FF:Tujhse Naraz Nahin Zindagi NOTE+UPDATE pg89 11/11/13 NO PMS - Page 58

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Posted: 11 years ago
yes finally updates...!!
continue soon..!!
waiting eagerly...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Mishti.. and devildiva21

Thank you so much for your support<3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: funkylicious

I'll try my best dear😊


ok
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Posted: 11 years ago

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You have been my strength through out till now. Its been an year and a month since I started my first ARIYA work and I think soon will be the time for it to be at rest... Its only possible, if I continue to receive your LOVE and SUPPORT.

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**PART 18**

Riya rushed out of the room followed by Arjun who was right behind her.
Soon she grabbed her boots and walked towards the main door. Choti' called out Rathore from behind, Riya's ears stood up and her footsteps stopped right away.
She turned back Kahan ja rahi ho itni jaldi mai' questioned Rathore.
Riya looked at Rathore then at Arjun, she smiled at him; Arjun's eyebrows rose directly questioning her eyes What'
She flared her eye lashes simultaneously with her eyebrows and smiled at him once again.
Arjun smiled at her inwardly as he blinked slowly. Riya's smile widened ear to ear, she glanced one last time at Sameer Rathore her brother and then left with the speed of light.

Aarey Riyu...'Before Rathore could speak another word Riya was out and already in the parking lot.

Jun...' Rathore was interrupted before he completed his word. Arjun smiled Sam, don't ask me. She's your sister'

Reema?? Tumhe kuch pata hai kya' questioned Rathore. Nahi!! Jo bhi pata hai Arjun bhai ya Shree ko hi pata hoga' she replied with a smile plastered on her lips.

D-A-M-N-I-T, tum teeno fir college mai ho aise act kar rahe ho!' Rathore complained as he thumped on his couch, next to Arjun where he was carefreely sipping his tea.

Riya drove off to an isolated area of the city, where the buildings were being constructed but were stopped due to either structural problem or high alerts of landslides.

Na jane aise jagha par permission kaise milti hai in logo ko construct karne ke liye' thought Riya as she parked her car.

She walked upto the 1st floor where a guy was facing the opposite side towards the city while Riya could see his back.

Bol kya info mila hai' Before he could reply, his cell rung.

Hello' he said then paused and soon replied Yes, Sir sure'. He looked at Riya and a smile crept on his face that widened with the conversation.

Kya hua Arjun tha kya?'

Haan re tujhe kaise pata chala'

Riya smiled and said, Kya pata chala hai ye bata fizul ki baatein mat kar Shree'

Haan woh Manager jo mar gaya hai uske posterm se pata chala hai ki usse torcher kiya gaya hai and haan drug over dose bhi diya hai.'

Bass?? Ye toh bhai bhi handle kar sakte the na'. Aarey puri baat sun toh! Shree requested her to listen, and Riya nodded on as agreement.

Tujhe undercover jana hoga for further investigation'

Awesome' Riya replied in excitement.

Awesome nahi hai, this one is dangerous babe! I trust you isliye tujhe keh raha hu nahi toh Reema bhabhi karti ye'..Shree said Riya's expressions changed and he said, Aarey she's part of our team na, and ye undercover operation tum ladkiya hi kar sakte ho'

Hey, nahi yaar why would she? I'll do it, you know I can'

Haan meri maa I know you can, but yeh baat Rathore Sir, ko abhi mat batana varna I would be dead.'

Riya smiled yet again. I know, I know' she replied.

I think I should inform Arjun cause I think he can handle the whole situation quite well, and don't worry I'll make sure he doesn't come to know you're my secret informant.'

Phewww... He sighed and soon he bid goodbye to Riya, Shree exited the place.

And Riya did the same.

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On the other hand, Arjun stayed at Rathore's place to discuss on the case; because they were running out of time.

Rathore was in no mood to discuss the case. However, he asked Arjun to stay for lunch.

Soon Nachiket came running, Aai (Mum), bhuk lagli ahe' (mom, I'm hungry) He saw Arjun wished him hello and walked away.

Aagaye aap? Chalo jaldi se fresh hoke aajao' happily replied Reema.

Okay' he replied sweetly and went off.

Arjun was quietly watching the news on television as well as the mom-son household saga.

Shortly Nachiket came wiping his face with a towel, he threw it on the dinning table while something striked Reema.

Nachi, Nikki kaha hai?' to which he replied Maa, woh dheere dheere staircase chadkar aa rahi hai'

Apko pata hai na kitni slow hai voh? Nachiket said it in a complaining manner.

Arjun smiled listening to their conversation from the corner of his ears.

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At the same time, Nikki was hopping and climbing each and every staircase with joy; counting o-n-e, t-w-o, t-h-r-e-e...

Elsewhere, an anonymus was typing up a text message.

Now you shall be my next target BABY!!'

Can't wait to listen to your melodious voice and to be drowned in it completely..<3'

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I know that was short but I believe its better than reading nothing. Hopefully will update in a week or two. But I did keep my promise of posting one chapter today😊

HIT LIKE/COMMENT and ADD >shruswritings

-Love Shru

Edited by funkylicious - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res😳😃
*edited*
yes finally a update...!!🥳
superb yar...!! but very short 😉
so this was where riya was going...!!!😆
and the way everyone answered sameer lol.. poor guy.. feeling like he knows nothing..!! end mai akhir haar mann ni hi padi😆
so ye hai riya ka informer shree😉... wow riya ke aate hi arjun ka phone..and riya knew cool.. kya connection hai boss...!!
hmm so she has to go undercover on a mission...!! woah reema also?
poor shree was so scared 😆 ek taraf arjun ek taraf sameer...!!!
love how riya assured him that she won't tell arjun that he is her informer and will not tell sameer about her undercover mission...!!!
nachiket reema bonding was nice...!!
aww nikki is cute..!! but ye end mai kya tha?😲
whom was the person talking about? and who is the person whose talking??
continue soon...!!
eagerly waiting for the next part...!!
Edited by devildiva21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
unres
it was awesome update dear.
so riya had to go undercovermission.
continue soon.
and thanx for the pm.
Edited by ll_megha_ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally got a upt after a long time...
it was so short...but i'm happy
the upt was awesome...mainly ariya bonding
waiting to know more
upt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Light hearted update dr...!!!!
Awww Rathod all queries remained unanswered...!!!!
OMG Riya is planning to go on an undercover mission n Shree was her informer...!!!
Wow thy will not disclosed anything to Arjun n Sam...!!!
Wht was that in the end...???? It seems a bit scary...!!!
Nachiket n Reema's segment was cute...!!!!
How will Arjun react whn he see Nikki there n cme to knw that she is Riya's daughter...??????
Can't wait to read more...!!!
Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor shree always gets caught btw arjun and sam due to ri
pls pls continue soon na

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