[COMPLETED] A Word's Worth # 2: Link to Thread # 3 on Page 153 - Page 84

I can feel and hear the frustration in his voice as he speaks to her on the phone, irritable with the cold and this feeling of helplessness at not having Khushi with him, weekends with her is one thing, but not enough given the extent and depth of his feelings for her and for his greed to have her with him all the time. BTW that image of Swami in a vest...damn!

Love how he is drinking tea listening to her advice but hiding it not to sound and appear too eager in listening to her when she was not, like he is giving in...loved that the only cure as he knows it, for his state is to get her to just agree to be back in Bombay where he feels she should be..missing her presence in his life, after finally being together but the distance not agreeing bothering him... not wanting to be apart for a moment more than necessary ...and her stalling only adding to his annoyance . Loved how he wants to book her tickets , just knowing that she is going to be coming to Bombay will also suffice, well momentarily...so I loved his sense of desperation ,making him across as a man so irrevocably in love, honest with his emotions and so endearing...I really want him ! With no fear of putting his feelings out there! I

I loved how he tells her that playing hard to get is one thing and then there is this...and she is right, playing hard to get will have to be redefined for sure...I love how he realizes that there are things she still needs to sort out ...a job, and a place to stay...and I completely loved how she says YES to him, I love that he was nervous about asking her to move in with him and that she needed time...but am thrilled she says yes...I wonder what happens when she agrees to marry him

Loved how he tells her he needs to get off the phone, and Meera, what a gorgeous surprise, I was so delighted, like I was welcoming Swami at my door! That was the fastest see you' ever!

Love their excitement, their joy and their craziness at seeing other, the inability to control their urges and their need to be with each other, touching feeling, kissing , holding...loved how they just cannot get enough of each other, it was sexy and sensuous...the writing perfect. I could feel their love bursting at the seams, her rhetorical question,...asking if she can stay with him...like hell yeah!

The song on your status, Tera dar par sanam hum chale aayein...makes perfect sense!

I love this Khushi who knows what she wants and this time around is going about it her way, I love and respect the fact that she is honest with her parents about him and moving in with him, love how the M word pops up and him saying he cannot imagine his mother's reaction, love the summarization of the mother and daughter in law equation, he is already referring to her as one, how far can marriage be now!?

I love how he wants to meet her parents but trusts her judgment on how best to handle that situation as long as she know she is standing by her, for now that is enough.

Love her sisters reaction, strangely proud...for having a love story which also makes for an interesting story and for paving the way for her in the future maybe!

Loved the entire conversation she replays about her father's warning of a job or marriage, his easing the awkwardness over marriage, her clarification on the subject his endearing proposal. I have lost track of the number of times he has made them to her , but this is the first time she has or rather will accept when the time is right, I loved how you wrote the entire scene, it was just so simple, yet so effective and heartfelt, there is no doubt about the brilliance of your writing, seriously I am worried about each comment I write for you, wondering how my words are coming out, especially since I am always so excited and have so much to say...I loved it!

I loved how she wants to know his reason to consider sleeping with Ashima, it had to come up, and how she reads his manuscript imploring him to rework it and pursue his writing, if getting it out to the public was his reason to consider sleeping with Ashima, how can he just let go of that dream now, love his response, he no longer wants that, he now has realized what he prefers and what he loves to do more and does not have that drive and passion that writers should...so maybe he prefers pushing out talent and let's see if he revisits the idea of writing again, but for now he is content and sure that he is doing something that he know and feels is right finally!