comments
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow !! i,m 1st to comment... 😃
Okay now coming to update.. i think update was superb... 👏 but i don't think madhu should take dips that much seriously... & for example (agar main kisi se pyaar kerti hoon & suddenly someone calls me whom i don't even know says me to stay away from him , to main uski baaton ko itna seriously bhi nahi lun gi ,i mean bas thora sa seriously lun gi)... 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 anyways i,m happy that finally RK confessed his feeling to madhu ☺️
Edited by lily_rocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Dear!Hate Deepali!finally RK proposed Madhubala!but She is an idiot to listen to that vamp's words!pls continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Awesome update Dear!Hate Deepali!finally RK proposed Madhubala!but She is an idiot to listen to that vamp's words!pls continue soon!


i totally agree with , go on page 46 , even i have
commented the same thing... 😆😃
Edited by lily_rocks - 12 years ago

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