sorry yr jannat...i commneted on ur story''updateee yrrr'' widout knowing dat u already updated...once again sorry..btw ur last update was awsomeee...tooo gud..jst great...lovely..i loved it to the core...u really write beautifully n superbly..!!! n waitng for manvi's friend to come..want to see virat burning in jealousy...n virat attracted towards manvi..nyx hn...thn kiss awsomeee...but manvi kicked him so hard that too on weak point lolzz :p
n virat challenged her dat he get her...manvi also challanges him..dunno wat vill happn nxt ?? soo plzzz updaateee soonnn waiting for nxt part...!!!
Hey jannat đłfirst of all again am really very sorry for commenting late đłok nw comin to the update it was really very intresting nd i thurrely enjoyed it omg the way u portrayed manvis confidence nd virat's naughtiness was mind blowinghaww virat kissed manvi that too without any warning :o bt our mannu is also sherni na she kicked him on his weak poin tct tct 𤣠poor virat feeling bad for him bt again he is adamant on his decesion to get manvi in his life by hook or crooknd manvi even challenged him. Hmm nw will c who will wonmy vote is definately goes to manvi đwaiting for the next part eagerly plz cont soon nd thanx for the pmtake care ur old sis shivali đ¤Ł
O Humnava Tum Dena Saath Mera
Anupamaa
Cricket
