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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jm020

nice update...okay so this his how they meet...wow love the precap..cant wait...update soon...thanks of the pm

Jenny

Excatly it didn't came out as i wanted to, but yeah you can say this is how they met.. hehe..
And it is all my pleasure..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A KISS:

He fisted his hand, no one has ever run from him, but she, she have a guts to do that. Of course if she knew him, she wouldn't have done that. But how's this possible that she doesn't know him, is this a trap for him? But her eyes was so genuine. He was so confuse what to think and what not, he almost jump on the idea to track her down and have her their and then. But her innocence eyes and her beautiful act stop him in middle. He takes a sharp breath so he won't do anything stupid, he is already I n a whole lot of mass, and he don't want to include one more thing in it.

A strong aroma of food, force him to look around and he found her, sitting on the rug, in her uniform, her legs are fold beneath her butts, and a few strands of her falling on her face, she was looking tempting more tempting then the food in front of her, but a small growl told him that he was as hell hungry from food, and in other manner too, he shrink his memory to know when he ate last, but he was unable to recall it, he moved toward her, and just stand behind her to see what she was doing.

She was kneeling on the cushion, next to his marble coffee table, opening take out containers. At his approach, she looked up and for a moment appeared to reconsider her decision to stay. She stood quickly, but held her ground, as he came impropriate close to her.

She smells good, he thought.

The table was set with two glasses of water, with some container which hold some gravy and rice, he look at his coffee table and back to her : I never had food sitting on floor. He confess.

She immediately got up and start collecting everything : I am sorry sir, I should have know the person like you won't like to have food like this, give me a min I put that on dinning table.

He spin her toward him, before she can retrieve another container : I said I never had before, I didn't said I won't like to have like this. He said holding her in his arms, she feels good, very good. He left her arm , Sit : he ordered.

Her eyes flew up in surprise : Do people always do what you asked them too?

Usually, he answered while sitting down, and wait for her to join him.

I don't think so I like you. She said honestly.

I never told you to like me either. He said with sheer amusement, he is finding her more mysterious and a shot of excitement run through him. Their eyes meet and their was no hiding back, the more they look in each other the more they start drowning in them, she was the first to look away she sat to her cushion and start serving the food, "I hope you won't mind Chinese this was only available at this hour" she said with stern voice.

Chinese? He said in confusion.

Chinese food. She said him while throwing her hand in motion to show him food containers.

Of course it is okay: he said while nodding his head more then required.

She ignore him and start serving him and her plate, he knew he is attractive, but it was a long time since any women, had look at him rather then his reputation and his wealth and seen through him, not in any other way, but the lady who is sitting in front of him, is very fragile and innocent or she is a very good player and actress. Lets play a game to know it. He smile and made a little plan to achieve his goal, and his goal is to have her, for night only, he is not asking more from him or from her either. But a hope is sizzling through him, he don't know her name nor he told his for the same reason, for just tonight he wanted to stay out of this world, and even want this world not to intruder.

Thank you : he said while having rice from his chopstick which she gave him while he was making his plan.

Umm .. She only replied and start having her food from her plate, without looking up to him. He was impatient now, his housekeeper just not only outburst on him, even said he is stinking, no one have that guts to do that, but she did, outside of Akash of course, but how can she been so unimpressed by his clothing, he still remember hoe she looked at him, and what she said, he let out a silent chuckle, but still she is looking at her plate and making some design with her chopstick in her rice. She is different and he liked it, liked it a lot.

Thank you I said: he repeated. On which she drop the container of sweet and sour chicken and looked to him, but soon in sec she reterive the container, and put it on the table.

For what? : she asked

For staying : he said, while studying her feature.

She looked away and said ; I thought you need some one to talk.

Talk ? He said in confusion. He was not intended to do that, not tonight and not tonight with her in least. He looked at her and give his hearth wrenching smile and said : Is that what you think I need?

She drop her chopstick in her plate and mocked ; don't tell me you don't do that either.

I have other plans for tonight: he said with a darkness in his eyes, which she picked immediately.

She gulp down the lump and again looked away.

He fought a laugh but lost instantly. He laugh out loud, and didn't even bother what she will think or thinking already. He sit straight and wipe his eyes which are start flowing with water, she sat back on her cushion eyeing him wryly, and he broke in another fist of laugh, how long it has been when he met any women anything more tediously then emotional and clingy? "You're nothing like women I am used too:" he said honestly wiping his eyes again and dig his chop stick in his plate of rice. She start mumbling something to herself, he cut her off and said : In a good way, of course. He said spontaneously.

She groaned and looked away : lets not go their again.

He bend himself over the table and put his hand beneath her chin and spin it a bit so she is looking at him : I think my charm is getting rusty, isn't it? She gulp down and he trace his finger on the edge of her lower lip, in response she parted a bit and a warm breath tingle his finger, he hole the urge to remove the table which is between them, and take her their and then, he look toward her lip and then back to her eyes ; I just want to let you know that I feel you very attractive.

She again gulp down the lump and back away so she was out of his touch. And with tremble hands she dig in her plate and said : if you want something more then a companionship over dinner, then I am afraid you have asked the wrong person. And fill her mouth with the rice. He looked to her while trying to digest her words.

So, simple and sweet, do you often start your dates with such a declaration? He asked her.

She chocked out all the rice from her throat, and drink half of the glass of water before looking at him : first this is not a date, she lick her lips and grab her purse, and second this is a huge mistake. While saying this she got up and start moving toward the door.

He grab her arm and spin her to face him : this isn't a mistake, he said and hold her tightly, not letting her go, she shove her hand to lose his grip but she failed. This could be a date: he said over her face gripping her more toward him, tell me I am not insane and this could really happen, tell me you are just as tempted. He pulled her slowly toward him, till her body is completely pressed to him.

This is not at all any good idea : she said with shaky voice.

He brushed his lips softly over her to block her protest, and successfully he did. For a moment she didn't response, frozen in his arms, then with a shudder, her lips begin to move against his lips, as he deepened the kiss, she relaxed against him, and wrapped her previous rigid arms around his neck.

LOL... Guys You all must be tempted Why my all post are regarding Kiss or romance , Beileve me I don't know.. I guess I am very tempted to know the writer who is bit more romantic then boring.. hehe..

I know I have posted this story last In May and now it is August.. Sorry guys who read this story, sorry for so late Update..

GUYS if you get time to read it , have a look to my new FF : I found MY SUN

RV ❤️

Edited by ReneeRV - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Awesome!
I <3 it!
U knw romantic writers brings more readers :)
Such is the case of ur works!:DD
Trust Me,keep on writing like this (i dnt mean all *ahem ahem* ones will bring u readers..i meant simple romantic acts along with *ahem ahem *stuffs will def get u more readers )
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
wonderful one dear...
loved it...
thnks for the PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
nyc update
thanks for the pm
Twinkle
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Finally got the time to read... It was awesome!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Name your Price :

Stay tonight : He whisper between her neck. Nothing mattered except this feeling, this women , this evening : "if I had know that my maid was this sexy, I would have come here a long time ago"

She pulled away so abruptly that he dropped his arms.

Crap!! : she said and continue to back away.

He reached for her again, but she back away again, what ever their connection between them, was clearly broken by mentioning her career, he scolded himself for his stupidity.

I should Go: she said ,and sidestepped a wide circle around him, to avoid touching him, and to reached the door before he can.

Stay. He said. I know it is crazy, but stay, I ...

I just wanted to help you, nothing else. She cut him off.

Listen, it is not like what you are thinking. I just never wanted to put you in awkward position. He said while trying to get between her and the door. Somehow this was different.

How nice of you. She spoke over him.

I don't care that you're a maid.

But it's matters to me.

It doesn't matter. He said stubbornly.

For me, it does. She copied him

He blocked her exit. He can't let her go, not like this.

Let me go. She asked.

Stay tonight.

I can't, let me go. She said while looking in his eyes.

This is not what you want. He said reading her eyes, and most what they just shared was so mutual, she'd enjoyed the kiss as much as he did, that can't be his imagination. First Hot, and then cold. Was she playing some game?

Right now I just want from you to stop blocking my way. She declared.

He give him side : why to deny it, don't tell me you didn't want it.

She grab her purse from the ground and hang that on her shoulder and without a glance back she moved toward the door : I cleared before also, I just wanted to share a meal, nothing else.

He knew one way to find out her real motivation.

Would you stay for 10 grand's : he said and waited for her reaction, he felt the stab of disappointment when she stopped before opening the door and turned back to face him : Do you think I am for sale?

He hoped not, but he had to try at least, he forced the next words out : How about hundred and thousand grand's?

I am a maid, doesn't give you rights to talk to me like this? Do you really think I am for sale? She said with a hand on her hips and fury in her eyes. Which made her more beautiful.

Last try : Okay a million, I don't think I ever met any women who worth so much, but I feel I won't regret this night : he said.

She opened the door with one hand and said facing him, eye to eye : You are a pig, an egoistic pig, if you have so much money I suggest you to roll the stake up and put it in your... The last word vanish due to the bang of door, but he knows where she would have suggest him to put it.

He laughed his belly laugh, which echoed in his suit, he laughed till he had to whipped the wetness from his eyes. But still he was unable to control it, when he looked back to his evening he laughed again and bury himself into the cushion of his room and fill his plate with food.

She have to come back, he will make sure she will be back and soon..

She is different.. Hell Sexy too..

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When she heard the laughter behind the door, she wished she could opened the door again and give him nice words, but she felt it is no use. But she believe in non-violence strategy not because of anything particular but because of her job, which she can't efford to lose.

But what the hell he think of himself, he offered her money like she is some kind of prostitute, and there is some board hanging around her telling she was on sale, it was disgusting. She took the stone stairs to go down and change. She looked back to make sure if he is following her or not, and same time it was relief and disappointment too. Which made her more confuse.

What kind of man talk to girls like that? His type? Who sleeps in his car, after leaving the bar. She slap herself mentally and tried to stop thinking about him. She reached the parking lot and see a new Bugatti, silver and shinny, she doesn't speak cars, but she at least know some big fatty pieces.

But it was not the only thing which put interest in that flinty car, the number plate, it belongs to Mumbai, she smiled, that arrogant as* has brought the whole lot of this flinty shit till here, she almost laugh, she is not interested in the exterior of that shiny monster but the owner she was more interested in. she smiled an evil smiled and she knows now how to teach him little lesson.

Hey guys... here You go.. Please do tell me How You guys Feel About it..

If any of you don't want further Noticification through PM about any of my Work, Please leave One message, and I will no bother you again..

See yea Soon..

TC...

RV... ❤️

Edited by ReneeRV - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great update! wonder wat khushi is planning on doing!:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice updt
plz pm me when u updt next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful update
thanks for the pm
Twinkle

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