Swaron SS: Am I just an Outsider? - Page 9

Originally posted by: HSFA

Wow the update is here!

It was so cute and sweet. Awww poor Sharon she was really very hurt and Swayam how can he let her be angry with him for more than a few hours?

The apology style was really Swayamish..unique and beautiful!!

Sharon was actually laughing seeing him do crazy stuff:P

The messages were so khoobsurat! The swayam essence was in it. 👏👏

Plz update soon dear can't wait for the next part.

Originally posted by: kamlesh32

Loved swayam's apology style. He is a true lover boy. Thank god sharon is not angry with him anymore. Looking forward to the next part. Please update soon.

Originally posted by: cenation123

how i missed this brilliant ss is beyond me anyways
awesome job loved the starting of the ss and the second part was awesome too
what i like about your writing is that you keep the characters real and thats why its so easy to relate to the plot.
this update was completely swaronish.Loved your choice of song and the entire act was presented smartly👍🏼
you are one hell of a writer but ols do pm me when you update or write more would love to read this one further soon.
Harshita

Originally posted by: -Chaitra-

great update...

the song chosen was really apt..

loved swayam's antics😆

Originally posted by: austen4ever

sweet update.
Swayam's msgs were really nice.
so happy to see hariprasad, i've never forgiven the cvs for forgetting about him.
the song and Swayam's antics were very well described.
well done

Originally posted by: Swaron.maniac

Such an amzing SS,
Just read both parts now
Love the way sharon got upset with very valid reason
And how swayam used kids flower and cute notes to make her smile

Ur writing is very fresh I love they way u write
I was actually reading it as they wud act it
It was fun reading
Update soon
Plz do pm me
I'll be waiting eagerly
👍🏼 😊

Originally posted by: 8085548022

cute update

a perfect loverboy

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Nice. :) Very cute.

Originally posted by: dashinggirl

cute and lovely update 😊

liked it very much

swayam's apology idea was fantastic

beautifully written

waiting for the next part

do update soon ...

Originally posted by: swaron_pk

Amazing update ...waiting for next chappy 😊