VirMan SS: Opposite Attraction - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: virman123


Hahaha all thanks to u :*
I understand :)
Yeah, I am thinking to delete again...i am actually jealous cuz i love ur booty shake :P
Haha thnk u...ooopss no thnks ;)
Ohooo! I will just giv u a huggie nd kissy xo
Lmfaooo...i guess not :P
Ahhh... I hate tomatoes -_- 😛
Lol...that would be sooo romantic 😆
Keep guessing 😉 Btw, viren as an evil brother...acha hai naa? XD
Lol...he's such a brat :/
Zyada drama mat kar :P
No, m not 😊
Every1 can :D
Hawww...u will do this to me? :'(
Vahhh!! Longest nd biggest one :P
Thanksss :P :P
Both hv reached

hey intni mehnat laga ki tumse yeh post kiya, u better not delete!😊
too bad, u can't do that booty shake like me, sucks for u! Tongue
ikr, first meeting with vegetables, in a vegetable field, fall in love in between cucumbers and tomatoes, then they get married in a vegetable field, and then u know what happens next in the vegetable field!ROFL
yeah, so happy u made viren evil here, lol, hamesha woh ek angel hota hain, it's nice change, staright from angel to devil!😆
main konsa drama kari ho?😉
and everyone will only say ur an awesome writer!!!Star
yes, I will beat u exactly like that with a stick and some tomatoes and cucumbers from Virat's vegetable field, if u don't update this soon!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
awsomeee...!!! gr8..!!! loved it...
nyc concept...!!!
seems interesting...!!!
welldone...
n congratss for ur very first story...!
u really write very welll...
good job...
n em very excited...virat's entry..OMG..!!!
i enjoyed to the core...!!!
mindblowing part...
want nxt update very soonnn..!! eagerly waitng for nxt part...
love yea..
-anu aka rouza...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
part 1 look intersting
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
🤣

Originally posted by: beauty14

hey intni mehnat laga ki tumse yeh post kiya, u better not delete!😊
too bad, u can't do that booty shake like me, sucks for u! 😛
ikr, first meeting with vegetables, in a vegetable field, fall in love in between cucumbers and tomatoes, then they get married in a vegetable field, and then u know what happens next in the vegetable field!🤣
yeah, so happy u made viren evil here, lol, hamesha woh ek angel hota hain, it's nice change, staright from angel to devil!😆
main konsa drama kari ho?😉
and everyone will only say ur an awesome writer!!!⭐️
yes, I will beat u exactly like that with a stick and some tomatoes and cucumbers from Virat's vegetable field, if u don't update this soon!😃


Okay..I'll try to finish this asap😊
I can do sth else beter thn u 🤣
Besharam...m too innocent..what hppns later? xD
Yeah, lol
Lol, i jaise aap kahei...yeh stry bhi toh aapki hi mehre bani sei chal rahi hai 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Hey awesome people...thank you all so much for ur lovely comments...I am back with this ss...do read nd drop cmnts 😊
Part 1 (ii)
Virat is a very pleasant-looking young man, tall and straight eyed. Few circumstances have the power to ruffle his amiability, and his gentleness is striking. His father is sometimes deceived by his air of simplicity into thinking him a fool, but Virat is not always as slow as he seems. His fair hair is cut fashionably short. He carries a cucumber in his hand.

"I am here Father. Look. Twelve inches long, not a kink." Virat told his father.
" Did u hear me calling at you?" Vishal asked his son.

"Yes, indeed. I came at once"

"Two minutes ago u were down there! So sunk in a dream of bliss among the pea-sticks that u were deaf to roarings that have roused very pigeon on the seven towers of the castle. . .and I've strained my throat into the bargain!"

"Oh, I am sorry. I forgot everything when I'm busy. Did u want me?" He says as Visha glares at him.

"I said I'd cut this for the cook. . .from the hot-house. And some new peas. He's delighted with these special ones I've grown. They're really most exceptional." Virat continues.

"Will you hold your tongue?"

"Certainly, Father."

"When do u intend to stop. . .and start being a prince?"

Ok I'll just skip this father-son argument...Vishal will just ask Virat to get married.

"Marry?" Virat asked surprisingly.

"That's the very thing."

"Marry a woman?"

"I dont recommend anything else! Although my Great-aunt was a witch, she never taught you enough magic to make success of any union with the unlikely. U settle for a woman."

"Which one? Viren u say."

"Pooh, don't ask him! He'd be afraid to marry, for fear the lady would flinch his face-powder." King told Virat.

Viren remains silent.

"What about the Emperor's daughter?" Vishal asked Virat.

Virat looks startled then her smiles.

"Yes, Dad. That's the one." Virat answered.

"You're out of ur mind! She wouldnt evn luk at u!"

"Yet it is she I will marry, or none at all."

"You hv got nerve!" Vishal stated.

"For being the greatest Princess in the world, if she should choose to marry me it could hardly be for reason of my rank. . .but becuz she loved me."

"Ummm" Vishal couldn't speak as he was cut-off by Virat.

"Then what is her name?"

"Whose?" King asked

"Dad, the lady of my choice. The Emperor's daughter."

"Well, er. . .her name is Manvi." The King answered.

"Charming!" Virat thought as he smiles and moves towards the door.

"Where r u going? Come here! What r u up to now?" The King regains his voice.

"I shall send a gift to her with my greeting."

"She'll be furious. What will u send?"

"The rose that I grew from the seed ur Great-aunt gave me. The one rose that the tree bears, every year. It's slightly magic, and the scent drives all the sorrow from your heart, and makes u sing with joy. I shall send her crimson rose." Virat told to his father.

"You're mad!" Vishal tried to stop Virat.

"Don't bully me, Dad. I shall go out and think a message for Manvi. And remember. . .if she refuses me I shall stay single." Prince Virat grins triumphantly at his father and goes out quickly.
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"Don't bully him?? The young monkey! What are u yawning about? You look absurd." King Vishal stated to his younger son who was yawning.

"Such a tedious waste of time. Virat will expend enough energy to frow acres of exceptional vegetation before he composes a fitting message for the lady. And she will laugh at his impertinence." Viren laughed.

"And confound u for urs. Oblige me by ceasing to mock your brother. For all his faults, he's worth ten of u, u lazy, sly, cub! U're jealous of him n that's the truth. You'd be pleased to see him making fool of himself."

"It's a pleasure of which I am seldom deprived."

"Out of here with u! This minute, before you goad me into cuffing you! And don't dare to wave that dratted bit of lace at me! Run away and play!"

"Delighted to oblige u, my dear dad. And do take greater care of ur voice. It's getting quite inaudible." Viren says as he strolls out of the door, with another wave of the offending handkerchief to which his father glares.

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"Drat his airs and graces! And that Virat! He thinks he's cornered me. The Emperor's daughter or no one, eh? Cunning lad. He'll remain single and carefree. . .or win the unattainable. What a good thing thatbmy Great-aunt was a witch and taught me a thing or two. How lucky that I went to school with the Emperor." The King talks to himself.

Vishal crosses to the mantelpiece, on which two tall iron candlesticks, complete with snuffers, are standing. Carefully removing one of the candles and putting it down, he carries the candlesticks to centre. He bend the candle-holder forward to form a sort of mouthpiece, and unhooking the snuffer he lifts it to his ear. He rattles the snuffer-hook up and down, and a little bell tings as he does so. He candle-stick has become, quite suddenly and unmistakably, a telephone. (Great-aunt, remembered?)

"Hullu. . .hullo. . .E.M.P one. (A slight pause) Is that the Emperor? (Vishal grins widely) hullo, Butch. . .this Vishy. How's that girl of urs? Tt! Tt! Bad as ever? High time you got her off your hands, eh? (Pause) My boy, Virat? Well, listen, I think I've got him interested. . . ." Vishal nods several times, complacently.
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I can really say you guys won't really like my Virat as he's not those angry young man types, but sweet and calm one. And by now, u can estimate that King Vishal is not those of serious ones. It's a humble request from me to u all... plz plz plzzz give long comments about the updates. And silent readers, plz hit like if possible :) If u want pms plz send me a buddy req..it will be easier for me. :)
Thank you.
Byee.
Take care!
Edited by virman123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
RES!!!! 😉
THIS IS MY OFFICAL SPOT!!🤣
I already know the chapter will be mindblowing, so might as well say that before I even start reading the chapter!
OMG!! WHAT THE HELL SHOULD I SAY TO YOU GIRL?? LIKE UR SUCH AN FREAKING AMAZING WRITER! ⭐️
I HATE YOU SO MUCH!! ITNA ACCHA CHAPTER AND YOU SAY UR NOT GOOD AT WRITING! I WANT THE NEXT UPDATE LIKE NOWWW!!!! IT WAS SO FLIPPING GOOD THAT I CAN'T EVEN TELL U HOW GOOD IT WAS, THATS' JUST HOW AMZAING THE CHAPTER WAS!!😆
LUVED THE CHAPTER!!!❤️
if u continue to write like this, I will have to demand an update from u like every single day!!
loved the mix of humor u add to the chapter!!! 😃
and the entry of the hero, Prince Virat, was just awesome, and obviously all the credit goes to the cucumber!🤣
I think now a days, ever since I have read your story, my favorite vegetable's are cucumbers!😉
wah ji wah! the prince is already fida over the princess! kya pyar hain! sai kehta hai log, pyar sach much mein anda hain! 😳
let's see what destiny has in store for the lover boy???
LOL! I just like died of laughter when vishal was saying all that stuff to viren! luv how his dad even hates him! haha..he truly does belong with the onions!😈
kya baap hain vishal? setting his own son up? but someone needs to tell him that in this love story the gardner and the princess are destined to fall in luv!!
I am waiting for the scene until they meet in the vegetable field! u better not disappoint me Jennifer! 😛
U better update this soon, otherwise I seriously will have to steal some tomatoes from Virat's garden and throw them all the way from here!!😆
luv u lots!!!🤗
a big hug for u, prince virat style!! ( I had to, I couldn't resist)😆
update soon!!❤️
Edited by beauty14 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Awesome update
Loved it
Continue soon and thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
part 2 was nice he is sending his
marriage porpasal to her and he put
condition front of his father if she
refuse marriage him then he will stay single
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
wow yaar the story is awesome

i started jumping due to happiness when i understood that the princess is manvi

great story

continue soon excited for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
amazing update...loved the characters ...and their conversations...really interesting ff...nice work...continue soon...take care...

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