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prachidalmia

@prachidalmia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

lovely story

hope yash find out that he has fallen for aarti

hope aarti come out of her grief and stop thinking her self to be a bad omen

hope ishita does not cause much trouble in aarthis life

looking forward for the next update

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caller123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: prachidalmia
lovely story
hope yash find out that he has fallen for aarti
hope aarti come out of her grief and stop thinking her self to be a bad omen
hope ishita does not cause much trouble in aarthis life
looking forward for the next update

Thank you so much dear!

As the story will unfold answers will be given to your questions dear!😉

I will try to update soon dear!😛

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Nusrat Jahan Mukti

@nusratjahan505

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Just see Kate dear...I have edited my post...😃

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caller123

@caller123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505
Again a marvelous update of your awesome Story Fate...👏.It was just so beautiful experience to read your update dear...😳😳😳.You know what I read this part on Saturday but could not comment coz IF was not allowing to make comments...after trying hard I just could res the post.But when I tried to post my comment it again blocked me...😭...but trust me sis I was dying to let you know how much i loved it but IF was not allowing me to send PM also...😭😭😭
Thanks a lot Mukthi!
I too really missed your comment.😭😭
{I wondered what happened to you and was worried about you. Glad you are back}
I know how much you love this story you proved it sending Jb after me.😉😆😆
But today I am so happy coa again I have got my liberty to make comments...😃
Kate you know what now a days you are so much influenced by Yashu...see you have got the great fascination for pix and unlimited romance dear...😳😳😳
Am I influenced by Yashu?😆
Yes I included so much romance in my stories these days.😉
Loved the Arya dance and Yashu's romantic thoughts about Arti...😳.It's just amazing to see how the man is falling for Arti...😊😊😊
Thanks a lot dear for loving Aarya's dance. Now Yashu is slowly falling in love with aarthi!😉
The FB scene is really painful...😭😭Arti was in so much pain with the death of Aman and her in laws just cursed saying her ill fated...ominous...😡
Her in laws😡😡😡
You will hate them more when you get to know the rest of the story.
But Dubey and Shova are right that Arti is not an ill fated lady but she is a very fortunate one and I am sure that very soon Yash's love will make Arti realize how special she is...😳😳😳
Yash will help her to relize how special she is by doing many things.😉
And what to say about Yashu...this man is madly in love with Arti ❤️❤️... I just hope very soon he will confess his love before Arti also...😳😳😳
Well we see what will happen next.😉
Amazing update Kate...👏
I just loved it dear...⭐️⭐️
Thanks again Mukthi!

Answers in green dear!

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caller123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: sb1410
Hi Kate what a wonderful update dear the romantic dance of Aarya, Yash has fallen in love with his friend Aarti and his sister is the first to observe this. The conversation with Aarti's parents and flashback well written I am amaze that people still think like her former inlaws, but with her parents reassurance and love she should start beliving in herself and stop -ve thinking. There is always a stalker in any love story and Ishita is perfect in this role 😆
Beautiful pitcures by Anu me 🤢
Eagerly waiting for the promo

Sorry dear I have missed your comment. I just stalked this thread to find that I have not replied you.

Sorry again.

update.- Thanks a lot dear.

Yes now Yash is madly in love with Aarthi but only Mansi her sister knows it as she has observed him.

Thanks for loving conversation with Aarthi's parents and flash back dear! Yes but still you can find people like Aarthi's in laws in society.

yh Every love story has a stalker here it's Ishitha but her role will bring twists in Aarya's lives some times in future.😉

Even I was🤢 when I was updating the pictures.

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caller123

@caller123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Chapter 7

So Mansi came in.

"Oh bhaiyya it seems you can't sleep and you are dreaming while you are wake."

"Mansi!!!"

"Though you shout your eyes says I'm right!."

"Mansi when did you start to read my eyes??"

"Today? From the time you got lost in your friend Aarthi. You love her na bhaiyya?"

"I don't know Mansi!"

"Why are you scared to love her? Why do you think she's after your money or something?"

"No she's not that type. I just wondered the feeling I have about her. I just can't forget her. The thought of her giving me so much of happiness and.."

"You are jealous when you see her with some body na Yash bhaiyya? I saw your face when Prathiek got hold of her hand.

"YOU ARE IN LOVE BHAIYYA! Whether you accept it or not YOU ARE IN LOVE BHAIYYA! Come on accept it.."

Yash blushed. He has no objection to fall in love with her. She had everything he needed in a girl.

"Come on bhaiyya without getting late confess about your feelings to her."

"No there is a reason I can't tell her now. She..." So Yash told about Aarthi's past to Mansi.

"Bhaiyya how rude her in laws were to her. She's not a bad omen if she's like that our company would have not reaced higher position in few months time after her aarival. Ok bhaiyya I accept it's not the right time to confess but you can show your love to her you can make her live her life again."

"Will she ever love me Mansi? Will she forget her past?"

"She will take time as she is so much love with her husband.This will be a testing time of your love bhaiyya!"

"I never thoght you will like her after knowing that she's a widow."

"Becoming a widow is not her fault bhaiyya. It's just that they were not meant to be. We can fall in love with anyone but we can live the life with that person if that is meant to be. So it's their FATE that they got parted may be FATE has more plans for her. I'm today's girl bhaiyya. I never think so narrowly you know that.!"

"Thanks Mansi! For making it all clear. Though you are younger than me you have experience in these things more than me."

"Bhaiyya are you teasing me?"

"No why should I?"

"Ok go and sleep now it's already late."

"Ok bhai you also sleep your SWEET dreams are waiting for you..."

Yash smiled at her comment and closed the door.

Next day.

Yash got two new projects one in Mumbai and one in a village. Yash thought to take Aarthi for those two project as she can handle any kind of project brilliantly.

So Yash called in to his cabin.

"Aarthi we have to go out for a week. We have two projects to do. First we have to go Mumbai meet a client there and we have to go a village to organize a wedding. Will your parents allow you to come with me? Even if you don't like it doesn't matter."

"No sir, I will come. My parents also trust you and I too."

"Why do you trust me Aarthi. We met only few months back?"

"A person who respect his mother and sister cannot do any wrong thing to another woman. Because from his family itself he has learnt the value of a woman and how to respect her. I saw how you respect your mother and sister in the party so I trust you sir and I will come with you."

"Thank you so much Aarthi! I respect your views Aarthi. I respect you too.Ok tomorrow in the morning I'll come to pick you up. Get ready."

"Ok Sir."

Next day they both left foe Mumbai. From the airport to the hoteel they took a taxi. Aarthi was silent in the journey. She got lost in her past.

Flash back.

"Oh Aman! I just love Mumbai. I do not get fed up of shopping here or spending time here. I'm grateful to your parents for sending us here for our honey moon."

"Ok after you finish your exam we'll come here again. I promise Aarthi!"

"Oh I forgot to bring my books. If I have brought them here I could have studied."

"Though you forgot I didn't forget those Aarthi. I brought your books."

Aman went to open his bag. He opened it and took some books and handed them over to Aarthi!

"Here are they Aarthi! "

"Thank you so much Aman. I'm so lucky to have you as my husband who thinks about me so much and who helps me to fulfill my dreams."

"They are not only your dreams but mine too Aarthi!"

End of Flash back.

Yash saw Aarthi wiping her tears.

"Why Aarthi? Are you ok? Do you miss your parents?"

"No sir I'm alright. Just remembered someone who is in my memory now."

"I know what you are meaning. May be you and Aman had a past here and you are trying hard to forget them. But I promise in this city I will bring back your smile." Thought Yash.

They met the client and the meeting was a success.

"Aarthi we will leave for the village tomorrow. Today we'll stay here. We'll go to the hotel which I booked and get some rest and in the evening we'll go to the beach."

"Sir??"

"I know you are not much in to fun. But after hard working day you must need a rest and Mumbai beach is a place where you can rest and relax. So will you come?"

"Ok sir I'll come."

So they both went to the hotel and their respective rooms and got rest. In the evening they both went to the beach.

Aarthi loved the beach. She always did.

Yash went to buy something for Aarthi, leaving her a little bit. Aarthi started walking along the beach.

Yash saw her and dropped the idea buying something now and went after Aarthi and said.

"Shall we have a race on the beach??"

"Sir???"

"Why you always raise your eyes and question me? and please when we are not in duty don't call me sir. Call me Yash. We are friends. Aren't we?"

"Yes Si.."

"Yash."

"Yes Yash.."Aarthi smiled. and Yash got lost in her smile.

"Hey Yash what are you staring at???"

"Nothing let's run."

So they started to run.

Aarthi took the speed. She was in front of Yash.

"Oh come on Yash you don't want to loose for a girl. Are you? come on catch me."

"I already got lost in you Aarthi"Said Yash smiling and running.

That evening till they got fed up they ran on the beach and when they got tired they both lied on the beach still laughing. Aarthi forgot her grief and started laughing and making fun of Yash.

Yash also liked it.

"it's really a magical place Yash. It really give a relax to our mind Yash. You were right.!"

"Of course I'm right and I can see you it with your smile.My gloomy employee is smiling now."

Aarthi didn't know how to react to the comment and looked down.

"Let's go. It's getting late." Said Yash.

So they left for the hotel.

Edited by caller123 - 11 years ago

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caller123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

Precap

A great twist in the next update. A twist that will change Aarthi and Yash's life sometimes forever. Who knows???😲

Your comments and likes will decide how much sooner you want the next update.😉

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Please share your feelings over this chapter it's the only thing which motivate me dearies.

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Edited by caller123 - 12 years ago

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🌹Vinnas💙Chandu🌹

@vinnas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

now i unreserving this place dear i read it when u pmed me update aftr that res my place here nd busy in othr wrks so many places need unreserve 😉😉,,,,,,,,,,,

it was very cool ,feel to very fresh as i already said before i think😳 nw also the same essence in ur story dear😊😊😊

mansi well known of her bro condition giving her way to realise his love😳😳 loved the part about sis bro bonding its so nice👏👏...her broad mind to undrstnd wat yash xtly fr arthi she accepted defended him fr the decision 👏👏nd keep giving her support fr ther relation loved it,⭐️⭐️,,,,,,,,,,yash take aarthi to mumbai aarthi feel so assure abt him nd judged char like one who respts ma ,sis can respt every women so she is safe nd ready to come beautiful it is,❤️,,,,,,then thr scene in beach thr frindship ,,,😳❤️,arthi laugh heartdly ,yash getlost in her natural smile love it,,,,,,,,,the fb scene of aman arthi is nice 👏👏yash also known abt her feelings by seeing her nd tryin to make her happy,,,,,,,so touched🤗,,,,,

waiting fr next update dear,,,,,,,hope my lil comment bring smile in ur face😳 if not beat me with ur emos{{😡}}

Edited by vinnas - 12 years ago