The day I stumbled upon this FF, reading the title made me think that it is a Mush FF!
And girl, I was so wrong!
I liked the way you started off with the story. This story has talked about everything in general...to be more precise everything about human relationships & emotions.
Khushi at a young age took responsibility which fate had shouldered on her. Not everyone has the courage to accept the facts & be strong. And since I love strong khushi's or to be specific strong-headed women, I liked her in this story.
And then comes the smooth talking stranger in her life who was able to break the ice. As they became more comfortable to each other, they felt that their was something between them which cannot be termed as friends. Well it happens in real life too, as of what I have seen.
I loved the way arnav found humor in everything around him! I found him kind of cute too!😉 Now don't say may be I should kiss arnav?😆
The way they understood each other, mush, romance everything reflected that it was meant to be..
And when arnav didn't turn up on her graduation night, believe me I felt as if he cheated up on khushi. But then you surprised me!
Poor arnav, had to go through a lot. But here I agree with khushi. With someone's support, even though if it is emotional, one can survive.
But then amidst all these problems, people rarely think of sane thinks. He wanted to whisk them away because he wanted them to be support. Unknowingly, hurting them!
The pain, the anger everything which khushi felt was explained in such a way that I felt my insides choking.
I understood arjun's cold attitude towards arnav. No one can ever see his sister accepting that man who gave her numerous sleepless & weeping nights.
I had a feeling that at the end, sneha will be the one for him. Or else, why would you even mention an additional character? Cute love story it was.
Neil, oh man! Sometimes it happens that your heart doesn't accepts what your rational mind sees. And it happened with him. But he so calmly accepted that fact, not letting himself break in front of others. That was so brave in his part. I hope him to find love in payal😊
Anjali! At once I felt as if its me & not her who is asking all those questions & stating those philosophies of her. I do that even now. So many 'what-ifs' & 'Why's' but we have no answer!
Lavanya! Does everyone of this name is understanding & at the same time a fun person? I have my closest friend of the same name, though she ain't flirty! I loved her characterization too :)
Am I forgetting someone? Umm...Yes khushi's mother! She was an understanding woman & gave a damn to society for her daughter's happiness. That was so good on her part.
You linked every update to a song & that was another thing which I loved about the story. Since I have listened to many of them already, I was able to understand more properly what that particular chapter meant!
And reading this story raised a question in my mind! Well not actually a question - You get into the character when you write the update, don't you? It's hard to do that!
You have a unique sense of humor! Even in dull moments you managed to write something which made me smile.
This is the longest comment I have ever made in any story but that was to compensate for I haven't been able to be here, on this thread since the start of this story!
P.S. I have exams going on & like a sincere student I should have books in front of me rather than my system & I should be reading them rather than this FF. But the first chapter intrigued me to such an extent that I couldn't help but read all the chapters in a go!
P.P.S Brilliant work!
Now my work's done here. Going back to AD! Hope to see your name often on fiction thread😊
Edited by dj_arshifan - 12 years ago
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