FF:Everytime it Rains: Epilogue, pg 268 - Page 192

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Posted: 19 years ago
Wowwwwwwwwwwwww....it's so romantic and oh boy Jai's cabin was really getting hot 😆


You are a great writer sabrina... 👏 .... I love your characterisation of Jai and Bani...not only in this fanfic but the previous one as well...

Hope to see an update soon...at the same time take care of your hand 😊

Regards,
Meena
Edited by Je_aime - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: love is fire

I am totally speechless sabs!! Kasamh se kya update tha! Absolutely MINDBLOWING!!!! 👏

thanks dear

The way you described the whole thing was just awesome!!! and so intense 😳 😳 😳 nearly fainted! 😆 😆 😆

i hope u r ok now 😆

Loved the last scene of them watching the rain!! It was so beautiful!!!!!

i love the rain, find it to be extremely romantic 😛

Lovely update!! continue soon!! 😛

yes dear, maybe another two parts of lesser and then khatam

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Je_aime

Wowwwwwwwwwwwww....it's so romantic and oh boy Jai's cabin was really getting hot 😆

even the a/c was useless na 😆


You are a great writer sabrina... 👏 .... I love your characterisation of Jai and Bani...not only in this fanfic but the previous one as well...

thanks dear, am glad u like my fantasies

Hope to see an update soon...at the same time take care of your hand 😊

yes, i will try and update soon and thanks for checking regarding my hand

Regards,
Meena

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Posted: 19 years ago
I knew she was resigning because she chose Jai!!
Man, I got kicked off your FF earlier, 😭 😭 😭. This dude from the comp lab thought I was reading a s** story, JERK of all jerks. And now he is complaining, so I skidadled and went to another lab😆 😆 . Wait till I kick his a** later.

As for the FF, mindblowing Sabby..I just love the chemistry, the passion between these two. THe tape on the finger was cute, and damn funny. I guess Jai almost lost her, and now he doesnt want to lose her again! But I was laughing soo hard..

Happy Holi hun, and update soonnnn....

Sheen
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: khrhun_sheen

I knew she was resigning because she chose Jai!!

see u know me so well 😆

Man, I got kicked off your FF earlier, 😭 😭 😭. This dude from the comp lab thought I was reading a s** story, JERK of all jerks. And now he is complaining, so I skidadled and went to another lab😆 😆 . Wait till I kick his a** later.

haila sheen sorry about that, take care sweety, and watch out

As for the FF, mindblowing Sabby..I just love the chemistry, the passion between these two. THe tape on the finger was cute, and damn funny. I guess Jai almost lost her, and now he doesnt want to lose her again! But I was laughing soo hard..

thanks hun for the encouraging words

Happy Holi hun, and update soonnnn....

wish u the same my dear and will definitely try and post something soon

Sheen

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Posted: 19 years ago

Rangeeliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

How are you??? Man i missed your ff, i am going to catch up this weekend😃 I intend to completely slack off this weekend.😆

thought of dropping by to say hello

Shina

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Posted: 19 years ago
o00hhh hunnyyyy !! .. i am ssoo soorryy missed reading part 20 ..soorry i am just ssooo busyyy in school work ....only on IF for a lil timee...ave loadsss to do ..and much harder to workk !!! .... 😃 ....

o00hh saabbyyy !! u leave me sppechlessss againb .,...hwo to manage to capture it sooo well ...soo magicsl ...simplyyy tremendousllyy superb ...breath takingg !!!! ..... fab !! ... i jst ave nothign better to say ......fab !!! ...

awwwwww !!! .. i am ssooooo glad.. tht she is basicallyy resigning ..... coz she antss to be with Jai ...makes me feellll mcuhhh betterrrr !!! .... 😃 😃 ...Oyee Hoye ...! .. Bani was taking abt morals and etihics wasnt she ...?? 😳 ...its okiee i think i will remind her ...no woorriess..... 😛 .. 😆 😆 .....awwwww ..so basicallyyy simplyyy perrrfecctt fro know ..unless some villain decides to pop in .. 😕 😭 ....arrreee why si she going like this ..leavingg jai ... yyaarr this is ssooo sad... 😭 😭 ...chaloo it will make the lovee grooww..... 😉 😉 ....haii... i ave turnedd a bit moreee positivee... 😆 😆 ....part and parcel of improivingg ..!!!...

awwwwww Jai is sssoooooo cuteeeeee !!! .. taping it ...awww maannn !!!! ... tht was likeeee 😳 ......well ...i am sureee he is gunnaa gift her a nicee ring ..soo waiting for the proper proposall...andd ahheemmm a weddingg ..adn wht follows after that .... but u seee ... since she has forgotten a bit abt her morals and ethicss.... 😉 😉 ... we gt tht prettyy ssooooonnn !!! .. 😉 .......simplyyyy fab !! ...loveddd it hun ....reallyy doo ....now will be waiting fro the nexxtt part eagerllyyy .... hope u r doing well know .. take care of ur self..and arm ...dont lost the word knw.....just be careful with it .. 😃 ...dont want my angel geting ill.... 😃
Shafaq! 😛

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Posted: 19 years ago

Gosh Sabs, what medication are they giving you?😕

Whatever it is, it's definitely working for us!!😉

Haila, so mnay kisses!!😳

And all described so beautifully!!👏

This is why we are all kiss freaks!!😆

*Sigh*

Now I'm happy with the resignation!!😃.......if it means Bani's choosing Jai over her job, I love it!!😆

Poor Jai........now with Bani gone for a few days, who'll look after him?..........Ahem, I'm free if he needs any extra help!!😉

Hmm🤔......can't remember what else was in that part!😕......the kisses have turned my brain to mush!!😆

P.S. How's the arm coming along?😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
"She taken" ?! awwww....I LOVE HIM!!!! 😳 Only JAI would say something like that!!! Baby put tape on finger...instead of ring on finger...but it's still a sure sign of engagement 😆 awwww...I still can't get over that 😳 😳 😳

AMAZING part Sabs...the beginning was fabulously written...Jai's fear...and then his surprise that she chose HIM...frankly, I don't see why he's surprised...i mean it's JAI WALIA...anything with a brain would obviously choose him over a job 😆 😆 but that's the thing about him...he's so cutely oblivious to the fact that he's so damn gorgeous and sexy and amazing 😃 okay i'm done 😆

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME part...continue soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
HAILA!!!!! I've died and gone to heaven!!!!! Kya Romance tha!!!! 😳 Wonderful scene, Sabs! Absolutey loved it!!!! 😳 So glad that things worked out for them! So happy for them! 😳 😳 😳 Loved how Jai duck taped her ring finger and wrote "She's taken" on it! 😆 Very cheesy but also very cute!!! 😳 Hai! That was so sweet! 😳 Absolutely loved this part! 😳 Wonderful! LIke always! 😉 😃 Now I really can't' wait for the next part! 😳 😆 So please update soon!!!! 😳

Love
Goddess

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