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Posted: 12 years ago
the update was fabulous
part 1
arshi missing each other- beautifully potrayed...
khushi making arnav's sketch widout him being in front was a gr8 thought
part 2
khushi's 1 wrd reply "K" and then arnav cursing 'worser than me'(i could imagine d scene)
khushi carefully handling d meeting
arnav's outburst on aman 😡
khushi cutely saying sorry to arnav
& den a little bit of romance in the cabin😉

part 3
arnav wid broken heart drops khushi 2 her parent's house, promising dat dis is the last tym they r aparting...
khushi's emabarassment in front of her parents bcoz of "those big marks"
her scolding 2 arnav ...
all this was beautifully expressed dat one cud in=magine d scene in front of dem

lastly
this update was STUPENDO FATABULOUSLY FANTSTICAL👏👏👏
Edited by dikshitamehta - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome amazing yaaayyy! u updated fast i am crazy about this story i love it how i love IPKKND thank u so much for the update
amazing update cant wait for more please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved it...

Arnav and khushi missing each other... their longing for each other even they knew that they will meet in the evening tells that depth of their love of each other...

The way arnav deal with his client not bothering about that he will loose the deal was awesome... But poor had to face his wrath... Khushi got really scared seeing this side of arnav... Love the way she apologized to him holding her ears... And at the next second she was transformed into another avatar... Loved the angry khushi...

Awww... Arnav's love bites really embarrassed khushi... On the top of it her father very well knew what happened to her daughter... Loved the teasing arnav... but one thing is sure that khushi not want a decent romance...

Love every bit of it...

Eagerly waiting for next update...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb!! Stupendous!! Marvellous!! Mind blowing chapter👍🏼
.. Hats off to you👏
will reply in detail as usual reading it again and again😊

I guess Arnav will listen first, since he wants to know how was her life before him..then he will immediately go to pick her up and do more things to feel her special and convey his unconditional love
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was awesum They are sho shweet n cute
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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow...simply superb update. It is so sweet the way you described they both missing each other. Waiting to know what is hidden in and around palm tree :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
it was awesomely superb!!!!
loved the way u convey each n every bit of kushi as wel as arnav feelings for each other as they were missing each other!!!
i was just wishing arnav should have seen the drawing done by kushi it would have been melted him!!!
more over loved it when he said "SORRY" for being rough to her n also to eat less spicy n as always she denied him!!!!
it was seriously awesome!!!!
thx for the lovely update!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow that was a pretty long one..

Like the bond between khushi parent and her...

Feeling sad upon the separation... funny love bites that are going on...

Do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am sure you have nice surprise in store for us either way...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update.
Lovd it..
Thanks for pm..

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