MG:My bar days!!!!! epilogue updated-34pg on 3rd December - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Awesome update ..
Maaneet talking over phone...
N maan taking her advises..
Tats nice :-)
Now wat ll happen next... :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72


Read all the parts at one go. Its amazing. Very different storyline
Geet forced into the job but she has a dream to her free to live life.
Bauji guiding him in a right manner. At first I was thinking Wat he is doing. Then understood his POV.

Maaneet meeting. Both r friends now. Geet guiding him n warning him to stay away from Natasha.
Continue soon. Want to see more of Maaneet
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Nice concept... Lucking forward for more updt.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Awesome story
Loved it
Plz update soon waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
PART 6

Maan was in hurry today as he & natasha habe decided to go for shopping. he will meet her in college itself & then they would go for shopping after attending there 1st lecture.
Maan:bye dad...
rajeev:arey beta but have breakfast atleast...
maan:no dad I m already late...so will have something in college canteen...bye..
rajeev:ohk bye...
maan takes his car & march toward college.
He gets a massage.
he check his cell phone it was from geet...she had type all the best...
maan smiles & reply thank you for wishing me luck...
geet reads this & smiles.
maan reach college & there was time for lecture.he went in canteen. Prem was sitting on table eating sandwich. Maan takes a sit beside him. Maan: why are u hogging early morning.
prem: as I m hungry...I haven't don't dinner yesterday so elephant's running inside stomach...
maan: lol...hmmn
suddenly kabir comes running over there.
Kabir:hey dude is something there between you & natasha...she called me yesterday dude & was like she want to go with me on a long drive & we kissed each other...
maan:hmmm...
Kabir:dude...r u listing?
maan:its ohk yaar...fine...amm. .u have a lecture to attend so bye...
Kabir:ohk..
prem:wait even I am coming maan.
maan & prem go towards class room.
prem:maan...aam...I know you liked her but she isn't for you yaar she is just using you & nothing else...
maan:ya I know that...let it go yaar...forget it...
they entered the class room & attend lecture.
The bell rings & the lecture was over.maan gets up from his sit & goes out..
Natasha was coming from other side towards maan..
Natasha:hey maan...
maan:hey...
Natasha:so are we going out like shopping...
maan:no yaar I am going with someone else...you can carry on with kabir he must be waiting for you...
maan smiles & goes away...
Maan calls geet.
geet:hello...
maan:geet I m coming over there...
he cuts the call & runs towards his car.
Geet felt it strange...

precap:maan to take geet out...
Edited by nimi216 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Me first...

R u updating more as I think it's left in middle.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
Good update.
Give us a long and frequent update...

Good maan knows about natasha...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
awesome part
maan come to know about natasha real self
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Nyc..

So maan too ignores that natasha lol 😆
and precap wowww!! Cant wait ...:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Just read ur story
It's really interesting
Want to read more
Soo now maaneet are meeting again
Continue soon

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