Arshi:As long there is life season 2 update 61 - Page 30

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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for the lovely comments...
I do read them but it is just the like button does not work for me and I dont know why it is like that...

but here is the next update...
and yes from now I will be less here but will try to update once in a week...and also in the end there is something which you guys should read:)

Chapter 2

Having a father is the first relationship that a girl has with a male and therefore is a very life shaping relationship...without that relationship a girl forms her own opinion if how a relationship with their male counterparts should be and it sometimes result to a tragedy. A father involved in his daughters life can be positive and negative affect in her life...a woman is able to look back and learn a lot from a father and daughter relationship that they have grown up and are able to use it to form other relationships with men that will last for the rest of their lifetime. As John Mayer says "Fathers be good to your daughters
and..daughters will love like you do."


Her eyes...big brown eyes which glance straight at me as if she finding a mirror to my soul and see what type of person it is through her eyes...those eyes which has caught my attention and I could not ignore or look away if I wanted...

It is true when the elders says that the eyes are one of the most powerful tools any human being can have because of one look...the eyes can replay the most intimate message and when the connection is made, the words cease to exist...

Today the first time Arnav Singh Raizada is watching the little human being which is watching him the moment, Khushi had open the door...the little human being is observing and staring from the moment she has laid her eyes on her father...yes, it is Arshi Singh Raizada who for the first time is seeing her father standing on the door and for Arnav Singh Raizada it is the first time he is looking at his daughter...

"Arshi"

Arnav whispers his daughter's name which he found out from his father today and as if Arshi heard her father calling her name...Arshi sees her mother and her father again. She wanted to know from her mother by her signs who is this man and how does he know her? Arshi began crying as she was sleepy...it is the time for Arshi to sleep now and think later about this man who is still standing the same spot he was before...

Khushi pulled Arshi closer to her and asked Aranv to come in...

Arnav came inside the house and closed the door but his eyes was on her daughter and he wanted to know the why his daughter crying? Was her daughter in pain? Arnav wanted to hold his baby in his arms and comforted but also express he will never hurt her... but he did not know how to explain to Khushi that he wanted to hold their symbol of love in his arms and comforted her. Will Khushi allow him to do that but more important will his daughter...his Arshi allow him to comforted him?

The longing to hold his daughter in his arms was something he wanted to do the moment he have seen Arshi. But Arnav just did not know how to express his feelings to Khushi...

Khushi saw the craving Arnav had to hold Arshi...as if he wanted to take away the pain and comforted her daughter...even if he did not said this to Khushi, his eyes did it for him...

Arshi has not stop crying yet and Khushi thought maybe if Arnav holds Arshi in his arms...she will stop crying. For Arnav his eyes has already told her how badly he wants to hold their daughter in his arms...

Khushi broke the ice by speaking first and then told to Arnav...

"Could you hold Arshi in your arms for a while?

The moment Arnav heard what Khushi had told him, he wasted no time and he opens his arms to take Arshi...

Khushi puts a crying Arshi in Arnavs arms and Arnav sees down at Arshi...he had tears in his eyes when he held his daughter, she looks a lot like her mother just the way he wanted it their children to look like...

Arnav keeps looking at Arshi and Arshi finally stops crying and sleeps in her father's arms...

Arnav looked at Arshi all the time and when Arshi sleeps in his arms...Arnav felt happy and he felt his daughter was happy with him and have accept him as her father...

Arnav went to the bedroom and he places Arshi on the crib. When Arnav have put Arshi on the crib and was about to move away, he felt Arshis hand holding his jacket and Arnav looked back at Arshi.

Arnav kissed Arshi on her forehead and then moved away from there with a great difficulties but he has to talk to Khushi about their Arshi...

Khushi is standing on the living room and she is thinking about her future which somehow has Arnav. Today he has seen Arshi which is wonderful for him and for Arshi but what will Arnav do...will he take away Arshi from her or has she done a mistake by telling Arnav about Arshi.

Arnav came out from the room and he went to Khushi to speak to her but Khushi spoke up first before Arnav could...

"I have told you before and tell you again, I will don't come back with you and don't even bother to ask me because my answer will be no. As for Arshi you can meet her here and spend time with her...I am not stopping you from your rights towards Arshi but when it comes to me don't think have a chance in the future. Because my feelings for you has changed the moment you have left me for other woman and it is best you understand that Arnav..."

When Khushi heard nothing from Arnav, she turned back to see Arnav has already left from her flat. Khushi thought about Arnav and when she went to her bedroom...

For Arnav, he is driving the car and is thinking about Khushis words...

My feelings for you has changed...

My answer will be no...

That is why I did not want to marry Khushi...

You left Khushi for Lavanya and now lavanya for Khushi...

Arnav stopped the car and he gets out from the car...

He looks at the sky and he saw Arshi...

Arnav starts to cry...now he has understand that the how much damage he has done to Khushi but also his Arshi...

"I am sorry...I am so sorry for everything..."

My daughter has taken away the darkness in my heart and brought a light then I never thought it could be possible. Because of my daughter I live every day to the fullest and given me a reason to live for that I can't thank our Lord enough for blessing me with her...
Okay guys here is the update and I really need a favour from your guys...write a good thing about the update and a thing which you don't like about the update...
It can be anything like gammer or writing...and don't worry I will don't get angry at your guys...this is for to improve myself when it comes to write the update...

thank you:)

Edited by india094 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...poor khushi.. thanks for pm dear...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey thnxxx for d pm,loved d update. Very well written. Emotions are described well. Updates are loong. Keep updating.
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally you update,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
it is good for Arnav to understand that Khushi is not his now

I just like the way story is building
and my dislike... yaar nothing there to dislike... yaa but I want Arnav to repent.. and if Lavanya again comes to him or any other woman try to come near him.. I want to see how he kick them all away and try to gain Khushi's trust...
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved d update. beautifully written
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
Arnav deserves this ...
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
may god bless lavanya with a good guy
and as for Arnav and khushi
I want Arnav to suffer but really dil I know Khushi still loves him, as a reader I want them together but as a women I want to punish Arnav.
the question arise is that can you really forgive the person who dumped u in middle of no where...but what about their daughter arshi...I think as a parent they should give one more chance...but phir bhi I don't know why...damn I am confused
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update! I want khushi to be more adamant n arnie to suffer more! Oh am I sounding like sadist! No, it's just for arnie to understand the gravest mistake he has done! Arshi should be together later but not only for sake of daughter but for their love!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

superb update
Arnav deserves this
bt hpe khushi gve
ne last chance t arnav
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Posted: 12 years ago
simply amazing.loved it
i love the way the story is progressing..and khushi is shown as a strong lady rather than meek and forgiving one...which is really nice

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