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Posted: 12 years ago
I'm running out of word to appreciate your writings😃
so i'm just gonna simple say AWESOME😃

continue soon
thnx for pm

❤️Love ❤️
😊Yashi😊
Edited by yashimalhotra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😭 😭 😭

.rumaali madam apna rumaal dedo...ansu ponchne hain
Jis bat ka dar tha wahi hua

Dat was a fab update dear...

Megha wants Mohan to go & Mohan as always is so undrstndng...

Nw cant wait fr d future track...

Wats up nw...

Waiting...waiting...waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good going Poo Loved both the chapters to the core
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hiya Asmita 🤗!!! Colorful comments making me colorfully bright and happy! Thank you dearie 😃! Isn't it amazing MM doing the magic on us just by staring at each other and coming closer without closing down much 😳!

Hiya Jonaki 🤗!!! Yeah, Cookie is too small to play around with her 🤔. Hope Mohan gets his way around with the kidoo as she grows up 😉! Don't worry Mohan is smart enough to handle her darlings! 😃

Thank you Jia 🤗!

Welcome to the FF @Kunakshadeewani 😃! Glad that you are enjoying my writing and your reading! Hope to keep you hooked up here through its end! 😃

Hiya Dharu desi girl 🤗🤗!!! Mohan and his dreams - Sure girl! I know what you are thinking there 😳😉! SSN1 has a lasting inspiration in me which will never go away and gets reflected in my every writing I believe!

Thank you Shivangi 🤗! Yes tomorrow has come today! 😃

Hiya Nidz 🤗!!! Welcome to this new MM world and hope you enjoy your stay here 😃! I am glad to have made you connect with the characters and the story 😳! Promo and Me ??!! Wrong combo 😆! Thanks for your involvement and the suggestion! I hope I can give a proper lead in every ending of the chapter! 😃

Hilllaa Polly 🤗!! I thought I lost you 😆! Megha is special in her own way! Isn't she 😉? I have always had my eyes on her 😉😆! Yeah I know, how dare Tanya does that 😡! If only Mohan falls for her tactics 😆! SSN1's influence never vanishes away from us ! Leaving is not to be worried about, girl! After all our Megha is still charmed by her Prince Charming! 😳

Hiya Yashi 🤗!!! Thank you Thank you Thank you 😃! Even I am running out of words to show my gratitude to all your love! 😳

Hiiiyaa Maanvir darling 🤗!!! No dear! These are not the moments to cry dear 🤗! Sit back, relax and enjoy 😊! I am not a tear jerker myself! So be happy, baby! 😛

Hiya Pravesh! Welcome back!!! Thanks boy! 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter Fourteen

The birthday party was a blast. Nanhi looked like a pretty doll in a sapphire blue party frock with frills and flowers. It happened that both Megha and Mohan matched their outfit to that of the baby's. Megha was stunning in a royal blue tea length dress that had the flares running till her knee leaving her shapely legs bare. It was the first dress she indulged herself in, using the savings from her salesgirl payroll. Mohan wore a marine blue party shirt.

Mohan couldn't stop himself from stealing glances at the pretty form of Megha. He accepted the compliments for his special skills on the party food, sharing a pleasure of nod with Megha, every now and then. Megha didn't fail to throw her share of glances at him as well. She loved the party look of Mohan's, which was a change from his otherwise sporty and casual outfits. She wondered how he looked, in his business world.

Everyone was amazed at the bond shared between Mohan and Nanhi. Shashi acknowledged their relationship and wanted things to work in favor of Megha as well. She approached Megha who was silently watching her Prince Charming entertaining her Little Princess amidst the crowd.

"He is so adorable. Isn't he?" Shashi asked

"Who?" Megha was startled and redirected the question back to her

"I caught you, Megha! Stop pretending. I know you like Mohan" Shashi didn't believe in beating around the bush

"It's easy for me to like anybody, given my circumstances. Isn't it?" Megha said dejectedly

"Don't be harsh on yourself. You sure know that you are not like that. And Mohan is good"

"Are you asking me to get weak in his solace, Shashi aunty? To forget the search of recovery that I went through? And to forget all the difficulty of coming back from a space that once offered the mirage of safety and security? You know that will do no justice to my living on my own" Megha spoke breathless pouring out her emotions which only Shashi knew very well

"So, you are going to let him leave you?" Shashi didn't want to give up

Megha calmed down and said "Yes. And he is more than fine with that as well"

Shashi sat down sipping her juice "Mohan seemed to be very fond of you. He never stopped talking about you while coming back to the hotel"

"Mohan is good, Shashi aunty. He must have taken our situation far more personal than he intended to. When he is gone, he would get to see things in proper perspective" She lowered her eyes unsure of what she was saying

"Do you think that is what you are doing?" Shashi squeezed her brows questioning the silly girl

Megha didn't want to continue this conversation and more than anything she didn't want to put too many thoughts into her inner feelings. "I don't know what I am doing, Shashi aunty. But all I know is I need to focus on my daughter and my job"

"You are too much into your own, Megha" Shashi sounded as if she was angry. Megha suppressed her pain in the words thrown at her. Shashi sensed that and felt bad for being harsh.

Shashi put her hands on Megha's as if apologizing and said "I don't think his affection has anything to do with your situation, Megha"

"Then blame it on the way we met. If only the timing were any different" Megha sighed trying to ease out the heaviness in her heart

"If only you could see what you could be to each other, in real" Shashi said and walked off

Megha shook her head sadly. She took her glance back to the scene around the two special people of hers, which hooked her for the rest of the day.

***

Mohan and Megha were finding it hard to receive the last few days. He did everything in his control to stay aloof from Megha and she did her part well too.

Mohan jogged into Megha's gate one morning to find Megha standing near his bike, which was left parked there, as always. He went around and saw what she was looking at. There was a beautiful little painting of a caged bird on its fuel tank

"That's lovely" Mohan was really impressed

"I am glad you liked it" Megha looked at him eagerly

He watched the painting closer and recognized the thought behind it. "I would have liked it better if the bird is flying off the cage" He hinted

She swallowed hard knowing that he caught her off guard. "I have seen what happened to a bird using its freedom" She said with a sigh

"Don't you think the bird has every right to try it new choices" He wasn't talking about the bird anymore

"What if it turns out to be a wrong choice?" She knew what he meant

"Sometimes you got to have the faith to believe in things, Megha" He looked at her as if asking her to reconsider

"I am too scared to do that"

He gave a tender look at her. He had an impulse to pull her close to him to make her feel safe.

"But I have known you to be courageous" He said instead

"So it goes. The cage is needed to keep my courage intact" She closed the topic without further debate

Mohan wrapped the little painting on his bike with a cellophane sheet. He was upset that she hurried everything to finish his job there at the earliest. His Nanny days were soon to be gone.

***

In the next few days, he took even more reserved attitude towards Megha and maintained a formal and polite conversation with her. He treated her as her boss and performed his service dutifully. She knew that he was upset but decided, against her will, that it would pass.

But with Nanhi, he wasn't any indifferent. He continued to be the happiest man on the planet whenever he was with the baby.

"Hey Cookie, come to Manny" He carried Nanhi and spent most of his day talking and playing with her

"Will you miss me, Cookie?" He asked the baby in a shaky voice

"Goo-goo" Nanhi responded

"She is too young to remember you" Megha intruded them

That hurt him. She felt bad for saying it loud though it was the truth. She quickly added

"I am sure your little things will keep her busy and she will know you through them"

He turned his gaze to her eyes questioning what she said.

"Can you do me a favor? If you think I deserve it" He asked Megha

His statement offended her but she didn't show it and nodded her head

"Please email me Cookie's picture, every month on her birthday. Will you?" He almost begged

"Yes" Megha quieted down, not wanting to deny his request any more

***

It was the last day of Mohan's stay at Alibag. Megha had finished her painting. Together she and Mohan delivered it to the Taj Mahal hotel in David's van. It hung along with her other series of paintings, on the huge reception lounge walls, as if inviting the guests to be part of good times.

Mohan took pictures of them saying "I want to show them to my sister"

He took snaps of Megha and Nanhi near the painting, capturing them in his heart as well. God, I love them and am going to miss them like hell!

"Good bye Shashi aunty" He hugged Shashi who was on the verge of tears

His rented out truck, loaded with his stuff was waiting outside. He planned to ride on his bike. Megha walked out with him to bid his farewell.

"Thank you, for the best memories in my life" He said to Megha, controlling his urge to hug her

He focused his emotions on the little angel, and kissed on her soft head, trying to feel its softness for one last time. Am I not good enough for you both?

As if reading his emotions, Megha said "Mohan, you sure are a Prince Charming. Any girl would be lucky to have you in her life" But I am not that any girl, any more

She also added "And I bet, you would make the girl's fantasy world come real true"

But not yours?! He asked her through his eyes

"Hope you understand" She finally said tearing her eyes away from him

That was the problem. Mohan understood her too much to press her further. He knew what she was going through and he cursed himself for not knowing a way to make her understand things differently.

He wished to show that he wanted to be part of her life. That he needed her in his life. He wanted to pull her into his arms and kiss her hard, to get through her. But he was too scared to make things worse, leaving all doors shut down forever. He was restless not knowing how to make her read his heart's message. Will time heal everything?

Without further word, he waved them all and rode off on his bike. His eyes didn't glare away from the two special faces, knowing he wouldn't able to forget them ever. He was glad to have restored what he had ruined in the first place, and ignored the ruin his heart had to go through in the process.

Chapter Fifteen bringing smiles... 😊
Edited by Senpoo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Too awesome part...
But the last phase was emotional...
But i liked it very very much...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg separation!!! I hate separations!!

Btw why do i feel like megha would again run in ssn 1 style and stop mohan from going??
Plss continue fast.. 1 day is too much of wait!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update once again Poo 👍🏼
D whole convo between Megha n Shashi aunty was very nice 😊
One could understand how much difficult it is for Megha to forget her not so good past n move on n trust someone else again...it hurts actually 😒
N how much difficult it would have been for Mohan to leave after spending such wonderful moments wid both mother-daughter duo 😭
Both of dem have become d most importamt part of his life!!
Waiting eagerly for d next part...i could see some surprise coming up...haina Poo
Edited by -...mohini...- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
mohan in blue shirt...wow he is looking sooo dashing in blue 😊 ...n megha in western dress...nice n cookie in blue frock awww she is looking chwooo sweet 😃
... bt mohan is going ..😔.
I m really crying 😭 ... mohan... feeling soo sad yaar...
mohan kissed cookies head ... how cute n emotional scene...
15th will be happy ...as u wrote bt... 14th is tooo emotional... mohan jaa raha hai... sach me challa jaayega... ? 🥺
Edited by KKK143 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤗Poo...👏👏👏
🥳 balle balle... party...😃
aww... nahi Cookie fork mein
Megha Mohan matching dress "itni jaldi ek hi rang mein rang gaye"😳
Mohan ka new wardrobe😆😆😆 hope to see him blazers soon 😉in mission patao Megha ko😳
adorable charmer toh humesha hi entertaining hai for our eyes n also for Megha😉
Shashi aunty bahut shaani cheez hai
Megha aur Mohan ke code languages 😆😆😆panchi banu udti phiru mast gagan me😉
aww..monuwa...still hoping 'kaash yeh sach hota ye meri future hota ' temporary reality permanent ho jaye😉[ remembering farm house wala story Mohan narrating to biwi Guru Kaash yeh sapna sach hota😳]
aww..Mohan ka Megha se door rehne ki koshish Mohan begging for love 😭
😭😭😭Mohan leaving...rahon mein bechade
😭😭😭dil ko shaq hai magar shayad hum phri mile😉
[Poo...waiting for Mohan's come back Ta ra ra re re ra ra...tere Ishq mein ..tere ishq mein in dhasu istyle in his bike n nanhi Cookie n Megha both go Goo...Gooo😉 for Manny]
Edited by raokrithika - 12 years ago

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