Till death do us part, my fan fic - Page 11

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Posted: 20 years ago
awwwwwwwwwww that was (again) BEAUTIFUL. very emotional but lovely. i love this story, trying to find out where i can get the book cause just started college, dont know if they any good bookstores nearby. neways continue soon 😛
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: cheen2005

awwwwwwwwwww that was (again) BEAUTIFUL. very emotional but lovely. i love this story, trying to find out where i can get the book cause just started college, dont know if they any good bookstores nearby. neways continue soon 😛

Thanks so much cheen, youve been always regular for my fanfic, even others. i'm so happy you make time for my fanfic. thanks alot. i really hope you get this book.

will continue soon

Love Aafreen

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Posted: 20 years ago
I LOOOOVEEEE IT!!!! it is sooooo sad!!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago

thanks alot guys...........

Part 17

kripa's and Angad's wedding is going in full swing and everyone is excited about the whole thing, but kripa felt she needed to talk to her mother about everything.
she knocked her mom's room door.
Mom: come in.......

Kripa: mom i wanted to.....

Mom: you don't need to explain anything, sweetie. i understand and i want you to know that i'm ready for getting you married.
Kripa: oh mom thanks alot, this means alot to me.

Mom: i know, anyways. we have so many things to decide your wedding dress and your jewellery, we have to plan so many things, by the way have you decided the dat?

Kripa: yes mom we have decided the date its going to be next thursday.

Mom: wow and what about you wedding dress.

Kripa: well mom i took the liberty of looking at the bridal magazine and i like this one, its sooo beautiful.

MOM: Great choice honey!!!!

Kripa: oh mom by the way , Angad's race is this saturday, you have to come to cheer him.

MOm: are you sure, Naina is opkay with this.

Kripa: yes she said she will , because angad promised this would be his last race.

Mom: well yeah i will come

kripa and her mom went to the bridal store to take a look at the dress and naina was also with them.

Kripa tried on her dress and she was looking sooo beautiful, the top had french cut sleeves which were see through, and had small sparkle tikkies all over, it was magnificently red and the lainga was so bloomed and full of embroided tikkis.
her silky straight hair just added more beauty to the whole thing.

Naina: Kripa sweetie, you can't show ANgad yourself in this dress, and he can only see on the wedding dress.

Kripa, was completely blushing and she felyt so happry in that dress. she felt the entire worlds happiness.

Mom: you look soo beautiful darling. Wow (she teared a little).

Kripa kept turning and dancing in the dress and she didn't remove it for a long time.

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the next day; Angad came over, and kripa didn't give him one minut to be alone she pulled him up to her room
ANgad: hey darling how are you doing? (holding her like a delicate flower)

Kripa: okay i can't wait any longer, i picked up my wedding dress, i want to show it to you but i can't.

ANgad: hahahahah well i dont want to see , i want to be surprised. i mean i know you will be soo good. (with a naughty smile).

Kripa: oh are you ready for your big final race on saturday? i mean did you get enough practice.

Angad: oh kripa!! just give me a car and i'll show you.

Kripa: hey i love the confidnece, but don't do it over.

Angad: i won't,
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After so much convincing even naina came to the race, but she was sooooo scared. everyone was there for his race, and it was sooooooooooooo loud.

Angad wore his specioal suit which kripa gifted him for his birthday, he was sooo proud to show it off to his other compeditors.

Angad tied Kripa's scrf on his arm.

Kripa: see you in the winner's circle!!

Angad left giving her a kiss.

Kripa, including everyone was cheering him and he was really happy.

okay as the the green flags were put down, the race started!! and all the cars were going on full speed. Angad was on the third lane and was going faster than every one there.
kripa cudn't stop jumping.
Angad: was in full speed, and then he slowed down the car a little bit, Kripa felt he was trying some maneuver to come first.
but the car he was driving popped a screw and the tire was loose, before anything could happen Angad's car just had 3 tires and it was revolving several times and it finally hit the boards on the side and tilted outside the boundary. and there was a little fire. Angad trembled comming out if the car and the car blasted in to flames.
and at the other side Kripa, had fainted with theshock, Nanina's worry had come to life!!!
and the race was stopped!!!!!!!
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tell me if you like it guys,
its sad, but there is more
my next part will be the FINALLE
Love Aafreen

Edited by luviqbal - 20 years ago
lucky-moon thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
gosh plz post the next scene can't wait anymore wanna know more
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky-moon

gosh plz post the next scene can't wait anymore wanna know more

thanks lucky moon, don't worry its not going to be that bad, next, i will post it soon.

Love aafreen

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Posted: 20 years ago
wow, awesome parts Afreen.
Loving it.
Please continue soon.
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Posted: 20 years ago
oh god, a-k ko kuch hua to nahi? I am waiting for the marriage...aafreen, i am counting on you for a good marriage 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
guys, thanks alot for the compliments, but you wil have to wait for the finalle. its going to be tomorrow. and its something you will be glad about.
Love Aafreen
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Posted: 20 years ago
oh my god wonderful part. awsome job i loved this episode. it was my favorite continue soon.

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