IPKKND OS - Intezaar [Romance] - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it !! 😊
your os's are always worth the wait. and i think im never EVER going to get tired reading them multiple times, savoring their love making each and every time! :)

how did khushi get so lucky? her devi maiyya couldn't have blessed her more. and she deserves every bit of it. our very own 'angel' khushi, doing the best for everyone, loving everyone to the core, specially her arnavji..😳

not that arnav isn't lucky.khushi's like a blessing too, being an atheist i think his devi maiyya would be his mother. :)

the little moments in their life adds fun to the reading. their nok-jhoks, minute love filled gestures towards each other and you narration, if we add them together we get the perfect recipe of your amazing os's. i cannot love them more! 😊

and their creaking bed ALWAYS cracks me up a lot. poor arnav, cannot even make love to his khushi on bed. then their family members add to their miseries. don't those people have their own lives? i wonder.

and wait! did arnav really do that to aakash, his poor baby brother? he was one hell of a naughty boy, life's crudeness had turned him into an arrogant and tough man. thanks to khushi, our old arnav is back. life couldn't be better for them. amen! :')

i always await the ultimate part of the story where they culminate their long day, making amazing and sexy as hell love to each other. from what i get through your writings, you must be a real romantic person. aren't you? hope you too find your arnavji in real life, IF you don't have one yet. and now you pray for me too. lol. :P 😆


amazing as ever. loved it blayde! 😛


ps~ arnav fulfilled her wish of using THE 'desk' for their 'ahem' activities. *wink wink* ☺️
did he deliberately do that or was it just with the flow?

Edited by avika_ShArMa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
That was just amazing os blayde
loved it so much
waiting for the next os
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Mind blowing OS
Loved it
It was so damn sexy
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Awsommmiiieee totaly hot n sweet typz...:) well u myt try write 1 hot OS were Arnav-Khushi r not married...mayb engagd or in relationship lyk girlfrnd-boyfrnd having hot momntz in office mayb...wud b kinda intrsting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Wait they are still at buaji
Or back
But once again they gotta wait
So where is she his wife
Will read in blog and comment there rest of it
Cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26


As always amazing OS... can't wait to read more of your work 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aaannnddd they used the desk! LOL of course they did hahahah as usual...a great OS

Thanks for keeping the Arhi alive in all of us, these stories make me miss them less! :) *sigh* still wish it was on air though
Edited by sweet_5 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arnav is lively hubby he very well know his wife's need...
He loved her the way she like...
Too much hot...
hmmn lovely...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
loved it ...they are so comfortable
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Hi! 😊

This is such a sweet OS. Arnav and Khushi are madly in love with each other. They understand each other feelings much better now.

I really like the last two paragraphs which showed Khush is thinking her heart was waiting for Arnav and Arnav thinking he was never emotionally involved with anyone because he was waiting for Khushi. The last two paragraphs are definitely my favourite. Great Job! 👏

Thank you for the PM. ⭐️
Edited by Rimz_k09 - 12 years ago

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