arshi ff: not cut out for love #1, chapters 1 - 10 **completed**

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janu

@Janu75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#681

Finally the kiss which was so eluding in the show😉

almost kiss and mud in the eyes scenes are vintage ipk scenes and I was very much attracted to khushi's innocence

Khushi is really nuts !

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Putija

@PutijaChalhov

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Posted: 12 years ago

#682

Jaadu tona😉😆 and kiss what now so Arnav could not help himself another bout of inspiration will Khushi go to Bali Indi what an update want to read more...

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#683

Originally posted by: janu6669
Finally the kiss which was so eluding in the show😉
almost kiss and mud in the eyes scenes are vintage ipk scenes and I was very much attracted to khushi's innocence
Khushi is really nuts !

hi jaanu,

as asr has said... paagal hai par cute hai. nuts she is indeed 😆. i am a little crazy about that sanka of hers. yes, a kiss... the man had to, it had been a hard day for him i guess.😳 thanks for reading.

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#684

Originally posted by: chalhov
Jaadu tona😉😆 and kiss what now so Arnav could not help himself another bout of inspiration will Khushi go to Bali Indi what an update want to read more...

thanks, chalhov...

wonder who is doing jadoo tona... hyuk. thanks so much... am updating next week... got to be more regular, hayee.

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@cinthiann1758

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Posted: 12 years ago

#685

Indi loved this one. Took her totally off guard and maybe him too. He was thinking about her way too much needed to let off the steam! Very hot! Next chapter please!

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#686

Indi 🤗❤️

hehehe...that's exactly my point was on that pic of yours , as they met after so long there must be something...the urge, longing, compassionately brushing breaths...that creates havoc ...how come not even one time.

OK so he finds solace in her as always , this nature call .You can't be attractive towards every body all the time and if that's so then ...

La was always a punching bag for him.He was having her as he never lost control of him but with Khushi that's what happens , he loses his mind over her...his feet flows with the rhythm towards her and she gives him company in this slow dance.

His smiles and peace is his contended wish which this man with few words can deliver with words yet with compassionate touch ...oh yeah anytime.He has a power to burn her soul with his LOVE.

Thnx for this smooth and airy ride...

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#687

Originally posted by: cinthiann1758
Indi loved this one. Took her totally off guard and maybe him too. He was thinking about her way too much needed to let off the steam! Very hot! Next chapter please!

oh madam ji,

you got that moment sooo right. salaam and hugs. next chapter ha ha... i am wondering where these two will go with that momentary madness. let's see.

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#688

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
Indi 🤗❤️

hehehe...that's exactly my point was on that pic of yours , as they met after so long there must be something...the urge, longing, compassionately brushing breaths...that creates havoc ...how come not even one time.

OK so he finds solace in her as always , this nature call .You can't be attractive towards every body all the time and if that's so then ...

La was always a punching bag for him.He was having her as he never lost control of him but with Khushi that's what happens , he loses his mind over her...his feet flows with the rhythm towards her and she gives him company in this slow dance.

His smiles and peace is his contended wish which this man with few words can deliver with words yet with compassionate touch ...oh yeah anytime.He has a power to burn her soul with his LOVE.

Thnx for this smooth and airy ride...

faiqa,

that in pink, has me floating into a slow dance. kya bola aapne.

i know, that not showing a real kiss that lovers bestow on each other sometimes because they just have to... it's like eating or sleeping, you don't always think about it, when the need comes you just do it... yeah behind the packing cases, to suggest a severe, bruising, desperate, longing, tumultuous kiss would not have been wrong. not at that point. it would have been most beautiful... and maybe even made some sense of that hitting her on the head bizarre act.
i adored the way they clutched each other and looked at each other, nasha and desire mixing and murmuring all around... but yes, a meeting of the lips would have felt so damn right.

thanks so much for reading and your thoughts.

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rk2127

@rk2127

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Posted: 12 years ago

#689

Read your story for first time and I'm hooked. Your words, oh so true to each character, depicted the inner turmoil of Arnav which creative missed out.

His attraction and love at first sight feeling which could understand and tried to hide it with anger.

Chapter 1 - really making Aman search for khushi in all over Lucknow

Chapter 3 - is their any relation in kabootar and Arnav ? ...😊

Chapter 4 - that Hawaii jhaz ride and Arnav offering khushi his hand was awesome and cherry on top was khushi sending bhuaji with laad governor and making him hold bhuaji' s hand 👏

Chapter 5 - in his arm walking in his house and Anjali's iss and us rasam was awesome 👏

Chapter 6 & 7 - trying hard to get away from khushi and landing in front of her and not able to control himself and the kiss. Not to mention khushi and the feeling of jaadu tona ... You are keeping it alive, really I mean it.

All in all Arnav brilliant idea to keep himself focus for six months by keeping khushi close ... Not sure he is really thinking from his mind that to the Great ASR Mind!!!

Will wait for next update.

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#690

Originally posted by: rk2127
Read your story for first time and I'm hooked. Your words, oh so true to each character, depicted the inner turmoil of Arnav which creative missed out.
His attraction and love at first sight feeling which could understand and tried to hide it with anger.

Chapter 1 - really making Aman search for khushi in all over Lucknow

Chapter 3 - is their any relation in kabootar and Arnav ? ...😊

Chapter 4 - that Hawaii jhaz ride and Arnav offering khushi his hand was awesome and cherry on top was khushi sending bhuaji with laad governor and making him hold bhuaji' s hand 👏

Chapter 5 - in his arm walking in his house and Anjali's iss and us rasam was awesome 👏

Chapter 6 & 7 - trying hard to get away from khushi and landing in front of her and not able to control himself and the kiss. Not to mention khushi and the feeling of jaadu tona ... You are keeping it alive, really I mean it.

All in all Arnav brilliant idea to keep himself focus for six months by keeping khushi close ... Not sure he is really thinking from his mind that to the Great ASR Mind!!!

Will wait for next update.

hi rk,

how nice of you to say what you do. glad you enjoyed yourself so much.

ever since he's gone, i guess something in me has been sdesperate to keep him going... 😆. i have no idea why i started this story, but i guess i wanted to feel and explore that urge/that attraction of his... and in a way hers to what was inevitable.

yes, he is trying so hard to get himself back to himself, cold hard indifferent to all except his doting sister... but this girl with large eyes whom he felt right against him, whose eyes said so many things, nd who was decidedly weird, somehow not vacating his mind.

and she who is sure this man is a rakshas, somehow can't quite dismiss him from her thoughts.

bichara man, his dimaag is in a bit of a mess... hee hee.

lovely to see you... hope you continue to have fun here.