Smitar's: Loving Khushi#5 Part 20, 21 Pg 1 (4/9)

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smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

first of all congratulations for new thread smita and rashmi...

great job...

coming to update, the updates were freaking awesome...

girija devi's and tiwaris words to kushi's phone call to arnav at mid night...

then their reunion wow...fabulously written girls...

the most fab part was arnav's prayer to devi mayya...most touchy part...

loved it...really...

will miss your updates smita...

come back with bang...

and hats off to rashmi for interpretations dear...

great job...

keep up the good work...

and plz dont forget to pm me when you guys start the new fiction...

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@BlueBloodQueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Awesome ending ...
Finally two birds are to gather ,no one can separete them...
Thanks to girijaji who helped khushi to take right decision...

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msmarple

@msmarple

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Beautiful ending to a wonderful story Smita.

Looking forward to the next.

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prati_incept

@prati_incept

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

beautiful end of the beautiful story

👏 👏 👏

thank you...

waiting for 12 Sept..

God bless you!!!

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anonyasr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Thank you for another beautiful story. Loved this journey. Can't wait for the next.

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amus5

@amus5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

thanx smita for another beautiful story... the way u finished it off with Ramcharitmanas was just perfect . It felt like Hanumanji himself in the form of Tiwariji was there with Sita maiyya ...and the homecoming was heartwarming 👏

will be eagerly awaiting for Sept 12 😉

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Prerna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

great ending di

will wait for 12 sep

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moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Brava is all I can say because you left me breathless once again...and didn't leave your readers in agony for too long. 😆

A beautiful journey through all the moments where Khushi and Arnav affected each other's lives and unknowingly made a place in each other's hearts, whether in anger, sadness, pain and playfulness. No wonder she was compelled to go back home!

I cannot wait for the next story!!

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pixiegirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Loved the last three updates Smita... So glad that Girijaji's words finally got through to Khushi, & her call to Arnav in the middle of the night to get her was so sweet... Loved the way Arnav went to DM's mandir & prayed to her to return his Khushi to him... Loved their honeymoon suite & the beginning of their honeymoon or night in the hotel looked very very promising...

Am so glad that you're going to start another story on the 12th... Will I be able to get a PM for the same??