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swati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

awesomeee too good very nice part waitinggg for next asap.

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AASUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Selvz 🤗

How hv u been?

You're here.🤗Missed u and we were looking for you 😆 But just used Flint's pic cuz I figured you'd like him so you will land in here .🤣 I was right and here you are.😆

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pg 13

v nice ch. I liked the scenes, interaction. Meet are awesome friends. Glad Prem's parents and Meet and family are there for Heer. That's v sweet, sad Prem is in his own world like living in his own island.

Dialogues are cool picture taking is quite fun.😆 Even Bauji and G3 is so interested in pics.😆

I know all of them were trying to make PH closer. I'm happy to know Heer's creative talent and her hard work is appreciated.

Ty so much.❤️ We love your cute story. Muah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

WOW..an update...thanks 😊
Loved it <3.. Awesome...

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tarannum6

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Woww its Superb update... Loved it...
Eagerly waiting for the next part... Please update soon...

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kiran

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Posted: 12 years ago

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nice update...i was happy for heer at first when prem was saying thanks to her...but at the end i was feeling sad for her...pls cont soon and also ur other ffs also

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luvharshiti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Thanks for the update
Cute update
Loved it
Eagerly waiting for the next
Please update soon

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AASUS

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Would love to see next part soon.🤗

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haajuuuu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

just read all the shots in a single go its amaxing really loved it
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plx update soon plx plx
and i loved all the parts... the way your story plot is its awesome 👍🏼
im waiting anxiously

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newt2007

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Thanks you so much for reading and commenting

Thanks for your patience.

friends, sorry for not able to sent PM for the updates.

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newt2007

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<font size="3">Shot 6</font>

<font size="3">Prem sat in his room throwing coat on the bed. He thought did i put over drama. She seems to be in happy mood.' He walked towards window i shouldn't have insulted her like this. She did everything for me.' he looked up am i still in love with Ash.' he shook his head no its wrong. She is another person's wife now.' He shuffled his hair in confusion can i ask sorry to her?' he shook his head why? I didn't make any mistake. She is the one who misunderstood me.' He felt disturbance in his heart she was happy in the morning.' He scratched his head she don't have to be this much quiet. She is educated and well qualified. She can simply go back to India and inform everyone about me.' he sat on the bed she didn't do that. She respects my feelings. I should respect hers.'

Heer is inside her room trying all the switches. Light is not working. Fan is not working. She got angry. Her disappointment turned anger on switches. She repeatedly pressed all the switches with full force. Nothing seems to be working out. She came to sense and thought what i'm doing like stupid. Better go downstairs to sleep.' She grabbed a pillow and blanket and decided to go to guest room.

Prem stepped out of his room. He saw Heer carrying pillow and blanket coming out of her room. He is confused seeing her in that state. He called Heer'. Heer heartfelt a jump when she hear him calling. She stopped. She looked at him ha Prem.' happiness is visible in her face and voice. Prem where are you going?' he pointed the blanket with blanket and pillow.' Heer sadly some problem in my room. No current.' She paused I thought of sleeping in guest room' she pointed down downstairs.' Prem without wasting a second no problem you sleep in my room. I'll ask the electrician to check it tomorrow.' Heer is happy. But she didn't show it outside. She managed its okay. i'll ' Prem interrupted come'. Heer doesn't want to argue as she feared he will say yes' to her hesitation.
Heer calmly walked inside his room without showing her happiness. Prem this blanket is not needed.' Heer ha' she went to keep blanket in her room. Prem waited for her near the door. She came to her room. He entered behind her. He closed the door behind them.
Heer quickly sat on the bed. Prem you sleep. I have some work to do.' he went to wash room. Heer silently lied down on the bed. Prem went directly to couch and started working in his laptop.
Around 1 in the night, Prem heard some murmuring sound from Heer. Initially he ignored thinking she may be talking in her sleep. Later he found her sound little fearful. He got up and went to her. He saw her shivering. Her lips are blabbering something. He is confused. He kept his hand on her shoulder to wake her up. He felt heat on her shoulder. He quickly kept his palm on her forehead. He murmured having fever.' He is confused. He doesn't have any medicine in hand.
Prem quickly called Preet. Before Preet say halo' Prem shouted Preet, Heer is having fever.' Preet thought this man is crazy' he instructed Prem,give her medicine.' Prem i don't have anything.' Preet looked at the clock. Meher what happened Preet?' Preet Heer is having fever' Meher sat on the bed. Prem she is murmuring and shivering.' Preet wait, i'll ask ma.' He ran with mobile to tasneem room.
Tasneem gave some instruction to Prem over phone. she said i'll be there in few minutes. Don't get tense' when she found Prem is in tension and blabbering like kid. Prem is tensed and don't know what to do. He tried to wake up Heer. but Heer is almost in semi conscious state.
Within 10 minutes he heard door bell. He ran down to open the door. Tasneem with Preet and Meher came. Tasneem quickly checked Heer's temperature. He applied something on Heer's forehead. Then she gave some syrub. Prem restlessly walked around the bed. Preet tried to calm him. Prem is internally cursing himself for not taking care of Heer.
Preet made him sit in the couch. Prem covering his face sat thinking his stupidity. After an hour, Tasneem felt Heer body temperature reducing. Heer opened her eyes and saw Tasneem infront of her. She confusingly tried to sit straight. Tanseem stopped. Meher Heer how are you feeling now?' Heer confusingly held her head you all are'. Prem came to her in hurry. he sat on the bed Heer, are you okay?' Heer ha Prem. what happened to me?' he kept his palm on her head you had fever.' Tasneem smiled you had fever. But Prem had heart attack.' Heer Prem are you okay.' she tried to getup but her body didn't allow. Prem i'm okay Heer. Aunty is joking.' Tasneem looking at Prem okay Prem, you give her this medicine if again temperature rises. I'll send breakfast for both of you.' She got up. They all left.
Prem came to Heer who is still in confusion. Prem entered the room. Heer i'm sorry Prem.' Prem sat next to her sorry for what. Luckily today you slept here. You might have struggled like this if you slept alone' he feared to think about that. okay. you sleep.' Heer again sorry Prem.' Prem why you again?' Heer interrupted yday water heater was not working.' She paused. Prem angrily so you took bath in cold water.' Heer fearfully shook her head. Prem you are mad Heer. this cold is not like our Mumbai cold.' Prem stopped thinking scolding her now is useless. It all because of his stupid decision of staying in separate rooms.' He covered her properly with blanket you sleep.' Heer i'm hungry.' Prem don't you eat your dinner.' Heer i waited for you.' Prem hit his head with palm you are a stupid Heer.' he got up wait'. Heer biscuit is enough.' Prem where is it?' Heer kitchen counter' Prem ran down to bring her water and biscuit. He came back with a packet full of biscuit. He gave her two. She ate and closed her eyes enjoying his care for her in his eyes.

Morning, Heer opened her eyes and saw Prem busy in his laptop. She looked the clock near bed. It show 8. She thought OMg' she quickly tried to get up. But she felt dizzy. She is about to fall down. But Prem held her in his hand what are you doing Heer?' Heer 8'o clock.' Prem so what?' Heer i'm late.' Prem Heer take rest.' Heer but ma.' Prem ma?' Heer Bapuji and ma will come online.' Prem you sit. I'll bring the laptop here.' Heer i want to go to washroom.' Prem okay come.' He left her inside bathroom. He came out call me once you finish'.
Before Heer come out of the washroom, Prem set up the laptop on the bed. He took breakfast in a plate and kept it on the bed. Hearing Heer opening the toilet door, he helped her to sit on the bed. Teji and Balraj are not online. Prem you finish the breakfast before they come online.' Heer i don't feel like eating.' Prem you should eat. You need to take medicine.' He started feeding her. she you go to office Prem. getting late.' Prem continued feeding her i'm not going today. I can work from home.'
Teji and Balraj came online. They saw Prem feeding Heer. After exchanging wishes Teji Heer what happened? Why Prem is feeding you?' Prem shouted she has fever ma.' Teji and Balaj are worried about Heer but at the same time they are happy Prem is taking care of Heer. They spoke to Heer and in between Prem joined their conversation.
Full day Prem was with Heer. He gave her food, medicine and made sure she is okay. Rest of the time he is busy in his work. She enjoyed his presence around her. She had fear deep in her heart its all because of her sickness. Once she is aright, everything will go back to zero.' She closed her eyes praying please God have mercy on me.'

Next morning, Heer got up early. She felt pain in her body because of lying one full day on the bed. She wanted to prepare some breakfast for her. He is still sleeping. She quickly freshens up and went down. She made some sandwiches and kept it on the dining table. She was coming out of kitchen with one mug of coffee, Prem came downstairs wearing his business suit how are Heer?' Heer i'm fine.' Prem placed his office bag on the dining table. He went to kitchen. He came out with an aluminium foil. He packed two sandwiches. He grabbed his bag and walked towards the door bye Heer.' Heer took few seconds to understand what he did. She happily said bye Prem.'
Rest of the day Heer was happy and flying in heaven. The whole day she recollected his bye' several time and smiled like a mad. She prepared dinner for him and kept it on the dinning table. She went upstairs to keep her dried dress in the other room. Prem came home and saw Heer digging something in other room in dark. He entered what are you doing in the dark Heer?' Heer jerked in fear and about to fall. Prem held her in his hand and helped her stand straight. Heer i was keeping my cloth.' Prem you can keep it in our room. Come.' He walked out of the room. She stood thinking did he tell our room?' Prem called Heeer' Heer came to present and ran to him.
Prem pointed his cupboard you move my dresses this side and keep yours here.' Heer shook her head. Prem ordered you can do that slowly. Don't stress yourself.' Heer shook her head again like an obedient child. Prem smiled i'm hungry Heer.' Heer shocked and looked at him. Prem have food for me.' Heer happily shook her head you freshen up.' Prem went to washroom picking up his towel.
Heer served food for him. Prem you too sit and eat.' Heer no you finish.' He pulled her to sit next to him. he served for her. she hate silently. He praised the taste of dishes in between. She is happy.

That week passed silently. Prem and Heer didn't have much conversation. But they slept in the same room. He ate what she cooked. He asked her to pick up shirts. Small incidents made her happy. He didn't show any interest in rectifying the problem in next room. When Heer asked, Prem told he don't want anyone to come inside the house when Heer is alone. He never spoke anything personally to her. He enquired and had some casual talk in response to her action.

Preet sat playing with Meher's hair. Meher pushed him away angrily. Preet what happened dear?' Meher sat facing you are coming home around 6 in the evening.' Preet ha i can't stay from you for long.' He blushed. She is serious. He is confused. She then why you are telling Prem to stay at office till late night.' He me. No. he is also leaving around 6. Mostly with me or little earlier than me.' Meher thought then why he returns late in the night?' he shook her what happened?' she he is not going home then.' He what?' she Heer said he returns late and leaves early.' He why? Where is he going?' she don't know'. He something wrong between these two. I guessed when we met them first time.' She me too thought the same. But i thought they grew up in India and won't be used to staying close in front of others.' He he was tensed when she got sick' Both thought for a while. He we'll do one thing. This weekend to celebrate ma-dad wedding day, we go out with them. we'll be able to get some clue to sort out their problem.' She agreed.

Prem shouted Heer, i'm going to get gift for aunty and uncle. Do you want anything?' Heer shouted from kitchen get some fruits and sweets.' Prem then.' Heer thats all.' Prem came to kitchen and stood in the door way i asked for you.' Heer packing in a foil i don't want anything Prem. I prepared everything. Just packing. You come fast.' Prem smiled okay. you get ready. I'll be back in 10 minutes.' Heer walked passed him taking the packed bag to dining table. Prem 'I already ordered. I have to collect thats all.' Heer okay come fast.' She ran upstairs to get ready. Prem with a smile on his face walked out of the house.
Heer dumped few things in her handbag. She took quick shower before Prem comes back. She dressed and about to comb her hair. She heard Prem mobile ringing. She picked up the mobile he left the mobile here.' She saw Ash number flashing on the screen. Heer face changed thinking still he has her number. Why she is calling now?' she decided to answer the call. As soon as Heer told halo' Ash on the otherside barked give the phone to Prem.' Heer coldly he is not at home.' Ash don't lie. I called his mobile only.' Heer he is not at home.' Ash okay tell him that i applied divorce as he instructed. I produced all the valid reports too.' Heer is silent. Ash continued tell him he has to apply too. Otherwise marriage will get delayed.' Heer okay.' Ash disconnected the line. Heer threw the mobile on bed and sat with tears. She thought all his changes are for divorce.'

Prem came inside the house. He found Heer still in their room getting ready. He searched for something. But not able to find he left that mission. He ran upstairs. Heer, are you ready? Preet already started.' He searched where is my phone?' Heer handed over the phone to him. Prem took the phone ha thanks. Come we are late.' He put mobile in his pocket. He saw Heer still not combed her hair. She is staring outside. Prem Heer, what happened?' Heer i'm not coming.' Prem why?' Heer not feeling well.' he touched her forehead. Heer pulled away from him. Prem is in concerned voice Heer.' Heer shouted please leave me alone.' Prem is confused to hear her shouting. He thought for a while. He okay. i'll inform Preet.' Heer sat on the bed with anger. Prem looked at her and confused about her sudden change. he thought she doesn't seem to be unwell.' He decided to take her out so that she will be okay after few minutes. Heer, it won't be nice if we cancel our trip in the last minute. We are going there to celebrate uncle aunty wedding anniversary.' He waited for his answer. Heer shook her head after a second okay.' Prem happy come down fast.' He walked out with confused thoughts she was okay until i went out. suddenly what happened?'

Prem loaded the things into the car. Heer got into front of his car. Prem sat in driver seat murmuring suddenly what happened to her. Shouting at me like enemy.' He looked at her. she didn't show any interest towards him. he Heer, are you okay? need any medicines?' Heer silent. He Heeer' She barked i'm okay.' he is shocked by her attitude. He thought she will be okay once she reaches the spot. He started the car. Heer leaned back in her seat without paying attention to him. She thought this is going to be her last chance to be with Prem. i tried but nothing worked out. He is playing the game very carefully.' she wanted to cry aloud. She couldn't accept the failure. She looked outside so that she can hide her tears. But Prem not ready to leave her frequently telling her about the place they are going. She looked at his happy face. She thought he is so much happy to get rid of me.'
Car climbed up a hill. Prem is scolding Preet for selecting such horrible place. Internally he is happy about the place as it is very beautiful. He is driving the car carefully the path is very narrow and both sides are steep and ending in very deep valley. Small mistake will lead the car to slide through sides. As he is scolding Preet in his mind he lost control and car took a turn and started sliding down in the sides.
Heer jerked sensing a sudden turn in the car speed. Prem tried to control the car by hitting on a rock but rock went down ahead of them. Prem Heer, you open the door and jump out.' Heer in very calm voice why?' Prem angrily do what i say.' Heer i did everything earlier. But not now.' Prem tried to push her out. but she didn't obey. Prem Heer, you will die.' Heer finally you showed some concern towards me. I'm happy. I'm ready to die with that sweet love of yours.' Prem anger increased. dial Preet number' Car going down. Luckily its not taking any dive. Its just sliding down. Anytime car can turn upside down. Prem feared car will catch fire. Heer dialled Preet number. Prem shouted Preet, our car sliding down.' Preet other side shouted where?' Prem don't know.' he remembered a board saying a 3 km mark. He told that info to Preet after that'. Preet screamed try to stop the car by hitting on some tree.' Prem i'm trying but trees are very deep down.' Preet stay in line' Prem agreed. Preet told Meher to call the police for help.
Prem screamed Heer, jump out.' Heer no chance. Do one thing. You jump out. i'll die. You can marry Ash without any confusion.' Without giving attention to his anger she continued this divorce idea won't work out so easily. She need to divorce. We have to divorce. So many confusion.' Prem shouted shut up Heer.' Heer this is the last talk of mine.' Prem Heer, please jump out.' Heer you do that. i don't want to live in this world. you only want to live with Ash. You jump out. your Ash will be waiting in India for you with open arms.' She smiled happy married life Prem.' Prem Heer stop your nonsense talks.' He finally found a tree. The car stopped hitting the tree with a loud noise. At the same time Heer released her seat belt. Prem shouted Heer no.' In the sudden collision, the car door opened, Heer is thrown out but not fully. Her head and half body hanging out. She fainted. He shouted Heer'. Her head started bleeding. Prem is sitting intact with the seat belt and conscious. He tried to open the door but it is jammed. He looked down to check his leg. He checked himself and thanked God for his safety. Now he has to find a way to go out of the car. But going out of this car is difficult as the doors are jammed. Only way is going out through to Heer side but his movement made car shake. He feared the car will further go down. If it happens then saving Heer is not possible as she is already hanging out. he saw her head bleeding. He thought she must have hit the front before going out. he heard Preet shouting on the other side. But he couldn't locate the phone which went down somewhere. He shouted Preet, car stopped hitting a tree but Heer is unconscious. I'm not able to open the door on my side. Car is shaking. Tree is not big. Anytime car can go down again.' Preet noticed a side barrier broken in one location indicating a car slide in the sides. He shouted i think we reached the spot. Just few minutes.'

After one hour struggle police squad rescued Prem and Heer. Prem ran to Heer shouted Heer'. he tried to wake up. Preet and Meher gave sarcastic look to his cry. Prem is not aware Preet and Meher heard their conversation. Prem totally forgot about leaving mobile online. He searched for something inside the car. Preet Prem leave that why you need that.' Prem no my mobile.' Ignoring Preet he managed to take out Heer's handbag and his mobile out of car. As soon as Prem took both out of car, car slipped down deep into valley and caught fire. Meher murmured he is not worried about a human. Worried about only his mobile. What kind of man he is.' Preet consoled her at times in tension men tend to behave like this. Meher philosophy to support your friend's stupidity' she walked toward their car to follow the ambulance.
As the ambulance rushed them to hospital, Prem stared at unconscious Heer. he held her hands. Tears ran down his cheeks. He got flash back several encounters with her from the day he saw her. He cried Heer, open your eyes.'</font>

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