Virika FF: Married At 18 Ch.21 Pg143

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Afsha

@iLuvYellow

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#871

Still waiting 😭

When will we get an update?

Plz update 😃

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TeriMaaa

@TeriMaaa

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#872

please update navyaaa
pleashhh😭

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Navya

@shobrakapooor

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#873

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Aaliya

@-Aaliya.KryAn-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#874

😛 UnRes

Gosh Navya...🤪😆

The Update was Superrr Fantastic! 😃

I Loveeed it! <3

The jealous Jeevika at the start and then the jealous Viren!! 😛

I so enjoy their funny conversations and fights!! 😉 😆

Alisha seems to be a superb character!! 😃 Waiting for her entry and Rohan 😳, it seems really interesting!! 😛

And the poster thingy...🤣 Hats off to your brain! ⭐️ 🤣

I couldn't stop laughing seeing the poster!! 😆 🤣

And the last dancing part with the super jealous Viren 😃..can't wait to see whats next!! 😛

And now, can you update like already?? 😳 I am really so excited for the next part! 😆

Please, please, please...😃 ❤️

Edited by krystu05 - 12 years ago

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Jujuk

@Jujuk

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#875

Res!

*unRes*

I don't know if this really is some coincidence or something, but just as a say I want to read MA18 I see your PM. 😆Like seriously! I don't get it how this is happening, but it sure is. May be Kismat Connection. 😉 That too a real strong one. I am seriously loving this storyline and this was a totally mind blasting update. Fantastic. I sincerely love the entry of Alisha! Like finally there is some sane girl in the college. I was important to have a character who would kind of reject Viren as well due to moral and ethical values. I feel for it. It will just help make the story sound more real. Rohan Nanda, eh?☺️ I loved him in SOTY! It will be interesting to read, about the upcoming jealousy track, May be? Or even if it has to do some thing relating to friendship it would definitely make a good read. Okay, now the notice board scene was hilarious and funny! I can imagine Viren's anger management, at the moment. 🤣 The last bit was THE best part of the update. THE Best! It just showed how well they are both bonding though sub-consciously! But whatever it is their relationship has become much more stronger and stable. So, glad for it! At this point I would definitely like to say that you've done a good job with their relationship. Well Done. 👏 Now coming to the last bit!😃 😆 😳 Well, well, well... the most awaited update? But I would appreciate, if you would really not make Viren force himself on her or something... but I will let you decide the best! You're the one writing and know the plot but just ONE ORDER, update soon and as promised your gift is coming soon..😳 I hope you like it though!

Edited by -JujuK - 12 years ago

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Jennifer

@jenna_p

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#876

Brilliant update👏Loved it..😊

Such a long update n the flow was so nice n very well written

It was a hilarious update n the way Virika fight was funny to an extent...

Loved the way Jeevika got back at viren by posting his 'secret' photos😆

Thanks for the PM..Continue soon..

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Mehak

@MehakGera

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#877

m really srry dear...i couldnt make up unressing my comments...
but now pakka wala promise...i will unres all my coments tomorrow for sure...
m srry dear ...

unres

navya hats off to u yr...

u r just amazing...

how do u manage to write such long n perfect updates...

i have told dis many times dat ur stories r d most awaited ones on if...

dey r just incredible...

coming to d update

superb...

fantastic...

luvd it to d core...

d jealous jeevika👍🏼

jeevika falling for him

n d way u wrote everything was just perfect...

oh my god jeevs fought back n dat too agiansr bad boy...

hahaha...mumma boy🤣🤣 cleaner boy🤣

ossm ossmm

dis story is getting interestoing day by day...

n babydoll is only only badboy's property,...

superb...

d new enteries r really interesting...

luking forward for nxt update...

update asap...

thnx for d long update

luv u

Edited by mehakLUVSvirika - 12 years ago

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millee18

@millee18

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#878

res
unres..
fabolous update.
phenominal ...
they r a trt to have...
last part was hilarous...cont soon..

Edited by millee18 - 12 years ago

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Zehra Fatima Chohan

@Zehra.

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#879

#Unres
yipppeee !!!
you finally updated 🥳
it wasn't boring at all
simply fabulous 👏
woah so now its gonna be more interesting 😉
update SOOON PLEASEEE 😊
sorry for being demanding but a long long one 😉

Edited by nabiha - 12 years ago

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Nikhat Shaikh

@NikShaikh

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#880

what an amazing update
v can never complain u abt the update as dey r the best v can read and if Der any prize of longest update u shuld win the that
how u everytym write dis much. sach m u r the best writer I love ur updates and twist that keep coming in ur stories r well executed. keep it up.keep writing .continue soon
thanks for the pms

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