Wedding Carol, Arhi: MAID (UpdtD 23-09) - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
nice update😊
hope MU clear soon.😭...khushi is planning some cute evil plan😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Loved it... I know what Khushi gonna do with HIS car...😈😆
Eagerly waiting for the next update!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice dear😊
waiting what will khushi do
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SirenMitra

Loved it... I know what Khushi gonna do with HIS car...😈😆

Eagerly waiting for the next update!!!!

Please do tell me what you had thought.. The same what i wrote or soemthing else.. I am eager to Know it.. 😊 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I know guys it is small, but will try to put extension in it.. I am hell tired you know. Write stories and work your A** whole day, and it is frustarted sometimes when you don't know what to write after this line or that scene.. What turn it will take and hows the story going to be after this turn or his/her behavior, this is what i want or something else was my planned.. It is not comingwhat i wanted and all that crap.. Its sucks.. But still I write.. hehe.. This is basically what i want.. Right??

Of course Yes!! Its refreshing you know.. so here is the another Face of story for you all.. Do tell me how you liked it or not..

Revenge:

She bet her last penny she will going to laugh her ass out, and he will at least cry with agony, if not shred tears like baby.

She sat in her car, which was parked luckily in front of his, she smiled again and put her car on reverse gear, bumpers of her car protest but she didn't care, and a bump.. She knock his car, even her car got damage, but her car is already 3rd class and she will mend in minimal, but his car, her tires spun, other car reversed back and it again get bump from the wall. She smiled and pulled her car immediately out from the parking lot and on street. Before she left she saw the last view from her rear view mirror, his car don't little bump and some stretches, but it still worth it. She didn't care if he knew who did it, she will accept it with dignity.

"Now who is laughing" she thought, And she headed for her home. but it took several minutes too subsidies her happiness.

What she will going to say to Payal. What ever happened, if he knew about the car, he can file charges against her, and she can't afford it now. Not with Payal and her son. As she thought about him, a smile crept on her feature, she would pay anything to see his expression when he will see his car. And then what, what he could do, she wonder, man like him don't be angry, he will definetly yell on her and the pull her toward him, then what their mutual passion will took over from their, will they would be able to reach bedroom or the stairs will be sufficient, she thought. The idea of making him angry was undo for Khushi. She suppress her thought, where she is going, who is he, she don't know and even not interested, she lied. Okay, just for Passion sake, she cares. A LOT cares, how she never cared before. But they barely able to survive and this new thing, it can ruin everything. On auto pilot of her thought she reached her house.

Before leaving the vehicle she took extra breathe to control her anxiety. After a while she gather her courage and move out o the car and ring the bell.

He might be better looking, but for god sake, he tries to buy me, his social skills is not more then a nasty cockroach. Yes he is a cockroach, then why she wished the evening should be end in different way. WHY.

She ring the bell again, but still there is silent on the other end. Therefore he again occupy her mind, she wasn't the type of girl, who found of man, and feel attractive to them, she had dated before, but safely, she prefer safe and sound, the house surround her was evident that she choose safe [path till yet, but Mr. Cockroach feels so dangerous, out of her league, but she can't suppress the way he saw her, the way he touched her, the way he felt in her arms, hard, solid and secure, Secure, when did she change the meaning of secure in her dictionary, the thing which she think is secure, can be secure in some way but in end she knows it will end very badly. His every moment was scaring her shouting in her conscious, to run away, he is danger. A Big danger sigh was shinning around him every time she saw him. She can't get anything from him except mind blowing sex, which he promised too, STAY. Just one word, which made her liquid in super fast speed. She again went into the encounter of their brief kiss, shivered. She caught her smiling reflection on the door knob, and shrug herself. "Come ON" she said herself. Stop thinking about that Cockroach. If you want to think Khushi how you are going to face Payal. What you will tell her, how will you explain her everything, if you can't remove this stupid smile from your face. She self peep, but it didn't effect her, although her smile grew big and bigger on ever attempt to suppress it, In mean while the door got open, and a women standing supporting on door flame with a little toddler on her hips.

Hi! .. Khushi greeting sleepily.

Good evening to you too : Payal moved back to let her come in with a little frown on her head.

As soon as Khushi was in the house she turned around and said : I am really sorry Payal, I didn't did anything purposely, it just happened, and I do regret it. She said everything in one go.

What did you do Khushi?? ; Payal asked with worry on her face, but as she knows what is wrong too.

Khushi pressed her lips in thin line and bury her face in near sofa cushion.

Arnav sat on the chair in front of ground to sealing window. Looking to the twilight of the beautiful city, he purred himself a glass of Jack and coke but didn't took a single sip, basically he is not found of alcohol but it is also true he try to have it, to subsidize all the feelings of betrayal and revenge from his system.

Revenge to his death father, who has disowned him when he tried to find his mother, A mother who just vanished away, he knew his father is behind it. Betrayal of his sister, even she didn't support him. He create his own emperor with it. No emotions, and you win. Nothing else matters if you have money. Not friends, not family, not even any desire. He can buy anything he want, Wants and The idea to be powerful made him stand where he is now, people love power and he himself Is The Power. He knows.

But today he don't want to think in that way. Today it is not about Power or Money or Revenge. Today it is about refreshment.

Today he want something, Today he wanted her. Just Her. And he will have Her. He knows he act like a moron, and ruin everything, if he had use his little brain how wasn't fu**ed up with the alcohol before, may be May be she would be in his bed with him till now. But its never late for Him. EVER..

He pulled out his mobile from his trouser pocket and Said : Akash.

Akash : Hi Arnav!! Everything is okay? His voice is clam and completely professionalism.

Yeah! I need your favor, Personal favor.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Yipeee. I'm first. Awesome. What personal favour does he want?
Edited by EMERALD-S - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
OMG...both are out of their mind...
khushi bumped his car and now its arnav want her to bed...

but interesting...

continue soon...

thnks for the Pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the update
thanks for the pm
Twinkle
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ReneeRV

Please do tell me what you had thought.. The same what i wrote or soemthing else.. I am eager to Know it.. 😊 😊


Sorry Dear I didn't see your reply... I almost had the same idea in my mind but truly yours was👍🏼😆...

OK it's really short update... I want to see his reaction but *SIGH*... What Next? I am clueless...

Edited by SirenMitra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: manikka

OMG...both are out of their mind...

khushi bumped his car and now its arnav want her to bed...

but interesting...

continue soon...

thnks for the Pm...

Yeah they both are crazy when they need something.. 😆

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