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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonali.

Hee Hee I myself posted all poems in this thread to avoid confusion and now I myself am getting confused when you all comment 😆 Anyways Thanks for the compliments Neha... You missed it may be because I had jus named this thread Sonali's creative corner... You must have thought it must be the old poem.. Koi nai.. I am so glad you liked it 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

I had written this poem long back during my college days... But After reading Neha's poem "Knowing Death" I just recollected it... So posting it here... Sorry for Off topic stuff... If it is not allowed let me know... I will Delete it..

Maut ka Anubhav

Maut ka Anubhav kaisa hota hoga?
Zindagi ko alvida kehna kya itna asaan hoga?

Zindagi sirf khushiyon se bhari nahi hain!
Dukhon ke saayon se bhi zindagi ghiri hain!
Phir kyon hume jeene ka itna moh hota hoga?

Maut ka Anubhav kaisa hota hoga?
Zindagi ko alvida kehna kya itna asaan hoga?

Ved kehte hain aatma hain amar!
Phir kyon reh jaate hain hum rishton mein ulajkar
Rishton ka yeh bandhan kya maut tak saath nibhata hoga?

Maut ka Anubhav kaisa hota hoga?
Zindagi ko alvida kehna kya itna asaan hoga?

Maut ke baad kya hain koi nahi jaanta!
Par kai adbhoot baaton ko man hain manta!
Kya iss liye insaan Maut se itna Katrata hoga?

Maut ka Anubhav kaisa hota hoga?
Zindagi ko alvida kehna kya itna asaan hoga?

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonali.

I had written this poem long back during my college days... But After reading Neha's poem "Knowing Death" I just recollected it... So posting it here... Sorry for Off topic stuff... If it is not allowed let me know... I will Delete it..

Maut ka Anubhav

Maut ka Anubhav kaisa hota hoga?
Zindagi ko alvida kehna kya itna asaan hoga?

Zindagi sirf khushiyon se bhari nahi hain!
Dukhon ke saayon se bhi zindagi ghiri hain!
Phir kyon hume jeene ka itna moh hota hoga?

Maut ka Anubhav kaisa hota hoga?
Zindagi ko alvida kehna kya itna asaan hoga?

Ved kehte hain aatma hain amar!
Phir kyon reh jaate hain hum rishton mein ulajkar

Rishton ka yeh bandhan kya maut tak saath nibhata hoga?

Maut ka Anubhav kaisa hota hoga?
Zindagi ko alvida kehna kya itna asaan hoga?

Maut ke baad kya hain koi nahi jaanta!
Par kai adbhoot baaton ko man hain manta!
Kya iss liye insaan Maut se itna Katrata hoga?

Maut ka Anubhav kaisa hota hoga?
Zindagi ko alvida kehna kya itna asaan hoga?


SONALI, I think in UR Creative Thread, U have No Restriction to Post OFF TOPIC... here U are a Free Bird so Dunt be Scared...😉

UR Poem have so many Realities...⭐️
UR Simple way of Conveying them really Boost the Meaning...👏
I love these BOLD line...🤗
Jaan of UR Poem...😳
Thank You so much...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you so much GD... I love the way you review the creative stuff.. I always look forward to your FB... Thanks boss 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonali.

I had written this poem long back during my college days...
But After reading Neha's poem "Knowing Death" I just recollected it... So posting
it here... Sorry for Off topic stuff... If it is not allowed let me know... I will
Delete it
..


Maut ka Anubhav


Maut ka Anubhav kaisa hota hoga?

Zindagi ko alvida kehna kya itna asaan hoga?


Zindagi sirf khushiyon se bhari nahi hain!

Dukhon ke saayon se bhi zindagi ghiri hain!

Phir kyon hume jeene ka itna moh hota hoga?


Maut ka Anubhav kaisa hota hoga?

Zindagi ko alvida kehna kya itna asaan hoga?


Ved kehte hain aatma hain amar!

Phir kyon reh jaate hain hum rishton mein ulajkar


Rishton ka yeh bandhan kya maut tak saath nibhata hoga?


Maut ka Anubhav kaisa hota hoga?

Zindagi ko alvida kehna kya itna asaan hoga?


Maut ke baad kya hain koi nahi jaanta!

Par kai adbhoot baaton ko man hain manta!

Kya iss liye insaan Maut se itna Katrata hoga?


Maut ka Anubhav kaisa hota hoga?

Zindagi ko alvida kehna kya itna asaan hoga?


No no di..you need not to delete it at all and please no sorry😊.. These bold lines are really million dollar question and you portrayed the query of every human being in such an excellent way ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️.. May be that's because of our human nature..some of us many times say why don't God pick us up to him but when the bell rings we are no longer eager to leave the world or the loving ones.. War b/w the heart and brain begins to find the final answer of the question and ultimately heart wins for majority.. We can't help mourning over the death of our beloveds.. Thanks di, thank you so much for voicing it so perfectly 🤗 🤗 🤗.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonali.

Thank you so much GD... I love the way you review the creative stuff.. I always look forward to your FB... Thanks boss 😊


Arry yaar aap log itni Mehnat say Kaam kartay ho...👏
Tou Sarhana tou banta hay na...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely and poignant poem, Sonali. Really beautifully written and conveys a profound message despite its short length. Lovely. 😃

I'm reminded of this quote by Dumbledore - "It's the unknown we fear when we look upon death and darkness, nothing more." And like the Buddha said, it is attachment/desire that leads to suffering. Naturally we fear if there actually is an afterlife or just complete non-existence like materialists say... and even if there is an afterlife, our present self will still be destroyed. Everyone and everything we love in this life, gone forever. 'Zindagi na milega dobara' is really true. I guess we should make good use of our time here and live to the fullest instead of worrying about the unknown beyond. 😊

Keep it up! 👏

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES


No no di..you need not to delete it at all and please no sorry😊.. These bold lines are really million dollar question and you portrayed the query of every human being in such an excellent way ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️.. May be that's because of our human nature..some of us many times say why don't God pick us up to him but when the bell rings we are no longer eager to leave the world or the loving ones.. War b/w the heart and brain begins to find the final answer of the question and ultimately heart wins for majority.. We can't help mourning over the death of our beloveds.. Thanks di, thank you so much for voicing it so perfectly 🤗 🤗 🤗.


Thanks Angel... 😳 And a 🤗from me too
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gadhadada


Arry yaar aap log itni Mehnat say Kaam kartay ho...👏
Tou Sarhana tou banta hay na...😳


Arree GD aapki sarhana ka toh kya kahe... Yeh aao ke liye 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
These question always circulate in my mind... It is true that we all will die one day.. but we always have this unknown fear of death. Even after knowing that we will die one day.. we make relationships.. we start loving our life.. and that make us fear death.. And saying goodbye to all the people around us will surely be a heart bursting process.
Death is painful and ya hamri zindagi me basne waley logo ko alvida kehna bht mushkil hoga.
And people still think of sucides and stuff.
A wonderful poem I must say..
A reality you mentioned..
And is perfectly woven..
Good job and keep it up.

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