ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread Four* (COMPLETED)

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Desire6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#381

beautiful updt Juhi...Sad dat it is ending soon...

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namita11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#382

Its soo beautiful...I just don't know what else to say. I have no words

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opsyellow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#383

Sorry Juhi but I have only read one chapter then i got busy and now i am waiting you to finish this story so i can read this in one go. i think i will read this on Christmas holiday.

thanks for the Pm

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aafan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#384

This was so heartfelt... I loved it.

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a.vaishnavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#385

You know the curse is really irritating... Uff..:||

Even though we all pretty much guessed about the innocence of their own child being the cure, I surely had one thing in my mind that it can't be really that easy and since its your story it surely won't have a flat climax.

Waiting for the epilogue eagerly. I want to know how khushi's curse gets finally cured and also the raizada daughters name.

Honestly speaking initially when you revealed about khushi's secret in this fic i wasn't very comfortable. It came as a shock. I couldn't say whether i liked it or not. In fact, to be frank enough it was really scary for me.

But now I could infact very well say that this experimental genre has been your finest works on fiction till date. At least thats what I think.

You know I can very well visualise payal's jealousy filled eyes and total psychotic scene in my head where payal is cursing khushi. It really sends shivers to whole of my body. It is really scary.

Very well job done by you. Really glad to know that i came across your stories.

PS: This is probably the longest comment i have ever written in any of your fics. :D

Regards,

Vaishnavi

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shr1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#386

It was so .. sweet I'm tearful. Their hope, love, togetherness is so sweet at the same time, the frantic wedding night, their pain when she had to leave her baby to go ,helpless Arnav with their baby, it was soul wrenching. Wow dear :)

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Itu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#387

An awesome update..

I want to keep my usual detailed comment till i read the epilogue..

still can't believe u r ending it..

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Phoenixrises

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Posted: 12 years ago

#388

OMG!! They got married and had a daughter?!! There has been much progress in their relationship and I can't wait to see what you do with the epilogue. And I am truly waiting to see what the cure and how their happy ending will come about...