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rechup

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

Awesome update...
Finally the kiss happened...too romantic...both were lost in eachother..he just began to realise his feelings for her...
Good that u mentioned sheetal here...arnav n her r poles apart...i hope anjali understands his feelings...something is really wrong with anjaliz personal life too...
Next time pls make it fast...its too much for me to wait this much for an update...

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sanjeewi15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

lucky 7... its me... :) :)

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aafan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

Unr awesome! Thank u for this wonderful update.
Good to see that Lav is no more a negative character and may end up helping Khushi.
Arnav could not control his feelings for Khushi.
Of course they are like two magnets and the force is inevitable .

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charlotte74

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: Cute6
res...
kavi ji aapne baarish mein aag lagadi...😆😆
did that kiss really happen...my god temperatures have increased with just one kiss😆
wats with this lavanya m really really confused about how her character is shaping up..sometimes i feel she is good and sumtymes i feel the other way round she had left me confused confused😕
so nk and lavanys wer bound to marry even before..mm i hope it happens very soon and the completly come out of the picture...khushi sharing a small memory of her childhood with arnav i could see they taking another step towards coming close..but i also thot arnav would tell something about his as well but somewer i feel arnav will never open up so calmly and there will be ilu dammit type of scene😆😉
kiss toh hogaya now m wondering wat will be the next reaction from both of them will they accept of will the feel awkward around each other..i just hope arnav will not do or tell anything stupid after this...
p.s.:kavi ji i felt this update to be little below ur standards..i hope u dint mind me telling this except for the kiss everything seemed to be bit dull and i dint feel the original kaviji vala updte which are dhamakedar...

I didn't mind you telling me at all. Thanks for being forthright.

But in two people lives not everything is dhamkedaar... sometime it is slow and could also be dull 😊

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Arnav and Sheetal certainly something amiss there, Anjali and Shyam definitely more than something amiss there, but Arnav and Khushi beautiful and so endearing.,

I liked how Anjali notices the inner peace and contentment on Arnav's face despite his hectic work schedule and also notices him not talking about Sheetal...

Loved how they are both so concerned about each other, her food his medicines and loved how he cannot stop himself and just spontaneously asked her who she was talking to! But I loved the comfort and camaraderie that they share...the lunchbox reference was perfect!,

The shoot was very written, glad La and Khushi clear out everything and I could just picture how beautiful she looked...

Loved how he comforts her and her blabbering to him but sharing important information about her life and I wait for when he will open upto her too...his subtle reference to his childhood ?

Loved how Arnav and she get wet in the rain and that sizzling kiss and more...loved his they get lost in each other and their desire and need...I liked that she feels the same intensity like he does!

What what happens when he remembers he is an engaged man...and what when she comes to know, I am sure Sheetal will land up before he gets a chance to tell her!,

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Unresed here https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93156040

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Cute6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: charlotte74

I didn't mind you telling me at all. Thanks for being forthright.

But in two people lives not everything is dhamkedaar... sometime it is slow and could also be dull 😊

u got me a bit wrong i dint talk about the dhamakedar things happening between two pple i was telling about the way u rite all your updtes even a small by mistake wala touch would also lead to me geting goosebumps but this vala update i felt it to be bit thanda...😊

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charlotte74

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: vgedin
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Kavi 🤗 Tum aa gayi, update leke 😳
The bond that is blooming between Arnav and Khushi is so sweet and... its got a domestic feel to it, one that makes you feel secure. The lunchbox, the drives to office, Khushi asking him about his medications.. no wonder Anjali noticed that Arnav is looking visibly relaxed. He finds solace in Khushi's company.

I still don't believe Lavanya fully, though I do hope she was sincere in her apology. But I am always for the NK-Lavanya pairing 😃 We got some insight into Sheetal too, she may not be a bad person but she is shallow and spoilt, totally opposite to Arnav who is all about depth and drive. No wonder he finds his match in Khushi and the passion arises there... Khushi is new to it but Arnav understands very well, what is going on. The dance, the rains...that kiss was beautiful to say the least, full of emotions and raw passion, but underneath all that is a lot of affection and tenderness. He comforted her, giving her the warmth she needed and perhaps drawing strength for himself too. The less fortunate he was talking about, he was referring to the likes of himself, isn't it? She is the ray of sunshine making its way through the cold and dark confines of his heart.. sigh.

Now what? My biggest worry is Sheetal and her father. And then theres my doubt - does Arnav have an inkling that it was Khushi who designed the outfit?

Lovely update, Kavi 😊

Twiggy,

I am a little relived after seeing your comment 😊

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: charlotte74

Twiggy,

I am a little relived after seeing your comment 😊

Relieved ? Ab relax hone ke liye see the edit on my accidental double post on Pg 31 😊

For me the lunchbox bit stole the show, just for the record :)

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710617

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Posted: 12 years ago

#190

I knew it... Give the man an inch he will take a yard...

Pehle filter kaapi...Ab lunch box... Arnav babu apni secretary se kya kya kaam karwa rahe ho.,shadi tak toh intezaar karo..

Ramanchi ramanchi... How did they have lunch in a car... Did they reach the conference and have tiffin..😉

Or did they sit near a shade of a tree and had food so 1970...or did she feed him each morsel while he is driving..

My vote goes for the third option..

Next he will say Khushi sir me dard ho raha hai daba do..😆

And chauffeuring her around... Seems like they have comfortably adjusted to a relationship without either realizing it..

I am quite sure NK and lavanya realize this...that maybe the reason that lavanya is friendly with Khushi... She knows the boss is sweet on her.. Actually sweet is a mild word..he is possessive about her..

NK and lavanya are set.. Good for them..

I liked the dance scene. Compared to VOF Teri ore it is not hot enough...but ..the equation between arshi over here is completely different ..

Here Khushi is a college graduate.. Has lived independently the song suits a slightly tipsy Khushi well..and Arnav is mystified..looking at her..and Khushi is ok to try out a mild drink for fun sake...if she was sober...😆

The kiss was good..exploratory for the first kiss.. And it sure will bring reactions from both of them the next time.., the sexual intensity will be more obvious...in the next meeting..

Arnav has got engaged to sheetal to appease his mentor..as a favor to him..and I strongly feel both Anjali and Shyam are cheating on each other... They have an open marriage...

It's already Tuesday kavi u better continue writing to be intime for the Friday update... Don't be late..

Edited by msin - 12 years ago