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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#611

very very nice update...

starting of the update,the way u portrayed kushis love for arnav ,its simply superb...she did not know that is love yet...liked the way arnav talked to kushi and make her understand the situation...and kushi demanded arnav not to attend those meetings...the way she asked...while reading my face😃😃😃😃😃😃...

with his mother also , they don't have much age diffrence but his love and respect for his mother very touchy...he did not blame his father too...

now present, they separated for 2 yrs,i don't want to think negtive to this beautifull sotry...probably arnav joined in the army, in that era ,they asked men has to join in the army that too first borns or those who are intrested...i guess arnav is an army doctor😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉...may be iam wrong...

thank u for the beautiful chapter...

cheers...

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Chamkili77

@Chamkili77

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#612

Hi a beautiful chapter - poetry in motion when it came to explaining Arnav and Khushi dialogue.

But I thought Arnav was to take Khushi away after his exams and now 2 years have gone by!

What happened ? Hope Arnav not in jail or something for keeping the company of revolutionaries???? A cliffhanger and can't wait for next update.

Ps by the way normally I get a pm when you update but this time u didn't. But because I anyway stalk this thread I knew you had updated.

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lOVENI

@lOVENI

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#613

Love it, so beautifully written but I am really sad for both of them..hope this heart break will just increase there love for each other...

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illa

@illa8

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#614

brilliant part buddy...but why has arnab been gone for 2 years when he told khushi that he would take her in a month or is he just waiting till she is old enough to come an take?? =) continue soon =)

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#615

Thanks for the beautiful chapter..
Starting with Arnab and Khushi conversation...
Beautifully portrayed Khushi's love for Aranb...you are awesome Jenny.
But now present, they separated for two years😲...I really don't want to think negative...
This cliffhanger ks not good for us Jenny...
Please please update soon.

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bellacoolio

@bellacoolio

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#616

This is beautiful and emotional! But two years have passed! Wonder what has happened to Arnab...

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DhivyaMurali

@dhivyamurali

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#617

interesting chapter Jenny! my heart went out to Khushi straight away...

waiting for ur next one...and thank you so very much for taking time to reply my message...you made my day really!

More power to you!!!

Cheers!
Dhiv

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melanie

@Black_kittykat

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#618

The ending part is scaring me... What is the meaning of last meeting, he was to come for her in 2 months, it almost 2 years... What happened to Arnab ???