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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Superb update.
U took me to the time when the very first Ariya scene was aired.
Oye Hoye...
Shaanu and Naaz looking hawt and sexy...
Haaye...
Main toh margayi...
Both the girls looking beautiful...
Lovely update...
Continue soon.
Thanks 4 the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Oh gosh shaanu... Me dreaming... Pata ni kitni baare Maine Yeh update read Kiya.. 😆
It ws Awesummm... 👏
Ohh so gorky sir allowed us to do a scene wid shaa... Woww.!!!
U in roshni getup n me in riya's... Me imagining dat...!!!!!
Shaa-Naaz ws amazing... Ufff me blushing... 😳 😳... First fighting n den in each others arms... Ohhh god..!!!!!! Upar see.. Shaa tucked my hair... 😳
Loved it dear...!!!!! Thanks fr writing it 😃 luv u
Cont soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Cute update dr...
wahhha wahha kya kismat hai naz ki...
madam in. arjun's arms n eyelook ahum ahum...
update soon...
but i m waiting for arni scence...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
He Kept on walking but Naaz was in no mood to leave him,she ran behind him..The camera zoomed in. "Tum Evidences k saath chhedkhani kar rhe the na? Batao mujhe? Warna mujhe apne seniors ko batana padega!" She spke furiously..Arjun didnt answer. "Oh Hello?? You?? Main Tumse baat Kar rhi hu! Sunayi ni deta kya?" She spke irritably. But Arjun kept on walking..Till dis tym dey had reached d crime scene..Rathod saw Arjun n spke"Aa gye tum?" "Haan Sir Yeh------" But bfore Naaz cud speak anything,Sameer spke in.."Team Inse Milo..Yeh Hai ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte! ETF ke 2nd Chief!" Naaz felt as if earth was snatched away frm her feet! ACP?? WHat?? NO freakin way!!" Rathod introduced Shree nd Chotu to Arjun nd den turned towards her.."Haan Naaz? Tum kuch keh rhi thhi??" "Umm...Haa--Ha--Haan Si--Sirr--Sir! Mera----Ma---Matla---Matlab Nahi Sir!" Naaz stammers unable to say anything! "Crap!" her mind yelled.."Kya? Naaz tum theek ho na?? Anyways..Rawte yeh hai Nazneen Parmar,ETF's Research Spl. Nd Naaz Yeh Hai ACP Arjun
Edited by ShanayaShaleen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Suryakant Rawte ETF's 2nd chief!" "Hello Sir!" Naaz spke a bit hesitantly,nd forced a small smile. "Tumhari Iss Officer se mil chuka hun main? Waise in So Called Research Specialists ka kya kaam hai field job me?" Arjun spke,sarcasm dripping frm his voice..Naaz's jaw dropped open.."How dare he? He is such a Tryant!!" she thot..She opened her mouth in defence but decided to keep it shut as it was her hard earned job!" Rathod had already moved away cuz shree had called him for sum info,Arjun also moved behind him.."Yeh!!! Yeh Samajhta kya hai apne aap ko??" Naaz spke furiously tucking her sidelocks but thoose silky things were not b put away easily! She kept on tucking dem nd dey kept on falling on her face. "Uggghhh! Yeh Baal!!" She spke angrily nd touched her hair to get the pink flower clip in her Hair..But Voilaaa..It was not der. "Ab yeh kahaan chala gya? Kaahin kho toh nhi gya? Wo mera Favorite Clip thha!!" She searched but cudnt found it..."Aaarrgghh!! Uff! Aaj ka toh din hi kharab hai! Pehle wo Akdu
Edited by ShanayaShaleen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
aur ab meri hair clip!! Pata ni kahan chali gyi?" She mumbld angrily..Scene Shift They wer now in Sheen's house interrogating nd investigating.."Strange! Sheen ko kidnap hue 12 ghante ho gye but still abhi tak Ransom ke liye koi call ni aaya?" Arjun spke.."Sir! Statistics ke According 98% cases me kidnapping Ransom Ke liye hi ki jaati h..but is case me Koi Ransom ki call ni aayi toh sheen ki kidnapping ka kya maqsad ho sakta h??" Naaz added. "Pata Nhi Naaz!(Ae Le..Le liya usne tera naam!🤣) But Jo bhi ho..kidnapper kaafi shaatir h!" Naaz was listening to him but suddenly her attention fell to Arjun Shirt pocket..Voilaaa..The Flower Clip of hers was der. It must have got stuck in der fighting duel. "Shittt!!" she mumbled. Arjun was also talking to Shree nd Chotu..She didnt want to say anything but had to cuz her sidelocks wer disturbing her.."Sirr Wo---???" She tried but cudnt complete cuz Arjun silenced her by a wave of his hand.."Great!" She mumbled furiously.."Kya Karen? Newcomer se jo paala padha
Edited by ShanayaShaleen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Hai!!" Arjun spke.. Now this was enuf for her.."Excuse Me Sir! But Abhi aapne newcomer kisko bola?? Jabse Aap aaye hai tabse main sunn rhi hu ki aap koi na koi cmnt kar rhe hai mujhpar..But lemme tell u,Haan Hu main Newcomer but kisi se bhi kam nhi hu! Aapko andaaza bhi hai ki main kitni mehnat karke yaahan tak pahuchi hu??" She spke dis in one breath furiously..Arjun first lukd at her silently fr few minutes den spke.."Tum Kidnapper Ho?" He spke. Naaz was speechless. He smirked nd left. Scene Shift... "Rawte?? Yeh kya laga rakha hai tumne apne pocket me? Hatao ise..its catchingg my attention." Sameer spke. Arjun lukd down to notice The Cute Pink Flower Clip of Naaz,stuck in his pocket! He tuk it out nd den lukd at Naaz who was stealing glances frm him. He shook his head nd kept it inside his pocket. "What The???" Naaz thot,she hoped dat he wud give it to her! "What in hell will he do wid it!" She thot out loud.."AND CUT!" TBC...Precap-ShalYa's ArNi Scene! Done!! Naazu,I hoped u luvd dis! ❤️
Edited by ShanayaShaleen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
awesome.. !oved it.. Totally in character.. Loved the way u potrayed it.. Thanks for pm..
Edited by unishaz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Shaanu.. Hugsss tightly...!!!!!! Thank u sooo much fr writing dis... U jus reminded of dat ariya scene.. Aww.. Missing dem.!!!!
Oh my god..!!! ArNaz scenes were really amazing... 😃
I'm literally imagining myself in dat scene... 😳
Oki.. Me talking here n arjun walking away.. Dats nt fair.. Lol 😆
Omg...and den Arjun's mock...Lol woh kidnapper ka bol raha tha n me thinking sum thing else.. 😆
My favorite clip stuck in his shirt...!!!!Me remembering dat look on Arjun's face Rathod tld him abt dat in d show.. Hahahahha..!!!!!
So Mera scene khatam.. N ha arjun ne Mera naam Liya... Yayyy!!!! 😃
waiting fr shalya scene...!!!!
Plzzz cont soon... Luv u shaanu.!!!!! 😳
Edited by naz_2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Shanu... My Bong Sis...
U took me to that same day..
You just recreated the whole scene so beautifully...
Everything was in its place.
Haaye...
Noozie Poozie...
Teri toh nikal pari...
Haaye...
They were looking so nice...
Their nokjhoks and fight in between the case was damn awesome and rocking...
Continue sooon.

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