Pretty Woman (ADAPTATION) Maneet FF...ON HIATUS :'( Note:Pg 87 - Page 35

Originally posted by: AnonymousMG

sure hun😳 from next time onwrds

awesome update...
maan shared his past...geet wanted to sooth his pain...
maan expect too see loth in geet's eyes after hearing his past n what he did...
bt he didnt see any of that...
loved it...

yaaayyy u r back with an update.loved how maan is opening up to geet.

Welcome back dear

Maan want to take their relation ahead.

wow beautiful update... Geet is all taking pain of Maan & Maan feels home with Geet... too good... i just loved Asad's brotherly feeling for Geet...

thanx for pm...i was waiting long for this update.. thanx again

next update do it soon na.. pls.😊

dear anonymous,

to say i liked this...would just be an understatement. if it were ever possible i'd have shouted I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVED IT LIKE HELL a million times right on your face. i had marked this long back but never got a proper span of time to read it and today i just stole some time from shopping and music lessons just to read this.😳

everything you described about them... this is just more than a movie. i had thot of watching the movie first and then reading this initially...but hell no..i take my words back. am not gonna watch it..not as of now when am so much in love with your story. their meeting and subsequent 'hook-up' but 'no hook-up' had me hooked up to this story. i did nothing but be in awe of your writing the whole 1 and a half hours that i took reading each and every line slowly and thoroughly.
what cracked me up was her 'hyena' laugh watching roshesh and then ther 'practising IT" with a cucumber!!😲🤣
undeniable, she loves him and he does too... but their professions abide them by certain rules that they r not supposed to break. she has her obligations...she is a Prostitute and she shouldnt get too much involved... she respects that but there is nothing that could stop her from falling for him and getting close to him again and again in her own sweet way.☺️
Asad...boy i thot he was going to throw her out of the hotel when he saw her first but then i love his and geet's sweet bonding. madam suggested she was his niece?? goodness...who was she even trying to fool?🤣
the piano update and geet's surprise...they were sooo romantic yet so full of emotions that i felt each and every bit of it.
read ur note regarding ur job.. i know trainings r just too tiresome. but please try to update fast... i just don't think i will be able to wait for that long...
sending u a frnd req
pls pm whenever u update
i solely rely on pms to catch up my updates

love
ash

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

dear anonymous,

to say i liked this...would just be an understatement. if it were ever possible i'd have shouted I LOVED IT I LOVED IT I LOVED IT LIKE HELL a million times right on your face. i had marked this long back but never got a proper span of time to read it and today i just stole some time from shopping and music lessons just to read this.😳

everything you described about them... this is just more than a movie. i had thot of watching the movie first and then reading this initially...but hell no..i take my words back. am not gonna watch it..not as of now when am so much in love with your story. their meeting and subsequent 'hook-up' but 'no hook-up' had me hooked up to this story. i did nothing but be in awe of your writing the whole 1 and a half hours that i took reading each and every line slowly and thoroughly.
what cracked me up was her 'hyena' laugh watching roshesh and then ther 'practising IT" with a cucumber!!😲🤣
undeniable, she loves him and he does too... but their professions abide them by certain rules that they r not supposed to break. she has her obligations...she is a Prostitute and she shouldnt get too much involved... she respects that but there is nothing that could stop her from falling for him and getting close to him again and again in her own sweet way.☺️
Asad...boy i thot he was going to throw her out of the hotel when he saw her first but then i love his and geet's sweet bonding. madam suggested she was his niece?? goodness...who was she even trying to fool?🤣
the piano update and geet's surprise...they were sooo romantic yet so full of emotions that i felt each and every bit of it.
read ur note regarding ur job.. i know trainings r just too tiresome. but please try to update fast... i just don't think i will be able to wait for that long...
sending u a frnd req
pls pm whenever u update
i solely rely on pms to catch up my updates

love
ash