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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter 1

All the four members of FBI were moving towards bandra station as someone called them and inform that there was a dead body there.

"sharifuddin iss se pehale media vahan pahunche speed up"said jalal

"yes sir "said shariffuddin

"ruqu yeh jalal sir humesha itne serious and gusse mein kyun rehate hai and unhe media se kya dikkat hai??"asked karan

"mujhe in sabka to pata nhi par agar tu chup nhi baitha na to tujhe jalal sir se bahut problem hone wali hai"said ruqaiya

"pata nhi tumhe iss vampire mein kya dikha ki tu isse pya.."before he could complete jalal said "agar tumhari discussion khatam ho gayi ho to kaam pe dhyan de"

They reached the place after some time .

Jalal examined the body .they collected evidences and all left for work except jalal .he saw a girl who was clicking pictures of the crime scene .he went to her .he felt that she is very close to him and he was having very strange feeling he took camera from her.

"yahan kya kar rhi ho and ye pics???"asked jalal

"aap yahan kya kar rhe hai aur aap kaun hote hai mujhse question karne vaale"asked jodha

"question ka answer question nhi hota"said jalal

"oh really!!sorry but mujhe aaj tak kisi ne yeh baat nhi batayi"said jodha dramatically

Jalal took out his card and showed her that he was a ACP.

"oh to aap yahan duty kar rhe hai .main bhi aam todne to aayi nhi hoon duty kar rhi hoon apni"said jodha

"what duty ??"asked irritated jalal

"aap ko irritate karne ki duty jismein mein successful hoon"said jodha

Jalal glared her .

"oho ACP sahab just kidding .i am a journalist"said jodha

"mujhe samajh nhi aata kit um journalist ko crime kahan hone wala hai yeh kaise pata chalta hai"said jalal

"awww!!! Agar apke paas yeh sense hoti to aap zarur iss desh ke crime ko rok paate"said annoyed jodha

"aur agar tum journalist apna muh band rakhte to na jaane kitne cases ek din mein solve ho jaate"said jalal and turned to leave when jodha said "ACP khadoos" and she also went.

At jodha's place the bell rings .she opened the door.

"karan tum aa gaye "said jodha

"tum bhool gaye yeh mera bhi ghar hai ya mere khadoos boss ki tarah tera bhi mujhe get out karne ka irada hai"said karan

"nhi yaar tujhe mein bahar kaise nikal sakti hun acha bata aaj tere boss ne kya kiya?"asked jodha

"aaj surya kahan se nikla hai tune mujhe lecture nhi diya"said karan

"lecture??"asked jodha

"haan ki apne boss ko khadus nhi kehate"said karan

"hawww! Main lecture deti hun,jao main baat nhi karti"said jodha and she went to her room

"oye sorry !!!"said karan but no reply

"ab bachu mana jodha ko"said karan and went to fresh up.


how was it?? pls leave your comments

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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
nice start...first update usme hi jodha give jalal a khadoos nick name😆😆😆
lovely...continue soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Awesome⭐️...Cool⭐️...Update please!!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Aweosme dear...👏👏just loved it..khadoos acp and proffessor journalist..nice combination..😆 eagerly waiting for the next chapter continue soon😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
please continue dear and pm me😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Nice chappy...
Jodha and Jalal first meeting me hi fight karne lag
Nd
plez gve sch updtes soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Very nice! Jalal the khadus !love it ! Contine soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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here is

Chapter 2

She woke up and saw a coffee and a sandwich kept on the side table. sorry was written on the coffee with cream and there were rose flowers which were her favourite.she smiled

"karan!!"she whispered and woke up

"karan"called jodha "kahan chala gaya??"

She saw a note:

Dear jo

Main janta hun tera gussa choo mantar ho gaya ho ga .agar nhi to pls maaf kar de tere ko manane ka kota kabhi aur pura karenge. But mere us khadoos boss ne subah subah bula liya .chal ab maaf kar de aur smile kar warna tu kaali ho jaayegi

Karan

"maan gayi main bahut acche se jaanta hai tu mujhe"said jodha and went to get ready for office

In FDI

"goodmorning team"said jalal

"good morning sir"said all in chorus

"sir aapne humein itni jaldi kyun bulaya hai aaj"asked karan

"jagrate par to nhi bulaya ,case hai"said jalal

"sir karan to case ke baare mein hi puch raha tha"said ruqaiya

"humein ek drug dealer ko pakadna hai jisne pure state mein tahalka machaya hua hai"said jalal

"to phir humein yeh dhundhna hoga ki vo kab kaha hoga"said sharifuddin

"right, karan pata lagaoki vo kaha hai?"said jalal and went to cabin

"oh god bach gaya"said karan

"vaise karan tujhe aaj jaldi aane mein kya problem thi?"asked ruqaiya

"vo meri dost haina vo naaraz thi to use manana tha issliya..."said karan

"dost ya kuch aur .."asked ruqaiya

"muje kaam karne de varna main jaaunga"said karan

After some time karan went to jalal's cabin

"sir vo uska pata chal gaya rose bar mein aaj vo aane wala hai"said karan

"hum undercover jayenge be ready"said jalal

At jodha's office

"jodha humain new assignment mila hai"said tanisha <jodha's friend>

"wow aaj kal sir humein bare assignments de rahe hai vaise kya hai?"asked jodha

"vo toh sir hi batayenge"said tanisha "ab chal sir ke paas"

In cabin

"sir kya assignment hai?"asked jodha

"rose bar mein us drug dealer ka encounter hone wala hai ua par tumhe report banana hai"said mr raichand

"ok sir"said jodha

Precap-jodha and jalal's couple dance

I know it was boring.pls give your feedback

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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
i am first...pls try to text in english...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Amazin! It was short but nice... "Jagrate par nahi bulaya...loll😆😆 ... Waiting for next part! Awesome update!
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Jalal-Jodha Dance...Wow..😛😳

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