MG SS - mujhe Shadhi Nahi Karni...last pt on pg 29 - Page 11

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Geet just blinks looking at Maan...

What is he doing here?

Ab mujhe apne ghar pe bhi chain se jeene nahi dega?

Shadhi toh ho rahi haina?

Ab itne bhi kya jaldhi hai?

Mein toh uska hi ghar jaane wali hoon, ab isko yahan aane ki kya zaroori thi?

Meera: Maan tumne bathaya nahi ki tum bhi hummare saath aarahe ho?

Maan is not listening...he is only seeing Geet, so she didn't expect me?

Maan: meinne toh bathaya tha

Meera: phir Geet tumme aaise kyun dekhthi? Tumne phone pe jagda toh nahi kiya haina?

Maan thinks...baat karthe toh jagda hotha...

Geet looks a little scared too...

Gia stares Maan too...

She recognizes him...

Geet was worried that day...he is the Dhust Danav...

Gia runs and hides behind Geet suddenly...

Geet is also surprised...

Ye Maan ko dekhkke itna kyun dar gayi?

Meera: kya hua? Aap iss uncle ko nahi jaathe? Geet tum ne Gia ko Maan ke barein mein nahi bathaya?

Gia: ye Dhsut danav hai

Geet tries to close her mouth...

Maan stares Geet...

Gia has noticed that ...

Maan tries to reach Gia who is still hiding behind Geet...

As he bends over Geet's shoulders, he makes contact with her and Geet becoems nervous...

Is he doing this deliberately? What? Apne hi mangetkar he saath? Haaa? Babaji, isski ye himmat?

He lifts Gia and takes her out...

Gai: chodo mujhe, Geeet

Maan: hare, aao hum bahar khehthe hai

Isske pehle Maan ke image aur damage hotha Maan Gia ko bahar lekhe jaatha...

Gia: tum chale jao yahan se, Geet tummare saath nahi aayegi

Maan is shocked hearing this...toh ye bhi hummari Geet handa ki kaam hi hai...

Maan has to clear her misunderstandings...

Warna ye bhi Maneet ko milne nahi degi...

Aajkal yahi Geet ki bodyguard jo bangayi ,haina?

Maan: tumme kya lagtha? Mein yahan Geet se milne aatha?

Gia: haan

Maan: nahi, mein toh apni Gia se milne hi aatha hoon

Gia: mein bhi tummare saath nahi aaoongi

Maan:  toh teek hai, mein aatha hoona, tumse milne

Gia: kyun?

Maan: tummare saath khelne, aur bathao, tumme kaunsa game pasand hai?

Maan gives her his mobile...

He tries to befriend her...

Gia likes to play fruit ninja, and Maan shows her how to play...

Gia snatches the mobile...: mujhe patha hai

Maan thinks that she is just like choti Geet...

Maan: tumme kaise patha ki mein Dhust Danav hoon?

Gia: woh , mujhe patha hai

Maan: tummari bua ne kaha?

Gia: nahi, meri friend ne kaha

Maan: kaun?

Gia: Geeet

Maan: mujhe patha tha, kaise woh mujhe dekhhti hai, jaise mein koi villain hoon

Gia: tum bahut bhure ho?

Maan: tum hi bathao, mein itna bhura hoon

Maan takes out a candy...

Gia: nahi

Maan: toh friends

Maan gives her the candy...

Gia takes it from him and they become friends...

Chalo Gia ke saath friendship toh ban gayi...

Geet ka friend banna itna asaan nahi lagtha...

Geet bahut pareshaan hai...Iit's lunch time...

Ye khana khakke aaye hai ya nahi?

Geet looks worried...

She had said that she will make Maggi for the two of them...

Gia likes Maggi...Geet too likes it...

Warna Ranno kuch banathi...

Meera: kya soch rahi ho?

Geet: kuch nahi

Geet brings them juice...

She takes it to Maan...

Maan just keeps looking at her...

Aur kitne dher gurkke rahega?

Geet takes the glass, keeps it near him and leaves...

She goes to the kitchen and tries hard to cook something...

Kya banathi? Kuch patha hoga toh banayegi?

All the sabjis look like monsters to Geet...

Inko kaise kaatke kaise curry banathe?

Everything looked so simple on Masterchef, haina?

Never holded a knife in her hands...then how could she cook?

Geet ka maanna hai ki khana pakana bhi shahdi ke liye ek ladhki ki qualification hai, jab tak Geet cooking nahi seekhthi usski shadhi nahi hogi, aaise sochke kitchen se dhoor bhaagthi rehthi...

Meera comes...: aaj ka special kya hai?

Gia just comes in with the candy...

Gia answers: Maggi

Meera: Maggi?

Meera finds Geet embarrassed...

Meera: humme toh maggi bahut pasand hai

Gia: mujhe bhi, mujhe bhi

Toh Geet ho jaye...do minute...

Maggi tayaar...

Dev looks surprised...

Meera signals him to act normal...

Dev: wow...Maggi

Maan hears that...maggi?

Mein yahan pehle bar aaya hoon khane ke liye, aur Ye mujhe Maggi khilayegi?

Geet serves them...

Maan: bas, mujhe

Meera intervenes: bahut pasand haina?

She winks...

Maan also doesn't want to disappoint Geet...

Maan: haan, mujhe sauce chahiye

Geet gets the ketchup...

Maan tries hard and eats it...

Dev: dessert mein kya hai?

Geet blinks...ye koi 5 star hotel hai kya?

Meera kicks dev's foot...

Maan: haan haan Geet, muh meeta nahi karoge?

Geet stares at him...

Maan smiles...

Meera: Gia, aapko ice cream pasand haina

Gia: haan

Meera: Geet tumme kaunsa flavor pasand hai

Geet: koi bhi

Gia: isse toh chocolate ice cream pasand hai, aur chocolates bhi

Gia asks Meera to bend down as if she is going to tell some secret...

And she says it loud...

Gia: Geet ne meri chocolate churaliya hai

Meera laughs...

Maan looks at her and smiles...

Geet: Giaaa

Gia: kal darji ne mujhe do 5 star diya tha aur ek meinne khaliya dusra fridge mein tha, ab nahi hai, tumne hi churaya haina? Chocolate chor

Geet: ssshhh Gia, meinne nahi churaya, shayad chuhe ne khali

Gia: chuha Fridge ke andar kaise jaatha?

Geet: raat ko jab tum so rahi thi tab jaatha

Gia: jooti

Meera: koi baat nahi, chalo hum tere liye ice cream lekhe aathe hai,Dev chalo

Geet waits for Maan to go...

But Maan is just looking at Geet...

Geet looks at Maan and then Meera...

Maan ko patha chal gaya ki Geet kya chahathi, just get lost from here, haina?

Maan tries to get up...

But Meera stops him...

Meera: Maan ko ice cream pasand nahi hai

Meera leaves...

Maneet are left alone...Maan just waited for this, haina?

 

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Geet just blinks looking at Maan...

What is he doing here?

Ab mujhe apne ghar pe bhi chain se jeene nahi dega?

Shadhi toh ho rahi haina?

Ab itne bhi kya jaldhi hai?

Mein toh uska hi ghar jaane wali hoon, ab isko yahan aane ki kya zaroori thi?

Meera: Maan tumne bathaya nahi ki tum bhi hummare saath aarahe ho?

Maan is not listening...he is only seeing Geet, so she didn't expect me?

Maan: meinne toh bathaya tha

Meera: phir Geet tumme aaise kyun dekhthi? Tumne phone pe jagda toh nahi kiya haina?

Maan thinks...baat karthe toh jagda hotha...

Geet looks a little scared too...

Gia stares Maan too...

She recognizes him...

Geet was worried that day...he is the Dhust Danav...

Gia runs and hides behind Geet suddenly...

Geet is also surprised...

Ye Maan ko dekhkke itna kyun dar gayi?

Meera: kya hua? Aap iss uncle ko nahi jaathe? Geet tum ne Gia ko Maan ke barein mein nahi bathaya?

Gia: ye Dhsut danav hai

Geet tries to close her mouth...

Maan stares Geet...

Gia has noticed that ...

Maan tries to reach Gia who is still hiding behind Geet...

As he bends over Geet's shoulders, he makes contact with her and Geet becoems nervous...

Is he doing this deliberately? What? Apne hi mangetkar he saath? Haaa? Babaji, isski ye himmat?

He lifts Gia and takes her out...

Gai: chodo mujhe, Geeet

Maan: hare, aao hum bahar khehthe hai

Isske pehle Maan ke image aur damage hotha Maan Gia ko bahar lekhe jaatha...

Gia: tum chale jao yahan se, Geet tummare saath nahi aayegi

Maan is shocked hearing this...toh ye bhi hummari Geet handa ki kaam hi hai...

Maan has to clear her misunderstandings...

Warna ye bhi Maneet ko milne nahi degi...

Aajkal yahi Geet ki bodyguard jo bangayi ,haina?

Maan: tumme kya lagtha? Mein yahan Geet se milne aatha?

Gia: haan

Maan: nahi, mein toh apni Gia se milne hi aatha hoon

Gia: mein bhi tummare saath nahi aaoongi

Maan:  toh teek hai, mein aatha hoona, tumse milne

Gia: kyun?

Maan: tummare saath khelne, aur bathao, tumme kaunsa game pasand hai?

Maan gives her his mobile...

He tries to befriend her...

Gia likes to play fruit ninja, and Maan shows her how to play...

Gia snatches the mobile...: mujhe patha hai

Maan thinks that she is just like choti Geet...

Maan: tumme kaise patha ki mein Dhust Danav hoon?

Gia: woh , mujhe patha hai

Maan: tummari bua ne kaha?

Gia: nahi, meri friend ne kaha

Maan: kaun?

Gia: Geeet

Maan: mujhe patha tha, kaise woh mujhe dekhhti hai, jaise mein koi villain hoon

Gia: tum bahut bhure ho?

Maan: tum hi bathao, mein itna bhura hoon

Maan takes out a candy...

Gia: nahi

Maan: toh friends

Maan gives her the candy...

Gia takes it from him and they become friends...

Chalo Gia ke saath friendship toh ban gayi...

Geet ka friend banna itna asaan nahi lagtha...

Geet bahut pareshaan hai...Iit's lunch time...

Ye khana khakke aaye hai ya nahi?

Geet looks worried...

She had said that she will make Maggi for the two of them...

Gia likes Maggi...Geet too likes it...

Warna Ranno kuch banathi...

Meera: kya soch rahi ho?

Geet: kuch nahi

Geet brings them juice...

She takes it to Maan...

Maan just keeps looking at her...

Aur kitne dher gurkke rahega?

Geet takes the glass, keeps it near him and leaves...

She goes to the kitchen and tries hard to cook something...

Kya banathi? Kuch patha hoga toh banayegi?

All the sabjis look like monsters to Geet...

Inko kaise kaatke kaise curry banathe?

Everything looked so simple on Masterchef, haina?

Never holded a knife in her hands...then how could she cook?

Geet ka maanna hai ki khana pakana bhi shahdi ke liye ek ladhki ki qualification hai, jab tak Geet cooking nahi seekhthi usski shadhi nahi hogi, aaise sochke kitchen se dhoor bhaagthi rehthi...

Meera comes...: aaj ka special kya hai?

Gia just comes in with the candy...

Gia answers: Maggi

Meera: Maggi?

Meera finds Geet embarrassed...

Meera: humme toh maggi bahut pasand hai

Gia: mujhe bhi, mujhe bhi

Toh Geet ho jaye...do minute...

Maggi tayaar...

Dev looks surprised...

Meera signals him to act normal...

Dev: wow...Maggi

Maan hears that...maggi?

Mein yahan pehle bar aaya hoon khane ke liye, aur Ye mujhe Maggi khilayegi?

Geet serves them...

Maan: bas, mujhe

Meera intervenes: bahut pasand haina?

She winks...

Maan also doesn't want to disappoint Geet...

Maan: haan, mujhe sauce chahiye

Geet gets the ketchup...

Maan tries hard and eats it...

Dev: dessert mein kya hai?

Geet blinks...ye koi 5 star hotel hai kya?

Meera kicks dev's foot...

Maan: haan haan Geet, muh meeta nahi karoge?

Geet stares at him...

Maan smiles...

Meera: Gia, aapko ice cream pasand haina

Gia: haan

Meera: Geet tumme kaunsa flavor pasand hai

Geet: koi bhi

Gia: isse toh chocolate ice cream pasand hai, aur chocolates bhi

Gia asks Meera to bend down as if she is going to tell some secret...

And she says it loud...

Gia: Geet ne meri chocolate churaliya hai

Meera laughs...

Maan looks at her and smiles...

Geet: Giaaa

Gia: kal darji ne mujhe do 5 star diya tha aur ek meinne khaliya dusra fridge mein tha, ab nahi hai, tumne hi churaya haina? Chocolate chor

Geet: ssshhh Gia, meinne nahi churaya, shayad chuhe ne khali

Gia: chuha Fridge ke andar kaise jaatha?

Geet: raat ko jab tum so rahi thi tab jaatha

Gia: jooti

Meera: koi baat nahi, chalo hum tere liye ice cream lekhe aathe hai,Dev chalo

Geet waits for Maan to go...

But Maan is just looking at Geet...

Geet looks at Maan and then Meera...

Maan ko patha chal gaya ki Geet kya chahathi, just get lost from here, haina?

Maan tries to get up...

But Meera stops him...

Meera: Maan ko ice cream pasand nahi hai

Meera leaves...

Maneet are left alone...Maan just waited for this, haina?

 

 

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part 10
awesome...
hahaha Gia is just like Geet...
arey Geet samjho Maan ki feelings dear...
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whoaaa geet sooo does not wanna get married.. ok now they really need to talk.. cont soon hun
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part 11
awesome...
Geet is shocked to see Maan here...
oh ho what should Maan do to woo her?
cont soon dear...
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superb. wow maneet are gonna be alone. now what will happen . am excited plz update soon
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Maan  thinks...Meera ye achcha idea nahi hai, mujhe isske saath akhele chodkke jaana? Ab toh mein kabhi bhi Dusht danav ban saktha, you know I'm turning into a devil now, and this Geet is arousing my desires...

But he had come here to talk with Geet...haina?

Then why hesitate...aaj toh baat karna hi hoga...

Geet gets up to go to the kitchen...

Maan: Geet

Geet stops...ab kya?

She always has this funny feeling when she is with Maan alone...

She tries to hide that...

Maan: kahan bhaagthi ho?

Geet: kya? Mein kahin nahi bhaag rahi thi, ye mera ghar hai, samje?

Geet comes and sits, in a corner...at a safe distance where Maan can't hear her heart beat...

Maan keeps looking at her...

She is just looking so inviting today...maybe as Maan knows that she is going to be his wife, he has this very dirty thoughts about her, or maybe she is really looking so hot, that too with her attitude...

Yahi aatitude ko dekhkke Maan fida ho gaya tha...

Maan: hare, yahan aao, mere paas

Geet looks at him with suspicion...

Koi galat irada toh nahi hoga, haina babaji?

Maan: mujhe kuch baat karni hai

Geet moves one step forward...shifts to the next seat...

But Maan is serious, he had come here to talk with Geet, not with any other intention, ye toh Geet ke aaj ka avatar kuch aaisa tha ki Maan ke mann mein bhi aaise gande khyaal aathe rehthe ahi, warna Maan kabhi aaise nahi sochtha, haina?

Maan: tum mere family ke barein mein kya jaanthi ho?

Geet blinks...she had not heard much...

After all that huss and fuss she just knew that his parents are long gone and now his Dadi and bua are his family...

Maan: tumne suna hoga, mere parents ke barein mein

Geet: haan, mujhe patha hai,I'm sorry

Maan: aur kya jaanthi  ho?

Geet  ko patha nahi ye kya pooch raha hai...

Ussne toh suna hai ki usskke maa kissi accident mein mar gayi aur usske papa koi bimari se

Haan, Kiran sabse yahi kehthi...

Aur Darji ko sab patha hai, Vijay ne badathi, phir bhi unhonne socha Kiarn ka version hi behthar hai, past ki kya fikar hai? aaj ko dekho, Maan ko dekho, usskke itne choti si umar mein business sambalne ki kabilyat ko dekho, haina? Hoshiarpur ke logon ko darji se behthar kaun jaantha? Unko sach patha chala toh ek din mein iss shadhi ko rokh sakthe...unko koi aur kaam hi nahi hai seva dusron ke barein mein kahaaniyan banane ki...

Geet remains silent...

Maan kuch zaroori baat share karna chahatha hai...

She gives up her pagalpan and listens to him seriously...with real concern...

Maan: jaise ki tumme bathaya gaya mere maa kissi accident mein nahi mari, mere baap ne ussko mardala, aur ussne sucide kardhi

He has no respect whatsoever for his parents, he had suffered a lot b'coz of them...

And even after they left, their deeds still haunt him...people just see him as the unlucky son of those morons and not as Maan, the individual...it's not his fault that he is their son...

Maan just told her in her face...without any hesitation...

He felt she should know the truth...

Geet didn't react...

She is shocked though...

Why is he telling her all this?...

It's better she knew this after marriage or sometime later, when they get to know each other...

Ye donno pehle bar baat kar rahe hai aur Maan yahi baat karna chahatha?

Maan continued...

Maan: my dad was very short tempered, he killed his wife in his anger

This time Geet is realy shocked...

Geet looks into his eyes...

He is not ashamed to accept the truth, neither is he sorry for what happened to them...

Maan  looks at her...now he is relieved...

Sare sachayi Geet ko bathadhiya...

Now he can face her with confidence...

Maan Geet ko hi gur raha hai...

Geet turns away unable to face those killer eyes...

Maan: tum kuch kehna chahoge?

Geet thinks...ye koi confession session hai kya? sach ka samna?

But she is happy that he told her the truth...

So he wants her to know everything about him, he trusts her so much...

Wants to share everything with her...

Cahlo ab meri bari...

Geet tells about her interest and how she hated this marriage...and also about her on going stayagraha...

Geet: I hate my dad, he doesn't know anything about my dreams, he didn't even want to know

Maan is surprised, so that's why she is behaving like this, ye toh sach mein pagal hai...

Maan: aur tummari maa, you love her, haina?

Maan is unlucky, he didn't get his mother's love and care...

But Geet is very lucky to have a mother like Ranno...

Geet: nahi, I hate her too, she didn't support me either

Maan: you know what's your problem? You have everything, more than necessary

Geet understood what Maan meant...it's not the material necessities, but the love of her family...

Geet felt sorry for him...

Maan  never wanted her to feel sorry for him nor did he want her sympathies...

Maan continued...in a steady voice...

Maan: kehthe hai, mein apne papa pe gaya hoon, mujhe bhi bahut gussa aatha

Geet looks at him confused...

Ye mujhe dara raha hai ya warn kar raha hai, you better be carefull...

Maan: what?

Geet: kuch nahi

Maan: You can add me to your hate list now

Geet: kya?

Maan: ek baat bathaoon

Geet: haan

Maan: don't you think it's high time you gave up your so called stayagraha, your parents don't deserve this, they love you so much

Maan thinks that it's b'coz of this satyagraha she is not talking with him

Maan: aur ek baat, tumme kabhi bhi lagtha ki ab tumme ye sab chodna chahiye, I mean you want peace talks or something, you can always call me, you have my number, haina?

Geet: haan

Maan: missed call bhi cahlega

Geet doesn't say anything...

Then they go back to their silent mode...

Maan is back on duty...looking and admiring his Mishty...

She kept adjusting her hair just like she does always...

Maan can't control himself...

He just can't take it anymore...

Maan tries to ignore Geet...

Look away from her...

Geet too senses something wrong...

This silence is killing her...

She switches on the TV...

Just to divert their attention...

It's getting out of control, her hidden feeling...

It's that peeloon song running...

Maan can't control his urge...

He snatches the remote from her touching her fingers in the process...

Geet withdraws her hands quickly...

Maan changes the channel...

Geet : hare, channel kyun badla?

Maan: mujhe cricket dekhna hai

Geet: aaj koi match nahi hai

Maan: toh?

Geet: mujhe woh Ghana sunna hai, I love Mohit's voice

Maan thinks...sare ladhkiyan toh Emraan ko dekhthi...aur Geet?

And it's not safe to see that song along with Geet alone...haina babaji?

Maan is reminded of the lines...

Hai pine ka mosam...

Peeloon tere neele neele naianon

 

an gets back to his senses...
 

Maan: tum apne kamre mein jakke dekho, mujhe ye match dekhna hai

Maan is viewing some cartoon channel...Bheem's cricket...

Geet smiles and leaves...

Maan: ye mujhe aaise kyun dekhthi hai

Maan looks at the TV...

Maan: what? She thinks that I'm chota bheem fan?

MSK ka haal behaal ho gaya...

Geet apne room mein jakke tv on karthi...

The song reached had the end...

Ussko dekhkke Geet ko kuch kuch hotha hai...

She thinks of Maan doing the same with her...

What ? he thinks like that about me?

Geet goes and locks the door...

Babaji, mera raksha karna...

Ye gia bhi na? ice cream ke naam sunthe hi mujhe akhele chodke chali gayi...aane do usse...

Seeing the car some neighbour called Ranno and informed her that ladhkewale aaye hai...

She returns home in a hurry only to find Maan sitting alone in front of the TV ...

Ye Geet kahan hai?

Ranno: aayiye aayiye, Geeet

Maan: Geet upar hai, apne kamre mein

Ranno is embarrassed...ye ladhki bhi na?

Kahin issne apne satyagraha Maan ke saath bhi shuru nahi ki?

She goes and knocks Geet's room...

Ranno: tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: mein TV dekh rahi hoon

Ranno: ye tum neeche Maanji ke saath bhi dekh sakthi thi

Geet: par unkko news dekhna tha

Ranno: babaji, mein iss ladhki ko kya karoon?

Geet: maa, tum itne pareshaan kyun hothi ho? unhonne hi mujhe kaha ki apne kamrein mein jaake dekho

Ranno:  ab tum aao mere saath

Ranno takes her to the hall...

Ranno: tum yahi beitke batein karo, mein abhi aathi hoon

Geet: kya?

Ranno stares...

Geet sits in a corner, faraway from Maan...

 

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nice update...

maan ne apni mom and dad ke baare mein bataya...good...

geet ne bhi apna styagarah ke baare mein bataya...😆.to good...


do continue soon