!!*SwaRon Poems*!! Pg 14, New poem. :) *27Nov'14*

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Sakshi Shah

@sakshibshah

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Hey SwaRon Fans...New Poem...
Wrote few days back but posting now!
It's Swayam's POV.😳
So go on guys..have read...Hope it is meaningful...

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*...Aur Koi Nahi...*

Na Karna Aankh Band Kar Vishwas Zindagi Par Kabhi...
Zaruri Nahi Ki Rahe Khushi Har Dum Tumhare Saath Hi...
Maloom Na Tha Rishta Humara Yun Fir Toot Jayega...
Vo Ek Dhaaga Pyaar Ka Kachha Hi Reh Jayega...
Ashkon Ke Roop Mein Bikhare Moti Uske Saare...
Rakha Tha Sahej Kar Jise Pyaar Bhare Dhaage Ke Sahaare...
Kuch Pal Hi Mein Thukra Diya Usne Mujhko...
Chahta Tha Paanch Saal Se Jis Ladki Ko...
Yaadein Aata Hai Vo Khushnuma' Din, Use Dekh...
Thi Uski Haan' Bhi Jhoot Aur Tha Jhoot Wadaa Har Ek...
Saath Nahi Vo, Lagti Hai Kadwi Ab Har Subah Ki Chai...
Baarish Mein Akele Jaata Nahi, Yaad Ab Vo Raat' Aaye...
Jaana Hi Tha Mujhse Door, To Aayi Mere Paas Kyun..?
Guroor Ne Roka Ya Mujhe Apnane Se Ghabrayi Vo..?
Nahi Kaha Jaane Ko Par Usse Kiye Yeh Sawaal...
Chahti Thi Mauka Ek, Hone Ka Saath Is Baar...
Kiya Tha Sabke Saamne Fir Khilwaad Usne Mere Jazbaaton Ka...
Bas! Toda Har Rishta Usse Meine, Yahi Tha Mera Faisla...
Rehne Laga Hun Alag Usse, Baatein Ab Karta Nahi...
Kyun Dekh Kar Dil Kehta Hai Khubsurat' Use Ab Bhi...
Ho Kitna Bhi Fasla Humare Beech Chahunga Use Hi...
Dhadakega Dil Uske Liye, Basi Rahegi Mere Dil Mein 'Sirf Wahi'...

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So..? Boring? Or Readable?
Shower ur comments n hit LIKE!

And Guys...a Request that Do write in your comments ( or when you wish me to write) about On which Track/Thought(SwaRon) I shud write ? Like Sharon's Thoughts or Direct Confession or anything between... I hope you all got what I wanna say!
Comment fast!

Love,
Sakshi.

Edited by sakshibshah - 12 years ago

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Shardha_Swaron

@Shardha_Swaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

OMGGG Sakshi u r a great poet dear⭐️

its amazing, awesome and superb👏👏

perfectly suited in this situation

Well Done dear 👍🏼

I loved it a lot😊😊

While reading it mujhe lag rha tha k har word swayam ne khud likha hai 😳

Its superb!!

Kepp writing dear

and thanks for the PM

Now I want poem of Sharon's POV dear Please if u can write it

Edited by Shardha_Swaron - 12 years ago

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

superb poem sakshi!!!

ty for the pm.

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Hey swthrt...

How beautifully u portrayed Swayam's point of view ...

His pain..his questions...his doubts ...

The way he has lost his hopes and trust on love...

Loved the use of words...

It was beautifully done..

LOVED ...LOVED LOVED these lines..

Jaana Hi Tha Mujhse Door, To Aayi Mere Paas Kyun..?
Guroor Ne Roka Ya Mujhe Apnane Se Ghabrayi Vo..?

The ending lines were so amazing ...loved the way portrayed his pain..his love..his hurt self-respect ...BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN

Ho Kitna Bhi Fasla Humare Beech Chahunga Use Hi...
Dhadakega Dil Uske Liye, Basi Rahegi Mere Dil Mein 'Sirf Wahi'...

Keep writing swthrt..u r amazing

Love
Deepika

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Actually i never get a chance to comment on ur poems..But i am very known about ur poetry..As i am poetry lover..So all i can say..U are such a great poet..U have such a great talent of writing poem..I just loved ur above creation..It was trully pour blissfull work..It contains Such a frequent flow of emotion,pain,Wordings,strong command on language,their moves..All of them was damm perfect for a perfect poetry...

So Keep writing more.

Prateek.

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Killer!!! Pehle to mai tujhse haath jodke pair padke sorry bol rhi hu..!!
I know ab tu Mujhe bas maarne ki hi planning kar rhi hogi..!!

Yaar I know..tera na pura haq banta h Mujhe daatne ka maarne ka mujhse baat na karne ka gussa hone ka..sab cheezo ka..n ye sab tu kare bhi kyu na...mahino se mere res..unres nhi ho rhe h..!!
Killer but mai kya karu..u know na Mujhe roz coaching hoti h..n Jo tym free hota h usme dad lapi leke gye huye hote h..!! 😭
Killer sachi me cmnts ready h..maine word file banake rakhi h..but mai kya karu..mai post hi nhi kar paa rhi hu..!! 😭
Pls Mujhe maaf kar de ho sake to!!😭
I know u wud b cursing me fr not Unresing but mai bhi kya karu??!!😭

M fed up from my schedule..agar thodi free hoti hu to rest karti hu..nhi to wo bhi nhi..😭

M sry killer..mai cmnts nhi de paa rhi hu..m really sorry!! :'(

So uske compensation k liye mai abhi ki abhi is poem pe cmnting..NO res!

Ohk so..cmng to the poem!!

Oh my god..it was ahmazing..!! 🤗
I just loved it..!!
M proud of u killer..such a multi talented girl!! :*:*
N you r crct..swayam's pov is missing from d3..n this is the best way a fan can express it..!!
This cud not hv been better..!!
The words u chose the lines u wrote..just perfect for the current track..!!
Keep writing killer!!😃

Once again sorry..!!:((
N love u!!:*

Edited by d3fan4eva - 12 years ago

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..Aishaa..

@..Aishaa..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Your poem was simply amazingg...

It actually had the depth of Swayams feelings into it that made me like it sooo much. A very ver good job done out here

You are an amazingg poet, just keep writing :)

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-TanHaVruShan-

@-TanHaVruShan-

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Wow sakshi ur simply brilliant n so is ur poem. .
It was so emotional perfectly apt for d situation. .
A simple poem portrayed swayam.s feelings so beautifully. .
Wow wow wow. .
Simply khoobsurat

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Sakshi Shah

@sakshibshah

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

@Shardha Di- Sharon POV..okay after a day or two i'll post it ! :)

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Sneha_Shantannu

@Sneha_Shantannu

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Ohhh! Gosh! 4 poems! Kya Baat h yr, matlb it's unbelievable mahn, u wrote them beautifully yr, har word, har line just impactful, jst heart-touching yr. How come I missed them but seriously U R An Awesum, Amazing Poet, Writer, Photo Editor, Singer, Sketcher!! Brilliant! Keep writing n btw har poem ki starting lines are commendable! Gud job, write the next asap! Sammy.
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