RTMC FF - MERA HAMSAFAR - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congo for your 1st ff Darshika. 👏
And wishing you a belated Happy Birthday. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nehamurat

Congo for your 1st ff Darshika. 👏

And wishing you a belated Happy Birthday. 😳

thank u so much Neha😉
give me ur valuable suggestios plz😉

lots of love...
D@r$hu

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 2

He slanted his neck n faced d girl n was laterally shocked to see her.

Veer - tum...!!! tum yha kya kar rhi ho?????

Ananya - omg !! tum !! tum veer singhania ho?????

Veer - ji ha miss saxena!! jise aap thori der pahle bigda rahis kah rhi thi, mai vahi Veer singhania hu...

Ananya - dekho ab tum ye mat sochna k mai job pane k liye tumhe fir se sorry kahungi...!! mai phle hi apni galti maan chuki hu.

Veer - tumse ye kisne kaha k tumhe yha job milegi?? Chali jao yha se.

Ananya - ha ha muje bhi tum jese bigde rahis ki secratry banne ka koi mazaa nhi aaega...!! apni acchi khasi zindgi hell nhi bnani muje.

She was about to go when he called her - Ananya , wait show me ur certificates...!!

A - nahi mujhe yha job hi nhi karni h toh certificates kyu dikhau tumhe..???

V- R u deaf???? I said muje apne certificates dikhao...!! He shouted.

A - nahi dikhaungi...!!She denied.

This was enough to boil him in anger, he stood from d chair n went close to her , held her bare shoulders wid a strong grip...they were as close tht there was no space even for air...

He stared her direct to her oceanic eyes n shouted- doesn't u hear me...??? I said show me ur certificates.

She was scared n feeling uncomfy bcz of their uninvited proximity so tears rolled down from her eyes, she showed him certificates.

After seeing her certificates he was impressed n said - Miss saxena, u r appointed for d job, join ur work from today!!

A - But I don't wanna do job here...!!
V - U have 2 do.

Now she was afraid n frustrated wid his rude behavior so she agreed to work wid him just because she wanted to make him regret for what he had done.


sorry 4 d short ud

next time i will give more

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hii darshika,

very happy to see that u have started to write a fiction on our most fav on screen couple.😊 😊 😊 😊
the concept is no doubt mindblowing👏👏👏👏...the prolouge is also written in a nice way😊
just loved d grt fight betwn veer n anu during der 1st meeting...as it always reminds me prc n dv 😊 😊
veer is a vry rude boss n anu have bear his rudenss 😆
nw ananya doesnt do d job in his office ...bt veer compelled her 2 do the job...bt why????
anyway vry vry interesting story...do continue n try 2 give a long update plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rtmclover

hii darshika,

very happy to see that u have started to write a fiction on our most fav on screen couple.😊 😊 😊 😊
the concept is no doubt mindblowing👏...the prolouge is also written in a nice way😊
just loved d grt fight betwn veer n anu during der 1st meeting...as it always reminds me prc n dv 😊 😊
veer is a vry rude boss n anu have bear his rudenss 😆
nw ananya doesnt do d job in his office ...bt veer compelled her 2 do the job...bt why????
anyway vry vry interesting story...do continue n try 2 give a long update plz

Thank u so much 4 d appriciation...i promise next time d ud will be long...wait sm time all d reasons will be revealed soon
ur suggestios means alot to me keep giving

Edited by darshika121 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 3

Ananya ws a girl wid sweet nature, eternal beauty n the most visible thing was her innocence, her dreamy thoughts were as cute as she ...but she was a girl of values, believes in giving happiness others for that she could even scarifies her own.

Her black eyes were like an ocean in which so many dreams exists...her melodious voice sounds like a sweet song n soothing to ears...there was no proud in her nature bcz she ws unknown to her immense beauty, never used any type of makeup or anything.

She was sweet. Always behaved well, even wid her enemy she didn't argued in rough tone. But when it comes to veer she herself was unable to pinpoint d reason behind d rudeness came in her nature every time whn she saw him, she didn't wanted to talk to him but always a unknown reason attracts her towards him.

One month passed, they worked together, every time they started a calm convo. But it only ends wid d situation of world war 3.

Now she was frustrated n going to resign from her job, In Veer's cabin sir, can I come?' she asked

N when she entered inside she saw him sitting wid a frame keeping close to him,

Yes Miss Saxena!! He said in a husky tone, what happened???

Anaya was shocked to see him like that, sir what happened to u??? She asked wid concern.

Anaya, its better u concentrate on ur own!!! He shouted.

But sit...I was just asking bcoz I was ...no but n no if, tell me why r u here...????

Nothing...she said in a rough voice.

Veer was about to say smthing when she left d cabin a jerk.

She was going outside while thinking mai to bas yahi pooch rhi thi na k kya hua h , khud hi toh itna sad face bna k bethe the , sab thik hi kahte hai, sadu hai sadu!! Beast kahi ka!! Pata nahi kya samajhta hai khud ko!!'

She was going in a hurry widout seeing anywhere n collided wid some 1 ...ouch!! Who d hell r u? dekh k nahi chal sakte kya ??? lag gai mujhe. Is office me sab k sab heartless h , acchai ka to zamana hi nhi... !!

Hey 1 minute...what happened??? A manly voice struck her attention ...in spite of apologizing for ur mistake u r trying to make me sorry...??? He asked.

By d way if u want to thn I am so sorry...after all beautiful girlz ko naraz nhi krna chahie !!

hiiieee my name is Dhruv!! He said politely, which melted her anger.

Hiii I iam Ananya , Veer singhania's secretry!! She replied.

Ohhh to ab samaj me aaya ke aap kyu itne gusse me bahar aai thi , I cn understand, he is a li'l bit rude.

Li'l bit??? She asked carrying a frown on her head, sadu hai vo 1 dm khadus kahi ka, kisi ladki se kese bat krte h pta hi nhi h use...!!

At d same moment Veer came outside hearing continues voices, n smiled seeing Dhruv talking to Ananya.

Oye tu yhaa kese?? aaj is dost ki yad kese aa gai ??? He asked in a friendly way.

Tu toh aata nhi milne k liye to socha mai hi mil lu mere devdas se, he replied.

Edited by darshika121 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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just read your ff sweetie... that was a good start... 😊 thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Freethinker

just read your ff sweetie... that was a good start... 😊 thanks for the pm


thnx di i ws eagerly waiting for ur response
thnx alot
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 4



Yeh or devdas!! Bhot badi missunerstanding hai...ananya was murmuring.

Miss saxena!! Have u said something???? Veer asked, no sir, nothing...she replied.

Than go get to ur work...!! He said in an ordering tone.

Veer n Dhruv entered inside d cabin n ananya went to her place.

Veer, tu ne kya kaha ananya ko??? Dhruv asked him...nothing, maine to kuch bhi nhi kaha, kyu pooch rha hai????

D - She sounds like so irritated...!!

V - Or vo tuje kese pta???

D - she was going n collided wid me n overreacted, she is ur employee coming out of ur cabin irritated...so it's clear that u did something wrong!!

V - so what do u want now, why r u giving me these lectures???

D - U should say sorry to her for what u have done..!!

V - No I will not, ok...!!

D - ok just tell me one thing, why u shouted on her????

V - It was just tht...she was asking me why I m so...he left incomplete.

D - Tell me, what happened????

V - Nothing yar, I was jst missing her!! Mai uske bina nhi jee sakta dhruv , vo kyu muje chod kar chali gai???????/

D - Veer...!! He was now tensed...veer listen to me...it's enough ok u can't do this to others...dekh veer vo ab laut ke nahi aaegi ye tu acchi tarah janta hai...

V - vo laut kar nahi aa sakti janta hu... lekin mai apne dil me uski jagah kisi ko nhi de sakta...!!

D - But u has to move on veer!! kab tak apni zindgi akele jiyega tu...???

V - I am happy wid my life!! I- I can live wid our memories

But I can't marry anyone to ruin her life...mai kisi or se pyar nahi kr sakta...!!

At d same moment Ananya passed near by d veer's cabin n heard there convo...she was shocked to see him letrally crying...there were tears in his eyes.

For some reason she entered d cabin almost running n gone close to him, wiped his tears wid her finger strokes...she was concerned...it was visible in her eyes...there was a kind of restlessness she was suffering from.

Ananya slanted her neck n faced Dhruv, asked - what happened here???? Why is he...??? Left it incomplete.

Veer was hell shocked to see her reaction, he was about to say something when she asked -

A - Bigde rahis...!! Bolo na kya hua hai???? pahle tum uss photo ko lekar bethe the or ab kisi ki...!!

She cut in between by veer.

V - tum chahti kya ho ????? kyu aai ho yha, chali jao samjhi just leave me alone, u fool...!!

A - plz tell me veer, plz !!

Dhruv was seeing all this, he felt something in her eyes, tht love, care was reflecting in her eyes when veer was shouting on her.

He said- Ananya come wid me. I will explain u..!!

But Veer ko esse...!!

Leave him alone...he will be ok soon!!

She left wid dhruv.

A - Dhruv...!! What happened to him????

D - ananya vo bas esse hi...!!

A - plz tell me!! I can't see him like this, he was laterally crying...!!

D - why...??? why u can't see him like that???

A - Don't ask me ...bcoz I not able to answer dis..!!

D - Ananya , if u want to do smthing 4 him so just don't leave him alone...!!

A - but...!!

D - no but, just is wid him...!!

A - I promise u, I will be wid him!!

She wanted to console him but Dhruv didn't allow her

PRECAP - Realisation of Feelings...<3

Edited by darshika121 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hmmm Wonderful. 😊😊👏
D Description U Gave For Ananya's Character In Part-3 Is Nice. 😊⭐️
Dono Ki Nok-Jhok Mein Bhi Pyar chipa Hai.😆
Dhruv's Entry Brought A Ray Of Light In Veer Nd Ananya's Life.😉
Ananya Nahi Batasakti Ki Y Shez Worried Abt Veer,,But We Know D Reason. 😛 U Started Feeling 4 Him Dear. 😊
Ab Shayad NokJhok Kam Hoga aur Pyar Ki Baarish hogi Inke Beech. Love Is In D Air😉😉❤️

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