||ArIya SS: Deedar|| update pg-63 *NEW* 24MAY PM Late - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Awesome update

hahaha it's quite funny hehe shree

wow arjun falls for riya head over heels

lovely eagerly waitng for next part

cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
It's awesome so cute ariya plz continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
sooperb .mission whitesuit started😆 "BHABHI" 😉 blushing wow continue the mission white suit. eagerly waiting for result
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
awesome

loved it


thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
nice part...
shree bach gaya... 40yrs ki aadmi 😆

arjun s mission for finding his girl...

update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Please add me to your list. I somehow cannot figure out how to do it. I ALWAYS FOLLOW your stories
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
superb update yar...!!
aww arjun is desperate to know her name..!!!
shree help karne gya.. but ye kya ho gya?😆 mar khate khate bacha bechara...!!!
and that song by arjun..!!! lovely yar
ohh no the girl left,... n no one knows about her?😲
ab kaise dhundhega arjun?
continue soon..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by ll_megha_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
PART-3

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Hear this arjun becomes sad and felt heart broken but shree comes there.

Shree: koi baat nahi bhai hum usse dhond lenge akhir aap ACP ho or aapse koi crimal nahi bach sakta fir to yeh aapka pyaar hain aap isse bhi dhoondlenge or hamare pass bhabhi ki photo bhi hain na. Arjun sees the photo and smile

Arjun: haan shree tum sahi keh rahe ho main apni white suit wali ko dhoondke rahunga or yeh sirf meri hain.

Shree: yeh hui na baat..


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NEXT DAY


Arjun was searching his white suit wali madly in Goa but he could not find her. And after he get tired and heartbroken he sit in one bench and shree also come there and put his hand on his shoulder.


Shree: bhai dont worry hum unhe dhoond nikalenge.


Arjun: kaise shree humne poora goa chan mara but vo kahin nahi mili. I think that i lost her.


Shree: nahi bhai aisa mat boliye hum unhe zaroor dhoondlenge.


Arjun: hmm abh hame Mumbai vapas jana chahiye maa or sam hamara wait kar rahe honge.


Shree: jee bhai... maine kal ki ticket book karali hain.


Arjun: hmm... and both reached there hotel.


In night shree was sleeping and on the otherhand Arjun was seeing that girl photo in his mobile and talking to her as she was listening his talk.


Arjun to the photo: kahan chali gay ho? Dekho kitna pareshaan hoon main or mujhe to tumhara naam bhi nahi pata please mere pass vapas aa jao please...


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AFTER SIX MONTHS


In Morning


One man is talking with the photo


Man: aaj tumhe dekhe hue six months ho gaye hain kahan ho tum? Kitna dhoonda maine tumhe in six months main but tum to aise hawan ke jhoko ki tarah gayab ho gaye.. Please apne arjun ke pass aa jao tumhe ek hi nazar dekha tha tha or tumhe apni zindagi main shaamil karne ka maan bana liya. umhe pata hain na in six months main maa ne mere liye kine rishte dhoonde yaa tak kitni ladkiyon se bhi milvaya but tumhare arjun ka dil sirf tumhare liye save hain please abh jaldi se mujhe mil jaonor dekho abh to mere vo khadoos or sadu dost ACP Sameer Dhaymsingh rathore ki bhi shaadi ho rahi hain please aa jao... He was talking that girl photo but suddenly arjun mom savita came.


Savita: beta


Arjun: haa aye


Savita: beta yeh kuch gifts hain sameer ko de de na or haan vahan shaadi main jaa rahe ho to apne liye bhi koi ladki pasand kar lena.


Arjun: aye aap fir shuru ho gaye.


Savita: arjun mera sirf ek hi sapna hain teri or shree ki shaadi ho jaye or main apni aakhon se tum dono ke bacche dekh saku or tu hain ki mera sapna poorana bhi nahi hone deta jo bhi tere liye ladki dhoondo tu usse mana kar deta hain akhir baat kya hain?


Before arjun speak shree comes there...


Shree: kya badi maa jab dekho bhai ki shaddi ke piche padhe rehte ho? Kabhi apne iss boyfriend pe bhi dhayan de diya karo meri sexy.


Savita: besharam kahika apni badi maa ko aise bolta hain.


Shree: abh aap itni sexy or sundar ho to kya karein.


Savita: tu kabhi nahi sudhar sakta accha tum log packing karo main chalti hoon.


And she goes from there...


Arjun: thanx shree aaj tumne mujhe bacha liya varna maa...


Shree: dont worry bhai I always there for you but bhai abh six months ho gaye hain or hame uske barein main kuch bhi nahi pata abh kya aapko nahi lagta ki aapko usse bhool jana chaiye.


Arjun yells shree..


Shree: bhai ..


Arjun: shree tumne aisa kahan bhi kaise main bhool jayun usse ek baar main saas lena bhool sakta hoon but usse kabhi nahi mil sakta and I am sure vo mujhe bahut jald mile ghi.


Shree: or bhai main aapke saath hoon with that both hug each other and after that they go to airport to board flight for rajasthan...


TO B CONTINUED...


PRECAP:


1. Arjun reached sam house

2. Surprize




Edited by ll_megha_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Wonderful update dr...!!!!
Aww Arjun madly searched for her in Goa but couldn't find her...!!!! Feel bad for him...!!!
OMG even after six months...he couldn't forget her...Wow he crazily love her...!!!
Loved whtever he said to her pic...That's so sweet...!!!
Loved the way Shree saved him frm his mom...!!!
Awww he still belived that he will meet her soon...!!!
Precap looks super interesting...!!!!
I think he will meet Riya there...
Curious to read more...!!!
Thanks 4 pm dr...
Continue soon...


Edited by Aks13 - 12 years ago

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