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Posted: 11 years ago
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One word for the update: Awwwsssummm!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hayeee super cute update...
rey bhiii na mauka ki nahi chodta kriya ko taang karne...
this update reminded me of ARSHA...
kunwar also teases shaks same way...
love d pouch n choclate wala scene...
kriya is sooo cute...
waiting for nxt upadate...
jaldi update karooo...
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I took out stuff from my locker while Reyaansh leaned on the next locker cramming some Physics formulas. He always did that repeating them loud enough to be heard till next floor."Momentum=p=mass x velocity=m"

"Reyaansh lower your volume."

"Sorry, So Force (F) = Mass x... ah" and he forgot. "Acceleration" I said.

"Yup, Force = Mass x Acceleration and... What's with Emma?" He said. I (her look) looked at him when my ears heard Emma "Yeh physics main Emma kahan se aayi?" He turned my face towards the left of corridor. Emma walked in corridor talking to herself with some notes in her hand.

"Is she really talking to herself?" I said. "Same question." She walked close and stood in front of Reyaansh. "How do you feel working in administrative services?" She asked.

"Reyaansh in Administrative Service Haha country ka kalyan ho jayega." He shut his book near my face "Haha tum to jaise jhandey gaadh dogi na Administration mein jaake." I didn't pay attention to what he said. "Guys stop and plz don't talk in hindi in front of me I don't understand anything."

"Okay but why were you talking to urself and what are these notes?" he said.

"These are notes silly boy this is my script. I'm playing role of a reporter in a street play anyways I'm getting late see uh guys in class." She left. "Ab play ka kalian ho jayega." He again opened his mouth. I hit him with a book on his head."Yaar tum har baat pe marne kyu aah jati ho?"

I folded my arms. "Ab laaton ke bhoot baton se nahi mante na." This phrase perfectly suited him. Few weeks had passed with him but he never changed his habits still the same irritating guy.

In class the situation was as usual half of the students speaking and half of them sleeping. "Wake up students, I have an announcement. This weekend means tomorrow school has organized a trip to Chicago Research Organization during daytime we'll visit the research center and at night a campfire few km ahead. Interested students can give their names." Teacher announced.

"Wow Trip, your coming right?" Reyaansh jumped.

My head moved in negation. "Why?" he said

I gave a faint smile "Actually I've a thing or so to do this weekend so I won't be able to make it."

My cousin Gippi aka Gurpreet was coming today from India but that was not the only reason I never attended any trip or tour after we shifted here.

Staying out of house for trips and all made me remember the old days when I and Baba went out for picnics. I had left that fun loving Kria somewhere in past but Reyaansh didn't leave the topic there. He followed me whole day and asked the same question Why I wasn't coming?

I sat with Joanna in library where he jumped I don't know from where, "Kyu nahi?"

"Kyuki mujhe nahi jana ab dubara mat poochna." I said. "Arey I'm asking the same why not?" Joanna was confused between us. "What is it guys? Why arguing and if you wanna continue den plz continue in English or else give subtitles. I'm not able to understand even a word."

"Joanna I'm just asking her why isn't she coming for trip?" She nodded. "Even I wanna know why aren't you coming?"

"You are my side Joanna and Reyaansh don't manipulate her."

"I'm not manipulating just asking the reason and why don't you give what I want?" He said a bit loud. People around gave up their books and concentrated more on our table. "Guy's he's just asking for the reason nothing else. No double meaning plz" Joanna said.

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At home my 15 year old cousin Gippi (pic) was there for a week, she was sweet and a bit elder from her age. I kept my cell off to spend some time with her. "Kria di, I'll be back from kitchen need something to fill my little tommy." She left to empty my kitchen.

I roamed in my room reading when Reyaansh entered through the window. "Reyaansh, tum... What the hell you'r doing here?"

He jumped on my bed, "Baat karni thi tumse. Tumhi ne apna cell band karke rakha hai so I came."

"I don't wanna talk. Just go..." He took my pillow and played with it. "Go else I'll call Mom and Dad." But my warning didn't scare him. "Go on call them unhi se I'll ask why aren't uh coming?"

"Tumhari sui ab bhi wahi ataki hai. Mom... Dad..." I called in a very low voice.

"Itni dheere se u'r calling Mom and Dad or Kisi chuhe ko bula rahi ho? Let me call them... MOM... DAD" I shut his mouth with my hand. "Aye stop shouting they'll really come here and wo mere parent's hain. Why are you calling them Mom and Dad? Huh"

"Soon they'll be mine." He whispered. "What?"

"Kuch nahi, ab bolo kya hua hai?"

"Meri marzi. Just go now." I said. He came down from bed and held me through my knees. "Reyaansh what are you doing? I'll fall." I pleaded. "pehle batao varna I won't leave your room as well as you."

"U'r holding me too tightly I'm not able to move. Main gir jaungi."

"Arey agar tum nahi aayi to main Emma and Joanna I nazaron main gir jaunga. Kya kahunga unse that main unki friend se reason bhi nahi jaan paya?"

The door unlocked oh damn! Gippi, "Di gajjar ka halwa." I looked down but he wasn't there, my eyes wandered around the room. He winked lying under the bed. "Gippi Tum yahan kar rahi ho?" it slipped out of my mouth. "Di, we are sharing this room till the time I'm here. Kya ho gaya hai aapko?"

"Muje Kya hua hai... Nothing. I perfectly fine"

"Kuch to baat zaroor hai jo aap muje bata nahi rahi ho."

"Exactly mujhe bhi nahi bata rahi hai." He came out of the bed. Gippi's mouth fell open, "Di yeh kaun hai and what is he doing here? Aapka boyfriend hai? Aapne bataya nahi."

"Abhi tak to nahi hoon but jaldi hi I'll be." He said. "Shup Up Reyaansh. Gippi, he's my classmate."

"Aur yeh kaun hai?" He said. "My cousin and She's here isiliye I wasn't coming for trip." I tried to manipulate and Reyaansh would have agreed also if Gippi hadn't interfered. "Trip? Di you have a trip? To aapko jana chahiye na I'm here for a week more."

"How sweet Gippi? Kria your sister is too sweet. Ab yeh tumhari behen hai to meri bhi behen hui right after all we are Good Friends. Vaise Gippi Tum khaane ke liye kya layi thi?"

"Gajjar ka halwa. Aap khaoge?" Gippi offered.

"Haye itne pyar asking to ovio." They both enjoyed the halwa on my couch. "Di Aap jao na Trip pe."

"Kria tum aao na trip pe."

"Both of you shup up. I'm not going anywhere aur tum halwa khatam karo aur Bhaago yahan se." I said. "Fine, ab main bolunga bhi nahi to come coz I know u'll be there." He winked at took an exit from window. "Di aap ja rahe ho?" Gippi asked again.

"Nahi"

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Here my Update ends.
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Edited by Dewdrops.ShaKun - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Res..
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haye atlast iss ff pe mene 1st res kar hi liya
awsum update dii
haye loved rey nd kriyas cute fight..
haye trip going nice
haye reason jaane keliye ghar tak poch gaya rey
haye loved gippi nd reys convo
update soon dii..
Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res unres.. Ye jo tu installment me xcitement badha rhi h na..its nt gud..anyways thanx 4 updating abhi abhi...muje ye reyaansh bhot acha lag rha hai...bhot means bhot zyada...kria portrayed is perfect..isse better nai ho skti...rey is always so enthusiastic...loving it...aj ke do teen dialogue to best the... 1. Jald hi mere bi mom dad ho jaenge.. 2.abi nai bt jald hi ban jaunga(boyfrnd) 3. Dat double meaning wala by joanna.. In do dialogue se ye to pata lg gya ki rey likes her..chal chal..he loves hr 4 sure..this was highlight today..nd ab to me bi xcited 4 trip...amazing part..bt mai to kabi satisfy nai hoti..wese m waiting 4 TS u know..
Edited by akankshaArsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
The update was damn cute
Loved the way rey was stern to make kria agree for the trip
I loved the way he was determined to find the reason behind kria's denial
It reflects the concern he has for her ^_^
And the bedroom encounter was extremely adorable awwwie
Loving the mischievious rey
You have a rare quality of making the readers glued to ur work
Job well done arya
Update soon
Edited by -Khwahish- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
Lovely update 😊
Rey kitna irritate krta hai Kriya ko😆
Trip naa jaane ke reason ke liye ghar tak aagaya n uski behen ke sath halwa khaya
I loved it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What an amazing update...is Rey okay? I mean uske ghar tak pahunch gaya, just for an answer, what a sore enthusiast he is...one thing i loved to know here was that Rey already likes Kriya..good going, rajdhani express hehehee!!

Update soon :))
Edited by Beautiful_King - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
awesome update😃
loved it
rey bhi na kitna irritate karta hai kriya ko
poor kriya
rey tho alredy kria ke peeche pagal hai
rey wanting to became her boy friend already lol
and he calling kriya mom dad as his mom dad
loved rey and kria cute fight
and trip hmm maza ayega
and rey kriya ko manne ke liya uska ghar tak agaya
wo bhi humesha ki tarha window se entry he he he
so pls next part jaldi update karo
i am waiting for it
sorry itne der ke baad unres kiya
wo kya hai na exms hai mere
issiliye bhul gaye
Edited by ramya.reddy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Good to see that she accepted him around ...😃

Afterall.. vo aise peecha toh chodne wala hai nhi...😛

Rofl... he'back on his tactics... But to manaofy her for trip..😉

Omg.. did he really said that?? 😲 He's so much in love with her... awww...

Rofl... he's so cute ... kriya ko to jana hi hoga trip pe ...😎

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