||Virman SS: Desparation, Anguish & Love||-part 1 - Page 16

Originally posted by: rida001

I loved it!!!!

Very good keep writing and thanks for this amazing superb SS pm!!!

Originally posted by: beauty14

ZABBYYY!!!!!😃😊

First for finally updating!!!!!!!!!!🥳

OMG! WHAT THE HELL SHOULD I SAY!

IT WAS AWESOMELY AMAZING!!!⭐️⭐️ (i know awesomly isn't a word, dont even say anything, just shutup and continue to read the rest of the comment!)

loved loved loved it!❤️

i am still sure that some one else must have written this! Who knew inside that little thing of your head, u call a brain, their was also some talent in there!😆😆

and ur calling me the promotor, khud toh ek writer and promoter hain, and then you tell me! lol!!🤣

but zabby honestly the way you expressed manvi's feelings about virat and her anger & sorrow was beautiful!😊

Maggie was so adorable, but it's so sad, how such an innocent little girl like her has cancer!😭

waiting for virat and manvi to meet!

want to see virat's reactions when he finds out about the fact that he has a daughter who is fighting cancer...

update soon nahin to get ready for your story to get spammed big time!!😃🤣

and update dominate desires too! 😛

kitna wait karoagi!😡

Originally posted by: zainab3

Nice story yaar.👍🏼...but I have to tell u must that your English is really excellent that u used in dominant desires really 👏

Originally posted by: shaalivirman

wow...tis is awsm...!!! fulllyyy emotional...waiting!!! continue sooonnn!!!!! 👏👍🏼❤️

Originally posted by: JESMY143VIRMAN

AWESOME

Originally posted by: deepika03

nice intro...sounds a bit like "we are family" lolz...bt ya kinda interesting...

Originally posted by: risingsea101

Aww babies are too cute

Tanveer from QH is her friend, aww

Nice part :)

Originally posted by: akap

Very nice continue soon and pm me..