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please come back Indu 😭
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Amazing chapter, the way u portray the emotions is just awesome, itna acche se likha aapne, I loved this chapter,
This is the 2nd part going on?
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hellooo my beauties...i am back...an a biggg shollyyy for being away from forums for so long... now enjoy the update ...

but before that let me ask u naughty pies.. how many of u remember the story? huhhh??? dont tell lies😆😆 😉😉

please forgive me for mistakes ...there may be a lot of them .. please ignore them or pm me i will correct them.. so now .. here is my diwali gift ...

Chapter 20

He took elegant steps downstairs in his Armani suit ... he made his way towards the car that was parked in the spacious porch ...the driver came and opened the back door for him .. he got inside and soon the vehicle moved its way out ...

Inside their bedroom

Taani stood near the dew covered window panes .. she rubbed the moist covered panes to make her view clear.. she could see his car moving out through the moist glass panes of the window...feeling the cold she rubbed her palms together and covered herself more carefully with the blanket ... finding his car moving out of reach of her vision ,she moved her gaze to the outside scenery... a smile crept her beautiful face .. how beautiful this place is , she thought in her mind ... the small tea gardens nestled in the slopes of green hills ,the small grey colored mountain road that made its way between them looked like a huge snake from where she stood ...she rubbed the moisture of the adjacent window pane and made a step towards it , still looking outside...it was all new to her . she had never gone outside to anyplace other than jodhpur .. but all these beautiful sceneries had always been a part of her beautiful dreams that she used to build up in her mind when she saw hero and heroine moving hand in hand through snow covered roads in hindi films...how she wished now to have him near her ...she rubbed the panes further ...she wished she could walk with him between those beautiful gardens and apple plantations ..cuddle in his arms when the snow made it difficult for her ... she had a smile on her pink lips but then she remembered the harsh reality.. she could never do such things because neither was he the soft romantic hero of any film nor was she a pampered lover ...the smile on her lips gave way to sullenness...

Knock knock...

She could hear a knock at her door .. she turned sideways . Adjusted her blanket again covering her arms too inside it ..

" Bittiya..." malti's voice came from outside

" ji , andhar ayiye " taani replied

Malti opened the door slowly and came inside with her broad smile and twisting the pallu of her sari..the smile then made way to a haww' wala expression.. malti looked at taani from head to toe .. taani had a doubtful expression on her face seeing malti look at her like that.. malti bit the nails of her little finger while still scanning taani from head to toe .. she couldn't help herself from being amused after seeing Taani in Rey's clothes..Hii .. the lady managed to bring a smile on her face, seeing taani give a doubtful expression but then again she bit her nails still not able to take in..

" ji , vo ...kal...meri bags chori ho gayi...aur mere pass aur koi .." before Taani could complete what she wanted to say malti blurted out "hai Ram!!.. "bittiya, apke bags chori ho gayi?"

" ji " taani replied to an extra worried malti.

"tabhi toh.."the lady twisted her pallu further looking at taani again from head to toe at her clothes and smiling " bittiya , kya mein apke liye badi malkin ki kapde le avoon?? Voh badi malkin k kuch purane kapde hai dusre kamre mein.."

Taani thought for a while .. it was uncertain when would Rey return back ..he may arrive late and till then she didn't want to stay inside the room all alone in Rey' s clothes..so she said a yes ..

After some 5-10 minutes malti arrived with a stack of neatly arranged clothes .. she kept them on the bed .. a pile of salwar suits ..taani's expression suddenly changed to one of doubt .. she quickly went to the clothes and picked them up "par , ma toh kabhi suits nahi pehenti!!" taani looked towards malti

" nahi pehenti???" malti bit her nails further " par meine badi malkin ko hamesha , inhi kapadom mein dekha hai bittiya "

Taani looked at the suits again moving her palms through them, she remembered her childhood days at jodhpur when Rey and his family used to stay with them..she knew reys mom since her childhood days .. but she had never seen Rey's mom wear anything else other than sari ..she knew Rey's mom well.. she had always been an orthodox lady who clinged to traditional sari ..

" may be ma started wearing these once they shifted to Mumbai " she thought to herself in her mind and answered her doubts ...

She said thanks to malti and soon malti left from the room. Taani changed herself to one of the suits and came out of the room .. she thought of having a look around the beautiful holiday villa ...she asked malti to accompany her .. Malti led her from one room to another .. they walked past the corridor when taani's eyes fell on a door with a lock ..

"malti, why is this door locked ??" taani asked

"pata nahi bittiya..." malti replied with a confused expression.. taani went near the door and held the lock .. she asked Malti to give the key set of the villa to her and started trying the keys to open the door..1..2.. 3.. 4.. she tried all keys in a Round robin .. finally there was only a small bronze key left..

" bittiya , kya mein rasoi mein jaoon?" Malti asked as it was taking some extra time .. Taani gave her permission and Malti left ..

Taani pulled the small bronze key from the bundle and tried itfor the lock .. the lock was opened with a cracking sound due to the rust which had accumulated in the key hole .. it was pretty well sure that the lock was kept locked since years from the rusty sound..she pushed the door open .. the door flung open and moist dusty smell started filling the air around .. she started coughing as the moist dusty smell started choking her lungs ..she wiped the spider nets aside and made her way inside .. ahhh.. she hit her leg on an old wooden stool and screeched ...she rubbed her leg and stood straight .. she was having a full confused feeling ... she looked around from her current position.. the room was pretty big than other rooms which she had seen in the house .. but it was wholly covered with dust and spider nets .. many furniture's were arranged one on top of other and covered with huge cloth covers.. although the room looked to be a huge old bedroom but presently its condition looked worse than a store room...she made her steps carefully midst the old furniture's and reached a colossal king size bed .. her eyes widened ..the bed with the blanket was covered in another blanket of dust and spider nets.. she coughed again feeling choked .. she looked around again from her position.. towards her left side corner she found a small wooden tripod with a photo frame .. she couldn't make out the photo on it coz prime se was quite far from it and second the frame was black with dust.. from its shape she understood it's a frame .. she lifted her suit a little and tried walking towards the tripod .. she made her steps carefully towards it ...now she was only two steps far

"bittiya.. bittiya bittiya..." Salim kakka's voice at high pitch made her turn immediately towards the main door of the room

Salim kaka stood panting outside the room clutching the door frame

" kya hua kakka??" Taani asked seeing the man's panting condition..

" bittiya .. voh.. voh.. Baaba.."the man tried to say

"Rey?? Kya hua Rey ko???"she asked worried and turned to walk towards Salim Kaaka..

" bittiya, Baaba ka accident hua hai... aur driver unhe leke aya hai..."Salim said

" kya?????????" Taani's hazel eyeballs dilated in a wide radius...she made her steps in haste amidst the old furnitures .. hhuuhh ahhh...huhh.. she stumbled with a old sofa ... CLING.. a photo frame fell down from somewhere .. she looked towards her side ..she could see a 1/4th portion of a manly face with a specs, infact she could see only the man's specs frame and ears and a portion of his old elegant coat that covered his hands she supposed in her mind .. she wanted to move and take it and see the who was in the frame but that seldom mattered to her at the moment ..all what mattered was Rey..she positioned her self straight and walked towards the door and then outside .. Salim closed the door and went after taani to downstairs..

Same time -Mumbai

" what the hell!!!"she clutched her mushy short hair..she paced to and fro "open it man !! its not completely his .. do you get that ???..cant you read the name written on the name plate its written Kria-Reyaansh.. now what does that mean??? Its partly his and partly mine" she barked on the Security guards face

"but mam.. Reyaansh sir said to lock it and hand over the keys back to his house ..and I did as he said " the security said trembling

"and you didn't ask me a word !!!" she barked again

"mam.. but Sir pays for the space so ..." the man looked down and tried to say ..

"ha hahaha...so kria .. you lost this place too" Rishab made an evil laugh " baby... you lost everything ... I told you to play your cards intelligently but you never paid any heed to my words .. you had faith in your tricks alone and see what happened .. you lost every thing .. every damn thing kria... you have nothing left.. US mein academy kya India mein ek rehearsal room tak nahi hai tumhare pass" Rishab said mockingly rubbing his stubble

"shut up you bloody.." Kria pointed to Rishab's face in a flare

"Heyyy!!! Don't shout like that ok.. you don't have value for that .. you don't single buck!!" Rishab pointed his index onto kria's eyes ... kria's eye balls dilated and contracted as she looked upto rishab's finger tip which pointed towards her " and neither do I have any interest in you bloody looser !!!" Rishab completed his sentence On kria's face ..she felt the ground under her feet slide away for a moment... "tu ..tu..tu.." rishab made a mocking grit sound "enjoy ur new state baby...alone... I have better things to do and offcourse girls too.. but anyways.. it was nice ,being with you..you were pretty HOTT.."Rishab said huskily .. kria clutched her frock tight, closing her eyes

Rishab gave a stroke at kria's chin with his middle finger and walked away .. kria fell on her knees ...

After taking a few steps Rishab paused and turned back " one second .. kria..where are you planning to stay .. I mean , now how are you planning to pay your rents ? you used to ooze money from that calf Rey right? And now what will you do? Neither do you have a house of your own nor do you have any big name tagged to your name in place of your father or mother " kria s face reflected a mixture of rage ,disgust, shame, worry and hurt ...she moved her palm nervously on the floor ...Rishab made his steps towards kria .. " keep this .." he extended some notes to her " it may help ...ok..now that's all what I can do ... " he said and marched away...

Same time kulu

" Rey... " taani came running down the stairs to the main hall " what happened ??"she screamed looking at Rey and the driver

"nothing taani.. nothing to worry ... its just some minor wounds on my hand and legs " Rey said in a feeble voice ..

Taani's eyes ran over Rey in a millisecond ... her eyes started welling up with tears .. he had his right hand plastered , a big bandage on his forehead ...cuts covered with cloth on his other hand and legs .. his cloth were all torn ..

" Rey .. you have so many wounds and .. and your hand is plastered ??...you... you had a fracture ? .. but how .. how did all these happen .." she asked him and looked towards the driver .. the driver also had several wounds

" taani.. nothing to get hyper like this .. we went to the hospital and had our first aid and .. mm.. theres a sprain on my lower arms so I had a plaster .. the rest are only cuts ..."Rey said

"only cuts? What you mean by only cuts Rey??? Have a look at yourself...you are badly wounded and you say only cuts .." she moved upto him and held his hand and started looking at the wounds .. she caressed his right hand which was plastered .. the salty drops that descended her eyes made his way to the cloths of his wounds ...

" taani..." He cupped her chin.. his eyes had a tinge of surprise .. may be he never expected her to show this kind of a worried reaction seeing his condition.. his chocolate brown eyeballs seemed to search for the reason for this care in her wet hazel balls "Taani , I wanted to drive and I forced Ramu sit on the passenger seat but then the roads here have hair pin turns and ...leave it...it was a small accident taani" he cupped her cheeks and continued " but see I am fine now .. these are minor wounds ..."

" but ... had some thing happened to you then .. then I would not have been able to bear it Rey .. " she cried and hugged him tight.. he was dumbfounded by her reaction ...he moved his left palm slowly on her back in a manner as to carress her ...

Malti ,Salim and the driver dispersed from the hall leaving Rey and taani alone ...after some minutes of sobbing taani lifted her head and looked upto him ... her wet eyes spoke volumes to his eyes although both were quiet ...

"Taani .. shall we move to our room???" he asked softly ... she nodded her head softly and got up .. she gave her hand for him to support on her.. he circled his left hand round her neck while she held him round his upper body in a circle from his back and they made small steps to their room...

Taani made him lay on the bed and she asked him to take rest while she bring him something to eat and left the room ...

He lay on the bed .. his mind was filled with images of her sobbing and hugging him , worried for him.. her worried questions .. the way she caressed his hands and wounds weeping ...

Click .. the door opened .. he lifted his head towards the door .. it was her she had a tray in her hand

Precap

" taani give me I said " he said running behind her

" no.. I am not going to give " she said hiding it under her pallu and keeping it close to her heart and running ..

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" taani give it " he said blocking her way and standing in front of her ..

She was about to take a step backward but she felt loosing her balance and clutched him tight on his shirt but she stumbled dragging him along with her and together they fell into the pool..

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Playfully she started walking with wobbly steps in the pool occasionally slipping and he did the same trying to reach her " taani .. stop .. warna bohot bura hoga , I am telling you" he said smirking naughtily... she put her tongue forward , mocking him playfully while trying to move through the water.. although he couldn't reach her , he caught hold of his mischievous wife's pallu and pulled her .. for a moment she felt she lost the match .. her eyes popped out and she tried moving backwards but his grip was strong and he pulled her hard, forward...she slipped and came crashing to him.. he circled his arms round her ... running his fingers through her bare hip where the thin cloth of her sari had made way for him... she wriggled in his arms ..

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Posted: 12 years ago
DEAR, SISTER
I AM FIRST THAT NOTHING SURPRISING COZ OF HEARTTO HEART CONNECTION
WELCOME BACK TO FORUM BUT AS U KNOW I DONT HAVE ANYTHING TO ASK U ABOUT HOW WERE U OR WHY DID U GO FROM FORUM NOR DO I HAVE TO TELL U ANY THING COZ I AM LUCKY ALL IN FORUM MISSED U BUT I WAS IN CONSTANT TOUCH .

BUT THE FACT THAT I WAS IN TOUCH WITH MY SISTER I KNEW DETAILS OF HER EVERY DAY LIFE BUT I MISSED

THE WRITER THE AUTHOR I AM IN LOVE WITH
THE AUTHOR I ADMIRE,
I ADORE AND
THE AUTHOR WHO INSPIRES ME

I REALLY MISSED MY FAV AUTHOR , I MISSED THE SOLE REASON OF ENTERING FORUM SO I AM ONCE AGAIN WELCOMING BACK MY FAV AUTHOR

ITS A PLEASURE READING UR STORIES AFTER A LONG TIME , I LOVE THE FLAVOUR OF UR WRITING THE FLAVOUR OF UR USE OF LANGUAGE POTRAYING LOVE ROMANCE ANGER AFFECTION SORROW BETRAYAL AND PASSION .

SO ALSO LOVED UR UPDATE SO SO MUCH.


NOW I CAN FELL SOMETHING FISSY THEY ARE----------------------------
1) REY'S MOTHER DONT WERE SUITS BUT MAID SAYS BARI MALKIN WERE
2) TAANI IS A DANCER KRIYA IS ALSO A DANCER
3)NO TRACE OF KRIYA'S PARENTS ,TAANIS FATHER DIED
4)BOTH REY AND TAANI"S FATHER WERE FRDS
5)WHY DO I FEEL BOTH TAANI AND KRIYA ARE SISTERS BUT OF NOT SAME MOTHER
6) OR DO REY'S FATHER HAVE SOME SECRET
7) THE REASON HE WAS AGAINST KRIYA AND REY'S RELATION


OR I AM THINKING TOO TTOO MUCH GONE CRAZY AFTER HEARING VRINDAS RETURN


BUT STILL MY SIS AND MY FAV AUTHOR WRITES NOTHING UNNECESSARY---------------------
Edited by taani.priya1997 - 12 years ago

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