My Dream!!! *On Hold* - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
it ws really painful...
gud to see the bond betwn taani n rohan
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...luvd it
plz update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww my fairy where are you missing you so much dear and yeah I m so happy that you like edit

coming to update its awesome I loved it omg taani as shanaya that too she is a famous Singer I must say amazing twist huuhh, aww finally rey going to tell her the truth but as predict taani didn't forgive him feel bad for rey and off course for taani too, aww Rohan and taani are so much bestie they share a grt bond now update soon and off course kehne ki jarurat nahi h phir bhi pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER -6

Tomorrow morning

All wake up as yesterday.

They had their breakfast after that Td(taani's dad) went to office.

After sometime the bell rang same as yesterday...

The servant went to open the door and there was rohan...

He came running inside but he saw taarey sad...he knew that they love each other...and he had made some plans to make them together again and make taani happy...

Rohan goes and hugged taani...taani too hugged him back

Ro - Taani I have a surprise for u...

T - kya surprise???

Ro - use pehele u need to close ur eyes...

T - par kyun

Ro - maine kaha naa close ur eyes...

T - thik hai

Taani closed her beautiful eyes and a pretty girl entered inside the house...

T - rohan batao naa kya surprise hai???

Kiya came and hugged her. Taani opened her eyes and found kiya infront of her she again hugged her and this time it was a tight hug...

Boys were going fida at her(except reyam)...

Shareyam were still sad but they smile seeing Taani smile...

And then rohan interrupted...

Ro - are tum dono toh mujhe bul hi gayi...

Both smiled and hugged rohan too and the trio enjoyed the hug together after soo many months...now,

rohan said - chalo guys we are going...

All (except shareyam) - kaha???

Ro - recording studio...

All (including taashareyam)-what???

Kiya and rohan(KIhan) smiled

T - tum log yeh kya bol rahe hoo???

Ro - hame nahi pata tha k tum itne famous ho. Tum ne jodhpur me kadam kya rakdiya and offers aana suru hogaye not bad...

T - what ???

K - haan shannaya tumhare liye offer aaya hai so chalo sab log intezar kar rahe hai...

T - par guys...

Ro - par waar kuch nahi chalo

He hold her hand and took her and kiya companied the d3 gang till the car. They all sat and started there destination to recording studio...

They went inside. Taani didn't want to go but after reaching there she found herself really happy...they all went inside and some people came and they shaked their hands with them...then they said "so let's start"

T - Par

Ro - Shanaya plz

T - Thik hai...

She went inside and the music was started. The gang and krihan were outside...they could see each other clearly through the glass...

She started

OHhh... HAaa...

Yaara yaaraaa...aa

Manzile rusuwa hai koya hai raasta

Aaye lejaye itni se iljiza... (Closing her eye she started..)

Yeh meri jaamanat hai (she opened her eyes but was looking down)

Tu meri ammanat hai... (Looks upto rey..)

Haaa...aa (again she close her eyes)

Mujhe ko irade de kasme de wade de(with full attitude she sings this 5 line)

Meri duwao ke issaro ko sahare de

Dil ko thikane de

Naye bahane de

Kwaboke baari so ko mausam ke peewane de...

Aapne karam ki kar ada ye...hhh(looking towards rey...)

Kar de idar bhi tu nigahe

Sunn raha hai naa tuu...

Ro rahi hun main...

Sunn raha hai naa tuu...

Kyun ro rahi hoon main

Yaara...aaa..(her eyes were full in tears to hid it she close her eyes...)

Music* (she remember sharey talking abt her in RH)

Waqt bhi the thera hai...

Kaise kyun yeh huwa(she close her eyes and remembers abt their break up...)

Kash tu aise aaye (looking towards rey..)

Jaise koi duwa

Tu rooh ke raahat hai

Tu meri ibadat hai

Ahhha...hhaa

Aapne karam ki kar ada ye...hhh(still looking at rey..)

Kar de idar bhi tu nigahe

Sunn raha hai naa tuu...

Ro rahi hun main...

Sunn raha hai naa tuu...

Kyun ro rahi hoon main

Sunn raha hai naa tuu...

Ro rahi hun main...

Sunn raha hai naa tuu...

Kyun ro rahi hoon main

Music *taarey had a eye lock...

Ahhh...hhh...(closing her beautiful eye...)

All starts clapping... all have tears in their eyes because of her wonderful singing...

Rey was lost in her Taani too was lost in him. But she soon came out their dreamland when Kihan enter inside the the cabinate...They hugged each other and came out and then all the girls and swayam hugged taani... she was so happy but from inside she was not happy her eyes were fixed at rey...

Kihan noticed this and then rohan said to kiya

Ro - dekha maine tumhe kaha tha naa they loved each other

K - haan inke aakho mein dikahiye deta hai that they love each other...

Ro - Mujhe indono ko milana padega...

K - haan...but pehele rey se baat karlo..

Ro - are haan

They went home. After dinner they all went to their respective room.

Here with rey he was in his room lost in taani's dreamland...

Then he took out his mobile and started to talk to taani's photo



"Taani my star my angel tum mujhe se itna naaraj kyun hoo... I know k maine tumhe bohot he hurt kiya hai and I'm sorry 4 that plz forgive me. I love u..."this was what he was telling when suddenly the door opened and it was our Romeo who dared to open the room of MR.REYAANSH SINGANIA

Rey was angry and he said - tum yaha kya kar rahe hoo???(in a angry tone)

Ro - main tumse baat karne aaya hun

R - mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni

Ro (ab use bhi thoda gussa aagaya tha so in a strong voice he said)- Taani k bare mei hai

Rey was still. Tears were abt to roll from his eyes but he controlled it and asked-kya baat???

Ro - kya tum saach mei shanaya se pyaar karte ho???

R (smiles a little)- haan

Ro - toh thik hai I can help u if u want...

Rey was a little surprise..but since he wanted Taani in his life so he said...

R - really tum meri help karoge???

Ro - obviously

R - par kaise???

Ro - woh tum mujhe pe chod do...

And he left rey's room..

Scene shifted to taani's room...

She was sitting in her bed recalling the moment they spent together as taarey and the break up which made the princess sad... and she also remember the moment when rey told her the truth of the break up...she was thinking was it true???

Taani - kya woh sab bas eak natak tha??does he still loves me???Should I give him a chance???

"Definitely..."

A voice came from the door it was romeo...

Taani - are tum yaha...andar ayo naa (she hid her eyes from his so that she won't get caught)

Ro - shanaya plz don't try...aapne feelings ko aise babao mat...

Taani smiled and hugged him.

Then he again said -I think u should give him a chance.meine dekha hai ushke aakho mein tumhare liye pyaar

Taani brokes the hug and said - really (a little blushing)

Rohan smiles at his friend...and said -haan really...

Taani smiles fade and she again says - par how can I forgive him so easily???

Ro - maine kab kaha ke u should forgive him..

Taani -haan???

Ro- I'm just telling ke give him a chance...

T - par kaise???

Ro - trial relationship...

T - trial relationship???

Then she realizes the meaning...then she again says to him

T - trial relationship...wow...

She hugs him tightly and says-superb idea thank u

Ro - ab mujhe maar dalogi kya???mujhe squeeze karna band karo...

Taani breaks the hug and slowly with a punch beats him in his chest...he pretends that it hurt him a lot and she smiles seeing him...

Then rohan again says - chalo ab hasna band karo and jao...

He pushes her out of the room and she was about to go to her prince charming's room but she saw her dad sitting in the sofa and doing some work in his lappy..

She said - ab kya karoon dad toh yaha hai main kaise jaungi???

Uff...kafi lamba update tha...This much for this chapter..so guys kaisa laga???i know u guys are think ab Taani kya kaaregi right??

Precap - nahi dungii 😛

BT next epi will be funny...pakka...

Agar jaana hai toh jaldi like and lamba wala comment karo and plz no one line/sentence comment...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Taarey trial relationship !! Nyc nyc..
rohan actin as cupid is so cute..
the song is rely nyc .. i luv it..
thnx 4 updatin.. w8in 2 kno wats up nxt ??
thnx 4 pm too :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
ithna late update karogi toh hw wl i follow d stry
ny ways update ws nice
taarey wl b in a trial relationshp
thats intrstng
song selection ws perfect
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Posted: 12 years ago
nic update ...

plzz add swaron also
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update
Taani singing and looking at Rey was very senti...
Aww Taani with the help of Rohan of course is willing to give her pc a chance yahh. I'm happy for them
U did a fab job
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
it was amazing
the way u potrayed taarey was awesome
their feelings reached us
and taani has such a wonderful friend rohan he joined taarey
with a option of trial relationship...
taani song was amazing...

jaldi se next part update karo...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally update
awesome update
taani sing song
rohan playing cupid btween taarey
taarey trial relationship
Update soon

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