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Posted: 19 years ago
ohh gr8 part
plzzz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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It was A-W-E-S-O-M-E buddy!!! 😃

Jai's very witty.... 😛 😉

Bani's sooo sweet... 😃

Poor Gal.... that part was really funny "Now she understands, why Jai had told her that she will conceive naturally, with these two ladies around, it will be difficult to do anything otherwise." 😆

So now every1 knows this 2 r getting married... CooooooooooL!!!! 😃 😛 😉

plzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzz cont soon.... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
haila..... 😳
damn good part dear
really fabulous 👏 👏
now continue soon ek part ajj hi plzzzzzzz 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part VIII - Valentine Special has been updated in Page 19

O.K friends, here is another update as Valentine Special but don't blame me if you feel let down...you wanted an update and here it is.... 😃 😃

Part IX

Now she understands, why Jai had told her that she will conceive naturally, with these two ladies around, it will be difficult to do anything otherwise..

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The wedding date was set, they were getting married within 15 days…Maya was upset…itna jaldi, Rano aur Dhruv ke college ke beech me….chhutiya tak wait nehi kar sakti…

Bani: Mr Walia wait nehi karna chahate hai….

Maya: Itna saal unhone shaadi nehi kiya…aur kuch din ka hi to baath hai….tera mama ka ek FD mature thota…tere liye ek gold set le leti…

Bani: Keya jaroorat hai mami….

Maya: Ha abhi to tujhe hamara gift to halka hi lagega...itne sare to milne wale hai.....

Bani gives up: Maine aisa toh nehi kaha... apne itna kiya mere liye...apke ahirwad chahiye baas...but Maya goes on

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That night Bani waits for Jai to return home, he has a dinner appointment, on hearing any movement she peeped out of her bedroom….Nachiket caught her while going towards his room, keya baath hai Bani, kiska intezaar kar rahe ho….bhaiya ka……Bani doesn't reply but smiles….mai bata du unko phone karke tum unka intezaar kar rahe ho…toh shayad jaldi ajay….

Bani: Koi jaroorat nehi hai, kuch khas baat nehi hai unse…

Nachi: Aajkal toh har baat khas hai Bani aur bhaiya ke ankhe toh tumse hatta hi nehi hai…

Bani: Nachiket, bahut ho gaya…abh mai sone ja rahi hu….

Nachi: Bhaiya abhi tak laute nehi bhabi....

Bani: Mujhe koi pharak nehi parta...

Nachi: Oh no...you better wait...nehi toh needh nehi puri hogi...mai ja raha hu...

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As Jai walks in around 12 o'clock he finds Bani standing in the gallery and looking down he stares at her and goes into his study but keeps the door slightly ajar ….a few seconds later Bani walks in….

JW: Keya baath hai Bani, koi parishani…

Bani: Mere mamiji ka phone aya tha...she is not happy with the date of the wedding…woh bhi kuch arrangements karna chahate hai, lekin itna jaldi kar nehi payenge aur upar se Rano aur Dhruv ka classes bhi chal raha hai….

Jai looking through the the mails Tony has handed over to him ...keya chahate hai woh....

Bani: To shift the date by atleast a month….

He looks up…Bani…you & I both know what this marriage entails…and I am sure both of us want to get over with it as fast as possible…aur more over masi factor is also there….

Bani: Ji mai samajti hu…

Jai: Tumhari mami ko bolo paisa ke bare na sochne...mera mamaji ke saath baath ho gaya hai and I will take care of everything...

Bani is relieved, she does not want her mamaji to spend his hard earned money for her temporary marriage to Jai Walia…after all her mamaji has two more children to take care of and has no money to waste….she wishes him good night and while leaving notices a faint lipstick mark on his jaw…she shrugs and goes out….

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Two days before the wedding, the Mt Abu family came to the Mumbai, Mamiji went around the house and much to Bani's embarrassment peeped into each & everyone's bed room…when Jai Walia room came Bani excused herself..aap jayiye andar mai abhi ati hu…mujhe abhi yaad aya unko ek information dena tha…

Later that evening when she was about to enter Pia's room, heard mami telling Pia…kya kamra hai…sab kamre se bara…view bhi achha hai…lawn dikta hai…dekh Bani atehi phasa liya aur tu idhar baithe baithe kuch nehi kar saki…uska chhota bhai bhi toh tha…Bani retreats …well mami if you knew the truth…..

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Now don't hit me with belan / jharoo etc etc...and tomorrow is the wedding & after 😃 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow great parts
u write in greatly 👏
waiting for the wedding part
continue soon
waiting for next parts
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Posted: 19 years ago
wowowow!! two updates!!!! thank you!!! tht was a lovely part!!! i am getting more and more impatient to see the wedding!!! i cant wait...lollll 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
haila damn good part 👏 👏
armm wats with jai having a lipstick mark 😕koi chakkar nahi hai na

i m sure nuthing from jai's side he's very decent guy 😳

bani doesnt go inside jai;s room why kyun.. akhir shaadi ke baad she has to leave there na with her hubby jai 😉

kaal wedding part wow
armm was wondering agar kaal wedding to uske baad aheem suhag raat so will they go all the way aheem on the very first day 😕 ok i think too much lets wait for tomrorow

continue soon make the next part longggggggggggggggggggg
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Posted: 19 years ago

Oh God Tinni, now I cant wait for tomorrow to come and read the next part. The wedding and after😆

And most of all thank you sooo very much for the second update today. You really made our day a very happy one. 😃

"A Very Happy Valentine Day to you"

Mami really is a case and is Pia really going to turn evil??? 😕

Till tomorrow then, really the wait is going to kill me for sure and hope you dodnot keep us hanging tomorrow by ending your fanfic keping us wantingmore and dying of suspense.😆

Love

Krishna

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Posted: 19 years ago
Great part.
Yeh Mami bhi na.
loved it.
Happy Valentine Day.
plz cont. soon. 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
Happy Valentine Day Tin!!!
😆 😆 😆
Nice part tin...really classy... 👏
Ok so now Jai is with women all day not good Jai... 😆
I love the suspense mystery behind this...i mean why Jai decided to have this contract marriage in the first place...something is really fishy...i tell ya...not enough good reasoning...
Anyways...please update soon
Rooj

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