Arshi FF: Entwined(T1) *Completed*

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aleezay

@aleezay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#681

woaww first of all thanks to search that i found this FF
seriosly its brilliant v v v well written atleast i dnt find any flaw in your writing the story is gripping iv read 6 chps just now and o my GOD yaar id nt knw how painful it would have been for her and for arnav as well
plz plz plz dnt show her as a gang rape victim or smthing ... it will be hard to bear it plz

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aleezay

@aleezay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#682

ohh im about to cry after reading chap 7
fantastic and yet i can feel pain within the words

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aleezay

@aleezay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#683

"Wait a minute, you sold me for a chance in choir group?

im in the mid of this chapter but yaar aik dam fitt ti ye line Lol dil ley lia ASR k setence nay sold buhaha for choir group ... only khushi could do this
but what happened that she turned to soul less from tht chirpy girl hayeee !! :/

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Shilpa

@HerFiction

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#684

Khushi prove him wrong. Arnav u did a gud job of returning back.

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barbiebala

@barbiebala

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Posted: 12 years ago

#685

awesome story
its getting interesting update by update
im so much excited to know the mystery of khushi
wow and this arnav is so perfect
super writing
waiting for the next update

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aleezay

@aleezay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#686

the good one yaar keep up the good work lady
yaar its painful isnt it i feel dat way and btw its success of ur words dat others can feel :) now im on chp 13

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aleezay

@aleezay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#687

chp 13
do u know u write tooo good like tooo good :)
tell me a thing have u written any other ff ???

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aleezay

@aleezay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#688

chp 14
plzzz send them to love track plz :p
its a long long way to go it seems
btw do u have a certain schedule acoording to which u update ??

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SA_nimk

@SA_nimk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#689

AMAZING UPDATE!!

beautiful!!!

thanksss to u..arnav came back

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aleezay

@aleezay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#690

chp 17
ooo i need tissue papers ... khushi k ansoo hain for the first hug
look khushi had already bitter part of her life ,, so in present i dnt want smthng bad happening to her plzz